MR PERFFECT BY ELTON SABASTIAN
2002
Created by colin 16 years ago
MR. PERFECT
Original Screenplay by
Elton Sebastian
WGA: 916840
FADE IN:
EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY - DAY
A stray tumbleweed rolls across the asphalt. The air thick,
hot, onerous, as a Red Chevy Camaro breaks through the
sweltering heat. Classic rock blares from the radio as the
Camaro blasts through the tumbleweed.
CAMARO
Tumbleweed bounces off the window as LAURA sits behind the
wheel. Mid thirties, a brunette, quite beautiful but doesn’t
put much time into her appearance. She wears a white lab
coat, white blouse. Glasses, no makeup, her hair in a bundle.
She sings along to the music. Her singing voice is awful.
DESERT HIGHWAY
A sign reads, ‘Route 66.’ The Camaro storms past whipping up
dust, it clears. The Camaro fades in the distant heat.
EXT. SKIN TECHS INC - DAY
Two U.S. Army Guards stand on either side of opening iron
gates. They wave Laura’s Camaro through. It follows a dust
driveway leading to a building in the distance.
HARRY (O.S.)
Left leg reflex.
LAURA (O.S.)
Check.
HARRY (O.S.)
Left arm reflex.
INT. OPERATION ROOM - DAY
Laura bends over a circuit board. She solders a connection.
In f.g. A featureless arm shoots up, no hairs, with joined
web-like fingers. Behind Laura, small group of Onlookers
applaud. Laura smiles at the creation.
LAURA
Check.
2.
The applause intensity increases over -
INT. SKIN TECHS INC - CONFERENCE ROOM - INTERCUT
At a long table similar to the pentagon, General JOHNSON, a
small but powerful man, stands before a large projector
screen. Decorative medals pinned on every surface of his
jacket. Seated on opposite sides of the table are important
looking government officials all applauding. The clapping
subsides.
JOHNSON
Four of America’s finest scientists are
working hard to develop this organic
being. This fighting machine.
He points his cane at a male stick figure on the large screen
behind him.
JOHNSON
A controllable man-made human, with the
intelligence of a thousand men’s minds,
made possible by Intel’s newest trillion
dollar Pentium quintuplet-processor.
SCREEN
A large computer pentagon-shaped chip flashes. The words
‘INTEL PENTIUM’ bold and bright.
JOHNSON
Our goal is to make prototype Woodford
look like a regular Joe, but equipped
with X-ray vision, super hearing, and
replaceable vital organs, fabricated in
this very lab.
SCREEN
A world map. Johnson walks past.
JOHNSON
These organisms will learn how to walk,
talk, and look like any ethnic group.
They will serve as spies for America,
infiltrating organizations and families
anywhere in the world.
3.
Johnson walks past the screen, as little male stick figures
replicate in Great Britain, Russia, Afghanistan, then cover
the map like a spreading virus. Clapping ensues.
INT. MAIN LAB - INTERCUT
Various stations, contraptions, gadgets, bubbling test tubes.
ERIC SHUN, JOHN WONG, and HARRY BUSH work hard looking at
nude centerfolds. Eric turns over the page.
ERIC
Hooah! Look at the legs on this one, eh?
They go right up to her ass.
The other two gawk at the model.
HARRY
Hey, you heard this one? What’s the
definition of a woman?
Eric and Wong shrug.
HARRY
Life support for the vagina.
They all laugh. Across from them sits Laura at her station.
She peers through glasses at a diagram of Da Vinci’s the
Renaissance Man where she pencils in complex algebraic
equations.
A series of photographs of her and FRANK LONG adorn the desk.
Frank has a regular build, unkempt hair, and paint splattered
overalls in all photos. Laura looks happy in the photos. A
large oil painting of Frank drapes her wall.
Harry, Wong, and Eric gather around the latest Maxim edition,
where they ogle a big centerfold of Jennifer Lopez. Her ass
takes up a whole page. A BUZZER RINGS and they look up.
MONITOR
JOHNSON and his aide, TOOGOOD, a sinewy man with spectacles
and a sinister mustache.
MAIN LAB
Harry, Eric, and Wong stuff magazines into a drawer full of
porno. They scuttle around, each putting on scientist’s lab
coats - their names labeled on the coats. They each check the
4.
names, then swap lab coats with each other.
Metallic door slides open. Harry, Eric and Wong make
themselves look busy by pretending to look at bubbling test
tubes and jotting notes on blank note pads.
JOHNSON
Nice to see all you boys hard at work.
Gentlemen I bring you good news.
In the back, Laura clears her throat.
JOHNSON
Uh yes, and you too, miss...
LAURA
Wilde...Laura Wilde?
Toogood passes him a folder. He opens it. It contains photo
of Laura and her credentials: M.I.T. Ten Years, P.H.D
Biological Engineering... psychology.
JOHNSON
Ah, yes, the robot psychologist...
(looks at the men)
The department has granted us an
extension and more funding. Prototype
Woodford will continue at full throttle.
Cheers from the guys. Johnson gets eye contact with Laura.
JOHNSON
Laura? Prototype Woodford’s learning and
education are in your hands. You will be
his teacher, a type of psychological wet
nurse if you will...
He whips out a sheet from the folder.
JOHNSON
After he learns to talk and walk like a
true American patriot, you will supervise
the pedunculopontine tegmental nucle...
(he closes the folder)
Will someone explain this in English to
me?
WONG
Yes sir, General, quite simple really. It
is a visual orientation process, where -
Johnson listens, his eye wonders...and quickly fills the
frame as a cartoon image superimposes over his retina.
5.
IMAGE
A male cardboard cutout figure sits in a cinema.
HARRY (V.O.)
Prototype Woodford will be placed in a
room like a cinema and shown for hours on
end, collections of instructional combat
and war audio-video DVDs.
Images feed directly into the head of the male cardboard
cutout figure. Among the images are tanks, attack planes, the
American flag, and President Jr. Bush.
ERIC (V.O.)
This is how he learns sir. All of his
combat, soldiering, and social skills
will be learned simply by viewing, eh -
MAIN LAB
JOHNSON
In other words, we’re sending him to the
talkies. And he’ll come out as the
perfect soldier and citizen?
WONG
Yes sir, General. Whatever he sees, he
learns, he incorporates into his system,
and he use it. The effects are quite
irreversible. Once he learn a behavior,
you cannot change it.
BUZZER RINGS, Johnson looks up.
MONITOR
Two Army Guards wear pink aprons. They push a cart containing
flowers and a bucket of ice. Metallic door opens.
MAIN LAB
JOHNSON
Today calls for a celebration. Everyone
is to leave early, go home, get some
rest, snuggle up to your loved ones.
Laura looks at Frank’s oil portrait draped on the wall.
6.
JOHNSON
Tomorrow we begin what no one else has
accomplished.
The General pops the cork off the champagne. Bubbly
explosion.
EXT. A DUSTY NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY
A sign reads: RACHEL HEIGHTS. There’s no grass in this
neighborhood, just six houses opposing each other in the
middle of a desert.
Laura's Camaro pulls up to one of the houses. She sees the
driveway blocked by two cars. A dalmation spotted Jeep and a
Pontiac Firebird. On the jeep a sign reads, ‘ Sharon Bush.’
Laura frowns.
She parks on the road and emerges with a stack of papers and
folders.
INT. FOYER - DAY
Laura enters a partially furnished home not yet settled in.
Strange art work adorn a few half painted walls.
She looks around. Quiet. She rests her keys on a table. Then
hears voices and what sounds like crying. She stares down the
long hallway and treads towards it...
HALLWAY
Laura pussyfoots across the tiled floor, looks in -
BEDROOM
Empty. Just a bed, more art work and half painted walls.
HALLWAY
She hears more crying. Laura continues towards the end of the
hall. A door is ajar - She approaches the door... Gropes the
door handle...
7.
DEN
Laura swings the door open, stands in the entrance, shocked.
Frank humps Sharon Bush, a mature blond bimbo from behind.
Startled, Frank pulls out of the bimbo and whips around -
White substance splatters over Laura’s face.
Frank stands there speechless. A tube of KY Jelly in his
hand. He nervously squeezes the tube spurting more white gel
over Sharon’s back.
FRANK
This is exactly what it looks like honey,
but I can explain...
LAURA
Can you? Frank. Can you?
FRANK
Well, I, uh...no.
Frank and Sharon are covered in paint. An empty canvas before
them.
EXT. DESERT HOME - DRIVEWAY - DAY
Laura throws two suitcases in to the trunk of her Camaro.
Frank behind her in a paint stained shirt. A lit cigarette in
his mouth.
FRANK
Baby talk to me, you’re so far away.
Laura glares at him. Then knocks him to the ground with a
swing of a suitcase. She takes off her engagement ring,
flings it at him.
LAURA
You’re scum, Frank. And you’re a lousy
painter.
Frank on the ground rubs his head.
FRANK
You don’t mean that, Honey. You’re just
angry is all. I’m a great painter.
Laura slams the overstuffed trunk. A shoe box falls out. She
walks to the open driver’s side.
8.
LAURA
Keep the house. And everything else.
She slams the door shut, peels off covering Frank in a cloud
of sand and dust. He looks down at the floor...The shoebox
lays open, its contents spilled out: photos, postcards, and
letters. He picks them up, puts them back into the shoebox.
He steps on another photo, stoops to pick it up -
PHOTO
A younger Laura hugs an older lady. Behind them is a log
cabin gift shop. Frank’s shoe print covers the top half.
INT. MAIN LAB - DAY
In the middle of laughter, Harry, Wong, and Eric dressed in
scientist’s lab coats spill coffee over themselves. Laura
enters. Her hair uncombed, clothes rumpled, bags under her
eyes. She ignores them, hoofs it to her station.
Eric looks at the guys, excited.
ERIC
Why did the female scientist cross the
road?
Harry clutches his side, red cheeks from laughing too much.
HARRY
I don’t know, tell me, tell me.
ERIC
To suck my cock.
They erupt into loud laughter. More coffee spills.
In one motion, Laura sweeps all the pictures of Frank into
the trash can.
ERIC
How many female scientists does it take
to change a light bulb?... Two. One to
change it... and one to suck my cock.
They are close to dying with laughter.
Laura rips Frank’s self portrait off the wall, dumps it into
the trash can. She passes by the guys still laughing, pauses
in front of Eric.
9.
LAURA
I’ve got one. Which sexual position leads
to giving birth to ugly children?
They all calm down. Eric shrugs.
LAURA
Ask your mother.
She courses for the exit.
ERIC
What’s her problem, eh?
INT. SKIN TECHS INC - CONFERENCE ROOM - DAY
JOHNSON sits at the far side of the table. Eric, Harry, and
Wong huddle together at the head, along with Laura.
Ridiculous distance separates Johnson from them. Next to him,
stands Toogood twiddling his mustache. Johnson rubs his hands
together.
JOHNSON
(Shouts across the table)
Today we reach our decision for the
prototype’s final design. What have you
got for me?
Eric, Wong, and Harry take out giant sketch pads. Toogood
foots it to the head of the table and picks up the sketch
pads. He foots it back to the General.
JOHNSON
It’s imperative that he look like an
average Joe. One that can disappear into
a crowd without drawing any attention. I
don’t want him to stick out like
Swarzenegger in a midget convention.
The General takes the sketches from Toogood, fixes on his
bifocals, peers at the drawings.
Flipping through each of them, he notices the designs
striking resemblances to WOODY ALLEN, GARY SHANDLING, and
AUNT JEMIMAH with a mustache.
JOHNSON
No, no, no, this isn't what I asked for!
We’re not spending our country’s deficit
on a machine that won’t even get laid. He
has to look normal and attractive to the
opposite sex. Is this all you’ve got?
10.
Harry and Eric stare blankly. Wong strolls confidently over
to Johnson.
WONG
Yes sir.
Laura sees him reveal the painting, Frank’s painting, the one
she dumped. She stands.
LAURA
Hey wait, General, you can’t...
HARRY
(Whispers)
Shush woman.
ERIC
It’s just a stupid painting.
LAURA
Sir?
JOHNSON
(captivated by the painting)
Now then, this here looks like an average
shmuck. Perfect. Exactly what I wanted.
LAURA
Sir?
Eric throws a pencil at her. She rushes past them. They grab
her.
JOHNSON
(Takes off his glasses)
This is very good. You should have been
an artist Dr. Wong.
Eric and Harry pin Laura to the table. She elbows Harry,
knees Eric.
JOHNSON
I want all of you to start immediately.
What’s going on over there?
They let her go, their stares cold.
LAURA
Sir, the man in that painting is -
JOHNSON
Yes?
11.
The General glares at her. Harry, Wong, and Eric glare at her
too.
LAURA
...Is... nobody.
(She slumps)
JOHNSON
Nobody. That’s perfect, exactly what
we’re looking for. Otherwise, we’d have
to kill somebody.
Harry and Eric pat her shoulder, beaming ear to ear. Laura
grimaces.
INT. OPERATION ROOM - DAY
A colossal yellow liquid-filled, glass cylinder dominates the
room. Harry, Eric, and Wong stand before a large computer
screen.
SCREEN
The name ‘Prototype Woodford’ flashes. Da Vinci’s The
Renaissance Man rotates in full 3-D except that its features
and physique have been replaced with Frank’s from the oil
painting.
OPERATION ROOM
The glass cylinder empties of the yellow liquid. As the water
level decreases, a full grown naked man - prototype WOODFORD -
is left within. Eyes closed, inanimate. The top of the
cylinder slides open, and a robotic arm slices the top of
Woodford’s head open.
Behind a glass partition, Laura flinches, operates a
joystick. She watches in awe as a brain quivers and glows as
it lowers on another robotic arm into the head.
The word ‘INTEL’ glows through the brain’s thin tissue. Laura
guides the robotic arm, biting her lip, as the top of
Woodford’s head is replaced.
She presses the joystick’s fire button. A laser beam seals
the head shut. A spray of mist makes the scar disappear.
Laura perspires and sighs a breath of relief.
Harry, Eric, and Wong stare expectantly at Woodford.
12.
Laura narrows her eyes, clenches her jaw muscle, and pulls
down three levers.
Charges of electricity shoot through and around the glass
cylinder. Waves upon waves of energy. Woodford convulses. His
body bounces like rubber within the cylinder. The ceiling
becomes a spider web of electricity. Overhead fluorescent and
work lights explode. Chaos!
The power goes. Darkness. The electric crackle dies. All is
quiet. Emergency backup lights turn on. Harry, Eric, and Wong
hold each other tight on the floor, trembling, papers strewn
everywhere. Laura raises her head up and peeks at Woodford.
Woodford’s eyes open. The theme tune from INTEL plays. He
looks around, the lights hurt his sensitive eyes. He screams.
Harry, Eric, and Wong scream too.
INT. LAB - DAY
Woodford feebly grabs two handrails, his limbs move like
Jello. Six feet away stands Laura at the opposite side.
LAURA
You can do it. Come to me.
Woodford takes a baby step forward, takes another, then
another. He giggles and gurgles like a baby, lets go of the
handrails, and collapses. He lays twisted on the floor.
WOODFORD
Pain.
INT. EXAMINATION ROOM - DAY
Woodford sits with a bib in an adult baby chair. Laura spoon
feeds him baby food. He dribbles. She wipes his mouth. He
accidentally knocks the baby food on the floor, and smiles
apologetically.
INT. LAB - DAY
An orange, blue flame flickers. Laura holds a Zippo lighter.
Woodford gawks at the bright light. He reaches out, touches
it. And yelps, retracts his hand. He stares at Laura
suspiciously.
13.
INT. EXAMINATION ROOM - DAY
Blindfolded, Woodford, sits on the edge of the examining
chair. Laura holds up a sack. Woodford, his limbs more
skilled more athletic, dips his hand into the sack. He pulls
out a banana, feels it.
WOODFORD
Banana.
LAURA
Very good.
Woodford peels the banana and devours it. He dips into the
sack, pulls out a cucumber, feels it.
WOODFORD
(mouth Full)
Cucumber.
He crams a mouthful, dips into the sack once more. Laura
beams with pride as he pulls out a giant salami, touches it.
WOODFORD
Suspicious sausage.
He sniffs it and nibbles. Laura laughs. She pulls out the
Zippo lighter and flicks it on.
WOODFORD
Fire. Dangerous.
He curls his fingers around Laura’s, lifts his blindfold, and
stares at the burning intensity, fascinated.
INT. LAB - NIGHT
Test tubes bubble. A bed table lamp lights up a dumb smile on
Woodford’s face as he lies on his bed in elephant stamped
pyjamas. Laura sits on the edge with a poetry book. In b.g.
Harry, Eric, and Wong toss inflated condoms between each
other.
LAURA
Nought loves another as itself. Nor
venerates another so. Nor is it possible
to though. A greater than itself to
know...
14.
INT. EXAMINATION ROOM - DAY
Woodford sits on the edge of the operating table. A series of
wires and suction caps on his chest connect him to a machine.
Laura bends over, knocks his knee with a gavel, tests his
reflexes. His leg responds. Woodford looks down at his
chest.
WOODFORD
Laura?
LAURA
Yes Woodford?
WOODFORD
Why do you have two great mounds, and I
do not?
LAURA
What do you mean?
Woodford pokes his chest.
LAURA
Oh. They’re called breasts. Most women
have them. You are a man.
WOODFORD
Can I feel them?
He reaches out to grab them.
LAURA
No, you mustn’t do that. It’s
disrespectful to women, to... touch their
breasts...
Woodford sulks.
LAURA
Unless you have their permission.
Woodford beams like a child.
WOODFORD
Do I have your permission?
LAURA
No, it’s not that easy. You must pay
women many compliments before you can
feel their breasts.
15.
Laura places a stethoscope on his chest, listens.
WOODFORD
What is...Compliments?
LAURA
Compliments is something dear and sweet
you say to another to make them feel
important.
WOODFORD
You are important Laura. I very much
enjoy your presence.
LAURA
Well done. See? Those are compliments.
WOODFORD
They are?
Laura nods her head, blushes.
WOODFORD
May I feel your breasts then?
LAURA
Oh Woodford. You are so silly.
(She laughs)
EXT. SKIN TECHS INC. - DAY
Clouds sweep briskly across the skies, their swarthy texture
darkens the vast blue void over the desert. The sky lightens
with a flash, and a bolt of lightning shoots up, spreading
into a network of crackling light. The clouds burst into a
downpour of rain, like a piñata struck by a stick.
MAIN LAB
Woodford sits on his bed. His head cocked to one side
listening, his mind somewhere else. Laura on the edge,
closes a book of art, leans towards him.
LAURA
What are you thinking?
WOODFORD
Nothing...Just listening. I hear a
tremendous rumble and pattering. Far
away, beyond the cement barriers.
16.
Laura ponders this, grabs his hand, and hoists him off the
bed.
LOBBY
SKINNY GUARD sits in his chair gazing at the rain streaking
across the glass entrance.
Laura strides with Woodford, dressed in a lab coat,
bespectacled, looking like a scientist. Laura nods to the
guard, and then walks out the front door with Woodford.
PARKING LOT
Woodford happy, rain streams down his cheeks. He tastes the
rain on his tongue. He laughs, holds Laura’s hands. Laura
smiles at how happy Woodford is. Skin visible through sopping
clothes, Woodford pulls her close to him, listens to the
rain.
WOODFORD
The world is so beautiful, even more so
with you in it, Laura.
He delicately clears soaking clumps of hair from her face.
She looks up at him, the rain veins down her cheeks as if she
cries.
INT. JOHNSON’S OFFICE - DAY
Johnson sits on his desk, peels a tangerine. Toogood stands
beside him, receives the peel. Laura sits below Johnson’s eye
line.
LAURA
I can’t give him a proper education
locked up in a lab. He needs a real world
experience.
JOHNSON
Yes, but what you did was sneaky... Any
decisions regarding outside endeavors
will be ran through me. Understand?
(She nods)
Dismissed.
Laura squirms out of the chair, exits.
JOHNSON
(off Laura exiting)
Keep an eye on that one.
17.
INT. PROJECTION BOOTH - DAY
Stereo equipment, DVD players and VCR’s fill the room.
Toogood enters, sets a cardboard box next to Laura. She opens
it.
TOOGOOD
These are the instructional DVD’s.
Laura pulls out some of the DVD’s, leafs through the titles:
HOT-WIRE ANY CAR, HAND TO HAND COMBAT, PRESSURE POINTS OF
DEATH, KILLING FOR YOUR COUNTRY.
TOOGOOD
The General expects the prototype to go
through all of this material by tomorrow.
AUDIO-VISUAL ROOM
In the gloomy atmosphere, Woodford sits silent in front of a
large screen, around his head are strapped what look like
brown, leather horse blinkers.
PROJECTION BOOTH
Laura views the DVD titled, “KILLING FOR YOUR COUNTRY.” She
loads it into the deck. HEAVY METAL MUSIC plays.
SCREEN
Military Man demonstrates uppercut on Terrorist. Terrorist
falls to the ground. Military Man kicks his skull in.
AUDIO - VISUAL ROOM
Woodford flinches. In b.g. Toogood and Laura observe him.
PROJECTION BOOTH
Laura jitters with unease. Toogood smiles smugly then leaves
the room. Laura ejects the DVD. She discards it into the box,
pushes it aside. She looks through the portal, sees Woodford
alone.
18.
SCREEN
Channels change. Images flash. Channel stops on a nature
channel. Images of trees, water, lakes. SWEET BACKGROUND
MUSIC plays.
AUDIO - VISUAL ROOM
A dumb smile spreads on Woodford’s face, as he relaxes in his
chair.
SCREEN
Three bald baby birds chirp in a nest. Mother Bird lands and
regurgitates a worm into baby bird’s mouth. It gobbles it up.
AUDIO - VISUAL ROOM
Woodford watches, wide-eyed, delighted.
PROJECTION BOOTH
Laura loads another DVD.
SCREEN
Hollywood Musical: GENE KELLEY SINGS, tap dances in a village
with red rooftops.
AUDIO - VISUAL ROOM
Woodford loves this. Laura emerges from the projection booth
behind, smiles, places a hand on Woodford’s shoulder. He
looks up. Laura takes the horse blinkers off his head.
SCREEN
Final scene from NOTTING HILL. Julia Roberts kisses Hugh
Grant.
AUDIO - VISUAL ROOM
A tear swells up on Woodford. It rolls down his cheek. He
holds a bag of popcorn and munches with his mouth open.
19.
Next to him sits Laura. She grabs his arm, nestles her face
on his shoulder. She cries too.
INT. OPERATION ROOM - DAY
Laura and Woodford sit on the operating table. A huge mirror
behind them overlooks the room. She flips over pages of Rene
Magritte paintings from a book.
OBSERVATION ROOM - INTERCUT
Johnson observes through the one-way mirror. Beside him, sits
Wong, earphones on his head.
JOHNSON
What is she doing?
WONG
Today, General, sir, she teach him
culture and social skills. Yesterday she
teach him all combat skills, firearm
assembly and firing skills in the audiovisual
room.
INSTRUCTION ROOM - INTERCUT
Laura holds up a picture of a Rene Magritte painting.
LAURA
Note the differences of color, shading,
texture, and brightness distinguishing
objects from their environment.
Woodford observes the painting.
WOODFORD
Yes, the extraordinary juxtaposition of
ordinary objects give new meaning to
familiar things. It’s magic, Laura.
OBSERVATION ROOM - INTERCUT
Johnson grunts, takes off the headphones.
JOHNSON
Yes, well, that’s all sissy stuff. We
will see how he does in the field.
20.
INSTRUCTION ROOM - INTERCUT
Laura opens another book. A wonderful rainbow arches over a
cottage reflected in a lake. Woodford touches it.
WOODFORD
What is at the end of a rainbow?
LAURA
A pot of gold... I really don’t know. No
one has reached the end. But we think
it's there so we keep trying.
WOODFORD
You are my pot of gold, Laura.
Woodford touches her hair, shakes it loose around her
shoulders.
WOODFORD
You look much prettier that way.
Her face flushes. Metal doors open. Enter Johnson and
Toogood. Laura embarrassingly ties her hair back.
WOODFORD
Good afternoon, General.
JOHNSON
Good job, well done. Respect. I like
that. That will be all Laura, dismissed.
Prototype Woodford will begin his
physical training 0800 hours.
JOHNSON
(To Toogood)
Escort Prototype Woodford to G block.
Toogood opens the door. Outside, Eric and Harry sword fight
with phallic balloon swords. Toogood leads Woodford out. He
turns, the last Woodford focuses on are Laura’s eyes as the
metal door shuts.
INT. TENT - DAY
Before a black chalk board, stand Johnson and Colonel
RICHMOND, a big man with a bushy mustache. He chews a wad of
tobacco. On the chalk board someone has drawn a cruel
caricature of Johnson. A few uniformed soldiers sit around at
a table, snickering.
21.
RICHMOND
Three physical tests have been designed
by our best, General, to test Prototype
Woodford’s hearing, vision, and combat
skills. I personally handpicked ten of my
best men to defeat your weapon in the
first round.
Johnson taps his cane on the table.
JOHNSON
This is America’s ultimate fighting
machine, you’ll need ten thousand of your
best men Colonel.
RICHMOND flashes his tobacco stained teeth, spits at the dust
ground.
EXT. WOODS - DAY
Woodford emerges from some bushes, a camouflage netted Kevlar
helmet on his head, army fatigues, and black paint on his
face.
RICHMOND (V.O)
Your mission is to locate the enemy radio
post somewhere in this vicinity and
destroy it. You have ten minutes. Watch
out for enemy fire.
Woodford jogs into the woods, carrying an assault rifle.
Sun shoots through trees, hits the foot of a birch tree where
Woodford drops his assault rifle on the ground, and stoops
down to observe a hummingbird suck the nectar out of wild
fuchsia. The hummingbird leaves, and Woodford plucks a
fuchsia, gently covers it’s orange petals in a cloth, stores
it in his jacket.
He hears a twig snap. His head spins. A hundred yards away,
he sees a figure crouch behind a tree. He cocks his head, and
a distant chirping, the sound of a bird increases in
intensity. He stands -
A paint ball splatters on the tree beside him. The chirping
becomes louder. Woodford abandons his weapon, runs into the
tree line - jumps dead wood - jumps fallen branches.
A paint ball explodes on his chest. He keeps running. A
figure appears ahead of him. It aims a weapon.
22.
Another ball of paint splatters over Woodford’s stomach. He
keeps running, dodges the soldier, who continues to shoot at
him. Paint balls explode all over Woodford’s back. Five
soldiers chase him, firing more paint balls.
Covered in paint, Woodford reaches the base of a large oak
tree. He digs at the earth like a dog looking for a bone.
The top of the tree disappears into mist. Woodford climbs up
like he was Spiderman. Soldiers surround the base of the tree
scratching their heads, confused.
TREE BRANCH
Mist clears to reveal a nest and a pink hairless bird that
chirps. Its mouth opens wide. Woodford’s head pops out from
the mist behind the nest. He regurgitates a worm and feeds it
to the hungry bird. The bird gobbles it up.
OAK TREE
At the bottom, Johnson, Richmond, and all ten Soldiers gather
around.
JOHNSON
What the -? It’s been 45 minutes. Where
is prototype Woodford?
SOLDIER
He’s up that tree sir.
Soldier points at the tree disappearing into the mist.
JOHNSON
What’s he doing up there?
Soldier shrugs.
INT. BUILDING - DAY
Woodford in bomb squad outfit and gas mask, rushes up a
flight of stairs.
RICHMOND (V.O.)
You have five minutes to find a bomb
planted within this building, and
deactivate it.
Woodford pauses, scans through a wall: The wall disappears
and he sees People typing and filing.
23.
People’s clothes disappear. Then their skin vanishes. The
room is full of skeletons and infrastructure.
STAIRWAY
Woodford rushes up another flight of stairs. He pauses again,
scans through another wall. The wall disappears: His eyes
zoom into a close up of an obvious bomb: two sticks of
dynamite and a clock with two minutes left and ticking.
ROOM
Woodford kicks through the door. In f.g. The bomb ticks
away.
His ear twitches. He cocks his head, scans through another
wall.
The wall disappears: He sees a vending machine. The cover
vanishes. He sees a coke can. The coke can vanishes. Inside
is the real bomb: A stop watch displays one minute left. It
counts down.
Woodford dashes towards it then stops. He scans across from
the Coke vending machine to a painting on the wall. His eyes
zoom into a Rene Magritte painting, where a giant apple fills
a room.
The stop watch counts down: Three, two, one...
Johnson and Richmond enter. From their point of view, it
looks like Woodford’s staring at a blank wall.
JOHNSON
What the - ?
WOODFORD
Come in sir. Look at this. It’s
fascinating. A serious attempt to
demonstrate the multifaceted character of
perceived reality.
Johnson and Richmond stand on either side of Woodford
squinting to see whatever he’s looking at.
EXT. MILITARY PROP VILLAGE - DAY
A row of prop homes border each side of a sandy road.
Civilians and Soldiers walk around. Among them, in the
sweltering heat, Woodford swigs water out of his canteen.
24.
RICHMOND (V.O.)
In this village, hiding among the
civilians, are three Afghani terrorists.
You must identify them and disarm them.
Woodford holsters his canteen and scans through the
Civilians, scans through to their underwear. The whole
village walks in their undergarments.
JOHNSON (V.O.)
This is your last chance, Woodford.
Woodford turns to see an enraged Johnson standing in nothing
but bright red panties. Angry, Johnson waves his cane.
Woodford watches a flock of birds fly over the prop houses.
He fixates on the fake roofs of the houses. The birds land on
red rooftops...
MUSIC PLAYS. It gets louder and louder...
SCREEN - FLASH CUT
Gene Kelley tap dances and sings. Behind him are houses with
red rooftops. Birds fly. Gene Kelley’s voice carries over...
VILLAGE - DAY
Woodford tap dances and sings in the street. He sweats. His
clothes drenched yet he tap dances and sings, doing the worst
impression ever of Gene Kelley. The whole village dances too,
becoming a full scale Hollywood Musical.
Two Arabs armed with machine guns and turbans on their heads
do the can-can. Johnson in his bright red panties and
Richmond in tight yellow briefs join together in a ballet.
EXT. MILITARY PROP VILLAGE - BACK TO SCENE
The crowd gathers around and watches Woodford tap dancing and
singing like a crazy man. Johnson grips his cane, his
knuckles turn white and he snaps the cane in two.
INT. SKIN TECHS INC - OBSERVATION ROOM - DAY
Woodford sits on the end of the examining bed. He places the
bright orange fuchsia in Laura’s breast pocket.
WOODFORD
When I saw it, I thought of you.
25.
She smiles, flashes an eye light in his eye. A distant voice
increases in volume. Woodford stares at the mirror in front
of him, focuses his x-ray vision.
The mirror disappears: Eric, Harry, and Johnson stand in
their underwear arguing with each other. Then their clothes
disappear.
JOHNSON
Billions of dollars wasted! For a tap
dancing pansy? If word gets out, this
project is a failure, this unit is
finished.
HARRY
Sir, I assure you. This is just some
temporary glitch. We can fix it -
ERIC
Hey, ok eh! All we need to do is erase
his memory banks and create them again
from scratch. In short, he’ll be
terminated.
Woodford jumps up, his x-ray vision shifts towards Laura.
WOODFORD
Terminate, cease to exist, meet my maker,
knock off...death.
LAURA
What’s wrong?
WOODFORD
They are going to terminate me. I can
hear them.
Laura grasps his hand.
LAURA
(Off mirror to Woodford)
Are you sure?
WOODFORD
Please Laura. Take me away. I don’t want
to die, I want to live.
LAURA
I can’t, they will hunt us down. We will
always be running.
26.
WOODFORD
I-I’ve fallen in love with you. You have
taught me about life, about beauty, about
companionship. Without you, I am but an
empty canvas. Please...
Stunned, Laura grasps his hand. Metallic door opens. Enter
Johnson and his entourage.
PROJECTION BOOTH - DAY
Harry, Eric, and Johnson, stand among the stereos and
electronics. Johnson raises his eyebrows at Harry.
JOHNSON
Where did it all go wrong?
Johnson looks around, walks over to the box of military
DVD’s, picks one out titled: ‘Military Intelligence ’ and
scoffs. He opens it. Inside is a GENE KELLEY DVD. He glares
at it. Harry takes it from him and loads it in the DVD
player.
Johnson rapidly opens the covers of more DVD’s - NATIONAL
GEOGRAPHIC - THE BRIDGES OF MADISON COUNTY - THE SOUND OF
MUSIC - TITANIC
His neck muscles clench. He looks at the projection screen.
SCREEN
Gene Kelley dances in a village of red rooftops. Birds fly.
PROJECTION BOOTH
Johnson picks up the box of DVD’s, throws them to the floor.
He kicks the box repeatedly.
INT. LAB - DAY
Woodford sits execution style on a chair. Harry, Wong, and
Eric pull straps around him tighter.
WOODFORD
Laura, help me. Help!
Woodford watches Laura. She stands back helpless. Johnson and
Toogood watch. Woodford wriggles and strains against the
bonds.
27.
ERIC
Eh, okay, calm down. It’s a painless
procedure. You will just feel a little
tickle in your temple.
Laura collects her belongings on her desk, places them into a
cardboard box. She wears her long, white lab coat.
Harry duck tapes Woodford’s mouth. Eric holds up a futuristic
looking staple gun.
JOHNSON
What is that?
ERIC
This here is a photon gun. It annihilates
all neural connections in the prototype’s
machine brain. We just refurbish the
brain and start again.
Eric points the gun at Woodford’s head. Woodford stares at
the gun nervously. His lip quivers. Laura closes her eyes.
LAURA
Wait!
Eric halts. Johnson eyeballs her.
LAURA
He’s my creation, my mistake. Let me do
it.
JOHNSON
Yes. I like that idea.
(To Eric)
Doctor Shun? Give her the gun.
Woodford screams under the duck tape. Eric gives Laura the
gun. She holds it at her side.
JOHNSON
The next prototype will strictly be
trained to be a fighting machine.
Laura raises the photon gun, hesitates. Johnson, Harry,
Toogood, Eric and Wong look on...Laura squeezes the trigger.
An electric release emerges from the tip and wraps around
Woodford’s head. A high pitched scream of agony. His head
stiffens, bops, jerks.
Johnson and Toogood watch, horrified at the exaggerated
movements. Harry and Eric stand back... Woodford’s head hangs
lifelessly.
28.
...Woodford comes back to life, squeals. Laura shoots him
again with the photon. Everyone watches in shock. This time
Woodford is definitely gone.
Eric prods the body and flinches, expecting it to move, but
it doesn’t. Harry releases the binds around Woodford. And
Wong wheels over a gurney. The three throw Woodford’s body on
top. They wheel him out. Laura slumps. Silence.
JOHNSON
That was...something.
INT. OPERATION ROOM - DAY
Woodford’s body lays on the gurney. A sheet draped over him.
Laura enters, approaches him. She peels back the sheet,
places smelling salts under his nose. Woodford bolts upright,
yowls. Laura digs at the corners of the duck tape.
LAURA
Quiet.
She rips the tape off. He yips, rubs his mouth.
WOODFORD
I thought you killed me.
Laura reaches into her lab coat, pulls out of her pocket -
two identical photon guns.
LAURA
I switched them. This one was just a stun
gun, you big baby.
Woodford throws his arms around her, hugs her tightly.
HALLWAY
Doors on each side. Wheels squeak over the white ceramic
floor, as Laura pushes a sheet covered cart down the aisle.
Woodford pokes his head from beneath.
WOODFORD
Quickly, they are coming!
He hides again. Laura glides across the tiled floor,
disappears around the corner of the hallway as - b.g. Door
opens. Johnson sticks his half cane under his arm, marches
between Harry, Eric, and Wong.
29.
ELEVATOR
The wall serves as a screen partition. Johnson, Harry, Eric,
and Wong march down the hallway on the right hand side, while
on the left, Laura jabs repeatedly at the elevator button.
The floor numbers decrease to minus 4. Laura bites her lip.
The men are closer...Woodford pokes his head out -
WOODFORD
Hurry!
The General and company approach the corner... Any second now
and Laura’s caught. The elevator door opens. Woodford hides
back in the sheets as Laura hauls the cart inside. The doors
close... Johnson and company walk past.
LOBBY
Elevator doors open. Laura pushes the cart out towards SKINNY
GUARD seated behind a counter at the glass door entrance.
Beyond is the parking lot and desert.
SKINNY
Excuse me, where are you taking that
cart?
LAURA
Outside.
Skinny gets off his chair, approaches the cart.
SKINNY
I have to inspect anything leaving.
He lifts the sheet... Woodford gives him an upper cut that
whacks Skinny against the counter. Skinny slumps to the
floor.
LAURA
Oh my God!
Woodford gets out of the cart, kicks Skinny in the head.
Woodford innocently turns to Laura.
WOODFORD
It just seemed natural.
Laura grabs his hand. The two sprint out.
30.
INT. OPERATION ROOM - INTERCUT
Johnson, Harry, Eric, and Wong stare at the empty gurney, at
the two photon guns. Johnson tosses the gurney and photons
against the wall.
INT. LAB - DAY
In b.g. Light flashes. Metal grinds. Wong and Eric assemble a
few contraptions. In f.g. Harry taps on a computer keyboard.
Johnson stands before a large computer screen. Toogood beside
him.
SCREEN
A digital map of Nevada. A glowing red circle navigates
slowly across.
LAB
Harry turns to face Johnson.
HARRY
Are you sure you want me to do this?
JOHNSON
Yes.
Harry presses the F-10 key.
SCREEN
The internal anatomy of a brain in 3-D.
COMPUTER(O.S.)
MC4R Virus uploaded. MC4R Virus uploaded.
The brain swivels, zooms to a small area which glows. The
letters ‘MC4R’ flash.
HARRY (O.S.)
The virus mutates a gene known as the
melanocortin-4 receptor - MC4R. This gene
controls the appetite function on the
brain’s hunger control region.
31.
SCREEN
A male diagram eats through a food pyramid chart. Meat,
yogurt, fish, cereals.
HARRY (O.S.)
The MC4R gene in Woodford, will commence
producing little protein and within a few
days, no protein at all.
LAB
Johnson looks confused. Toogood twiddles his mustache.
JOHNSON
So, what happens now? In English.
HARRY
He’ll binge eat until the gene ceases to
function. In five days he’ll be dead.
Unfortunately, the death triggers a
destruction mechanism. So he’ll explode
too.
SCREEN
The male diagram devours the food pyramid. Crosses appear
over its eyes. It collapses then spontaneously combusts.
LAB
Johnson looks concerned. Behind him, Toogood picks his nose.
JOHNSON
Is there an antidote?
HARRY
If we can retrieve Woodford before death,
I can reverse the gene, yes.
Johnson turns, a green booger lands on his nose. Toogood
flinches. The booger sticks to Johnson’s nose.
JOHNSON
Get me special Agents Dick Gozinia and
Wayne Kerr... And get this off me, you
dirty little bitch!
Johnson glares down at the booger.
32.
EXT. DESERT COMPLEX - PARKING LOT - DAY
A black Nissan Maxima screams into the lot. The driver, Agent
DICK GOZINIA emerges. An unlit cigarette dangles from his
mouth. His face a mass of wrinkles from age and stress. His
chest pumped out like a barrel. Don’t mess with me, his
attitude says.
From the passenger side, emerges Agent WAYNE KERR. A face as
smooth as a baby’s ass. He’s thin and strides confidently.
Time or danger has not touched his boyish features.
INT. LAB - DAY
Light sparks, machines whir. Harry, Wong, and Eric scuttle
back and forth. Harry pauses in front of Gozinia, passes
Gozinia a laptop computer, flicks the LCD screen up. Kerr
standing beside him peeks at the computer.
HARRY
The prototype has a tracking device
implanted deep in his belly button. This
laptop connects you to my mainframe via
satellite. It will track the prototype to
a 20 meter radius.
Gozinia sees a digital map of Nevada on the LCD screen. An
orange blip slowly moves west.
HARRY
Woodford will beep when you are close. He
has platinum electrodes used as cochlea
replacements in his ears. The frequencies
will hurt his hearing and temporarily
incapacitate him.
Kerr picks up a small container and opens it. A warm orange
glow washes over his face. Wong shuts the container.
WONG
Those are specially fabricated .338
lapuas, designed for your Accuracy
International Super Magnum. You target
the prototype’s head. The glowing gel
expels inside preserving the brain yet
shutting down all other body function.
Gozinia picks up another container and opens it, out pops a
jack in the box, makes him yip. He looks up embarrassed.
33.
ERIC
Sorry, just a bit of lab humor.
Gozinia shoots him a cold glare.
EXT. MOTEL - NIGHT
A quiet one-story structure. The neon sign flickers, buzzes
on: POPPA WOODY’S MOTEL. A few cars parked outside. Among
them Laura’s Camaro. It sits beside a highway that curves
through an endless patch of sand that stretches into the
distant red sunset.
INT. MOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
A Dim table lamp. Beyond...darkness. Two figures outlined. A
Zippo lighter’s flint sparks. A flame ignites and spreads to
the wick of a candle. A warm glow spreads out to reveal...
Woodford. He explores Laura’s naked body with the light of
the candle. Laura stretches on the bed, arches her back as
Woodford caresses her body with his finger tips. His hand
brushes her face. She smiles. He sets the candle on the
bedside table. And mounts her.
The bed squeaks. The headrest knocks against the wall. Laura
claws Woodford’s back. Her toes stretch. Her legs squeeze
around him.
A bible falls off the bedside table, followed by the lamp. It
shatters.
INT. ADJOINING ROOM - INTERCUT
OLD COUPLE sit up in bed. TV light flickers on their faces. A
painting on the wall above them falls off its hook.
LAURA (O.S.)
Oh Woodford, Woodford. My Woody!
The wall behind them thumps. They look at each other.
LAURA’S ROOM - INTERCUT
The head board whacks against the wall. The bed squeaks.
Laura’s head bobs up and down on the pillow. She’s drenched
in sweat.
34.
LAURA
Stop. Stop. Let me get something to
drink.
Woodford on top, puffing, sweaty also, stops. The bed
creaking continues. The wall behind them thumps.
OLD WOMEN (O.S)
Oh Sherman! Ohhh!
OLD MAN (O.S.)
Who’s your Granddaddy!? Who’s your
Granddaddy!?
Woodford and Laura stare at the wall.
EXT. POPPA WOODY’S MOTEL - NIGHT
In the distant desolate night, a pair of light beams cut
through darkness. A black Nissan Maxima approaches.
INT. MOTEL ROOM - INTERCUT
Laura sits on the bed’s edge, sips a coke. She passes it to
Woodford who gulps it down. Then LOUD BEEPING causes Woodford
to drop the coke.
WOODFORD
Laura! Help me! Pain.
(beeping continues)
LAURA
Where is it coming from?
Woodford looks at his belly.
WOODFORD
(He pats his stomach)
It is inside. Stop the noise.
He covers his ears. She puts pillows on top of his stomach.
The volume decreases but Woodford still cries.
WOODFORD
Pain, pain!
35.
EXT. MOTEL ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Laura opens the door. Beeping continues. She closes the door
behind her, sees Gozinia and Kerr enter the lobby. She ducks
back into the room.
INT. LOBBY - INTERCUT
Kerr violently presses the service bell. Gozinia, a cigarette
in his mouth, spins the open check-in book to face him. His
fingers trace the last couple of check-ins, sees only one:
Room 12.
They hear BEEPING, loud, like a burglar alarm. They rush for
the door at the same time, hit the screen door.
LOBBY DOOR - CONTINUOUS
They tear through the screen door. It rips - crashes to the
floor. Gozinia trips, Kerr leaps.
CAMARO
Woodford covers his ears. Blood seeps through his fingers.
The engine fires up, revs. Laura stamps on the clutch -
shifts the gear to reverse - sees Kerr in the rear view
mirror.
PARKING LOT - INTERCUT
Kerr aims his pistol at the back of Laura’s chair. Laura
floors the accelerator - The Camaro rockets backwards, tires
tear at the asphalt.
KERR
Say cheese.
CAMARO
Time slows as the bullet rips through the rear glass, zips
past Laura’s head, and exits the wind screen.
PARKING LOT
The Camaro knocks Kerr back ten feet - screeches to a halt.
The exhaust pipe stops inches from Kerr’s face.
36.
The engine revs... The wheels skid...The car blasts out of
there leaving Kerr coughing in a billow of dust and smoke.
Gozinia approaches Kerr on the floor. His suit tattered.
GOZINIA
No time to take a rest.
Kerr raises on his elbow and slips. He glares at Gozinia.
INT. CAMARO - NIGHT
Laura and Woodford head out on a desolate highway. The
speedometer reads 90m/h. Beeping has stopped; Woodford
massages his ear holes.
LAURA
We have to take that out of you.
WOODFORD
More pain?
LAURA
Yes, more -
Headlights flash in the rear view mirror. Woodford BEEPS
again. He covers his ears, screams.
The Nissan closes in. She accelerates to 100 m/h. - glances
at Woodford, covering his ears, screaming - Blood spurts
through his fingers.
LAURA
On the back seat there’s my purse, get
it.
Woodford, hurting, bleeding, gets the purse.
LAURA
Inside, there’s a white box.
Woodford pulls out a box of Tampax. He turns to her. His eyes
plead.
LAURA
Stick them in your ears.
He pulls out the long white tubes.
37.
INT. NISSAN - INTERCUT
Gozinia drives, puffs on a cigarette, leaves a one inch ash.
Beside him Kerr moves through the moon-roof.
EXT. NISSAN - CONTINUOUS
Kerr, gun in hand, aims at the Camaro. He fires repeatedly
towards the tires. Hits the bumper. Hits the ground. Hits the
rear window. Laura zig zags.
The Nissan closes in on the Camaro. Kerr loads another
mag...Cocks his head to the side...Aims the weapon...The
space between the cars rapidly closes...
INT. CAMARO - INTERCUT
Laura sees a huge stray tumbleweed roll in the headlights.
And tears through it. It bounces off the window.
EXT. NISSAN - INTERCUT
The tumbleweed entangles Kerr.
INT. CAMARO - INTERCUT
Laura looks at Woodford. He whines. Strings dangle from the
Tampax tubes in his ears. Beeping continues.
HIGHWAY
The Nissan knocks into the rear end of the Camaro. The Camaro
swerves, slides, straightens.
INT. NISSAN - INTERCUT
Kerr tangled in tumbleweed lowers the electric passenger side
window. Gozinia floors it.
HIGHWAY
The Nissan plows into the rear of the Camaro.
38.
NISSAN - INTERCUT
Air bags deploy...They pound Gozinia and Kerr into their
seats. Gozinia breaks, loses control, spins. The two spin in
a full circle. They topple upside down. Heads bump between
air bags and seat. They scream. Metal screeches across
asphalt... They come to a halt. Motor ticks.
GOZINIA
Okay?
KERR
Yeah, you?
Kerr struggles against the de-inflating air bag, accidentally
fires his gun - both air bags explode.
EXT. HIGHWAY - INTERCUT
The sun emerges over the horizon. In b.g. Kerr and Gozinia’s
car lies in the middle of the road. In f.g. Laura’s Camaro
speeds away.
INT. CAMARO - INTERCUT
Laura releases her breath. Steadies the Camaro, looks over at
Woodford. The Tampax and strings dangle from his ears.
LAURA
You can take them off now.
He removes them. Up ahead, in the morning haze, Laura sees a
small gas station and junk yard. She assesses Woodford.
LAURA
Do you remember everything I showed you?
EXT. GAS STATION - MORNING
Woodford elbows a car window - reaches under the dashboard -
joins two red cables. The engine starts. Dogs bark in b.g.
Laura and Woodford ride out of the station in a corroded,
beat-up, Ford F-150 pickup truck.
39.
PICK-UP TRUCK
Laura and Woodford sit on ripped upholstery. She grips the
yellow fluff covered steering wheel. They hear a kitten’s
meow. Woodford reaches behind him, pulls out a small
cardboard box.
Inside is the cutest, tinniest kitten laying in cockroach
infested filth. It meows again. Woodford scoops it out with
one hand.
LAURA
Awwww, it’s so cute.
EXT. RENT A WRECK - DAY
Gozinia and Kerr stroll through a line of cars, parked
parallel. (Note: Their faces have red chemical burns from
here on)
ATTENDANT (V.O.)
...Number 13 is a luxury Cadillac
Escalade used to belong to famous
deceased rapper, Crack Daddy. Equipped
with leather chairs, auto, a.c, a
powerful stereo, and as requested, no air
bags.
Kerr and Gozinia stand in front of what is a very ghetto car.
Like something used in drive-by’s. They get in the car.
Gozinia in the driver seat, keys it. The radio thrashes out
some funky hip hop beat.... BOOM, BOOM, BOOM BOOM, BOOM! The
Escalade’s suspension jingles. The whole car rocks up and
down.
ESCALADE
Gozinia and Kerr bounce up and down. Kerr stabs repeatedly
the eject button on the CD player. It doesn’t work- there is
no power button. He smacks it with the butt of his gun. It
sparks...Light flashes...An eyeball peers through the light.
MATCH CUT TO:
INT. DENTIST OFFICE - DAY
DENTIST shines his work light up Woodford’s belly button,
pokes it with a tong. Dentist’s eyes look through a
magnifying glass strapped to his head. Woodford lays on the
40.
adjustable dentist chair. Laura grips his hand. Dentist tugs
at the tong.
DENTIST
It’s coming.
WOODFORD
(Winces)
Pain!
Poop! The dentist pulls out the tong. Woodford gives Dentist
an uppercut, sends him sprawling against a wall of diplomas.
The diplomas fall on top of Dentist. Woodford gets up.
LAURA
Woodford, no!
Too late - Woodford kicks Dentist in the head. Apologetic,
Woodford turns to Laura.
WOODFORD
Pain?
Dentist spits his teeth out, then faints. Laura stoops, picks
up the tong - Between its metallic grasp is a small lint ball
of assorted colors. She picks at the cotton... A marble sized
neon red chip glows.
EXT. PIER - DAY
Laura and Woodford stand arm in arm. Behind them, a line of
fishermen cast their reels. Laura thrusts the glowing chip in
Woodford’s hand.
LAURA
This is your key to freedom, Woodford. We
can begin a new life together. Just the
two of us. Would you like that?
WOODFORD
I would very much like that.
LAURA
It will be perfect. No more rules, No
more orders. No more pain. All you have
to do is throw that away.
Woodford looks down at the chip. He casts it far into the
water. It splashes. He turns, smiles at Laura, hugs her.
41.
LAKE
Through muddy waters, the glowing chip sinks towards the
bottom. A cutthroat trout swims by and gulps it.
PIER
A fisherman excitedly reels in a catch. He unhooks the
moderate sized cutthroat trout, tosses it.
MATCH CUT TO:
FISH MARKET
Cutthroat trout lands on pile of others. FISHMONGER yells.
FISHMONGER
Get your fresh fish right here!
One-eyed Tom cat pounces on the cutthroat trout, swipes the
fish in its mouth, and courses for the alleyway. Fishmonger
dashes after it.
FISHMONGER
Popeye! Get back here, you little
bastard.
ALLEY
Popeye the cat chokes next to the half eaten fish. A large
dog catcher net swipes Popeye the cat...
EXT. TOWN - DAY
Ominous clouds loom above a busy town in rush hour traffic.
Gozinia and Kerr in the Escalade swerve, cutting through
traffic, leaving behind angry hooting drivers.
ESCALADE
Gozinia beeps the horn. Kerr watches the open laptop on his
lap.
SCREEN
A detailed map with streets and road names. A small orange
dot bleeps on screen.
42.
KERR (O.S.)
Take a left, a left, no, a right. Over
there. Your other right!
Gozinia swerves, tires squeal, computer image flickers.
KERR (O.S.)
Left ahead, we got ‘em.
BUILDING
The car squeals to a halt outside...‘Hunan’s Chinese Buffet’
INT. HUNAN’S CHINESE BUFFET - DAY
Loud beeping. CHINESE CHEF CURSES in his native language.
Kerr and Gozinia push through crowd of Asian Onlookers.
Gozinia and Kerr stare at each other, then pull their guns.
EXT. HILLS - PICK UP - DAY
Trees and vegetation decorate the terrain. Laura, Woodford,
and the kitten travel on a highway between steep hills.
Laura switches the radio on, tunes the dialer. Music plays.
Woodford toys with the kitten. He dangles his hair into the
kitten’s face. It paws at it. The radio signal fuzzes each
time Woodford bends forward. Laura observes.
LAURA
Woodford? - Bend over again, close to the
radio.
He does so. The radio signal fuzzes.
LAURA
Huh.
They cross a sparkling lake. A flock of gulls migrate to
their love nests swooping over the pickup truck.
PICKUP TRUCK
Bird shit splatters against the window. Windscreen wipers
smear the crap. The kitten sits on the dashboard. Woodford
smiles in awe, watching the gulls. Laura strokes his head.
43.
EXT. TOWN - CASH MACHINE - DAY
Desolate, quiet. Sand drifts through the town in the
afternoon haze. Laura swipes her card. Enters her pin.
SCREEN
A loud beep. Account Frozen. Contact your local branch.
CASH MACHINE
Woodford approaches Laura, peers over her shoulder at the
machine.
SCREEN
The image flickers, fuzzes. mechanics whir, click into place.
CASH MACHINE
The machine spits out bank notes.
Woodford steps back. The machine stops, returns to normal.
Laura, amazed, sticks the cash into her purse.
LAURA
Come here, give me a big kiss.
Woodford leans over, kisses her. The machine shoots out cash
again. Laura collects the notes, fills her purse to the brim.
EXT. VALLEY - SUNSET
Silhouetted against a sun-setting panorama of snow capped
peaks, hills, overlapping mountain ranges, Laura and Woodford
hold hands next to the splattered pickup.
EXT. WRIGHTWOOD VILLAGE - NIGHT
One convenience store with gas pumps, a few shops, and a
couple of bars. In the silvery moonlight, mountings enclose
the village, as Laura, Woodford, and the kitten drive up the
town square hill in the pickup.
44.
EXT. YANKEE PEDDLER STORE - NIGHT
The pickup parks in front of a log cabin store. A ‘Closed’
sign shows in the window.
PICKUP TRUCK
Laura pushes Woodford down onto the seats, drapes a checkered
blanket over him and the kitten.
LAURA
Stay here.
The kitten meows.
STORE ENTRANCE
Laura raps on the front door. The door opens. ANN, a timeworn
gentle face with cataracts, and an outdated dark outfit peeks
through the crack.
ANN
We’re closed.
LAURA
Ann? It’s me, Laura.
ANN
Laura?
The door swings open. They embrace.
INT. YANKEE PEDDLER STORE - NIGHT
Laura and Ann sit in a store filled with ceramic dolls, knickknacks,
and embroidered cushions. They sit on big decorative
bean bags and sip tea.
ANN
How long do you need it?
LAURA
A couple of days.
ANN
The keys are in the same place. I haven’t
rented out this year. Woodworm has gotten
worse. They eat straight through the
pesticides -
45.
LAURA
I also need your car.
ANN
Something wrong Laura?
LAURA
Nothing’s wrong.
Laura’s eyes widen. She sees Woodford outside. He gapes
through the window, holds up a skunk. The skunk maddened,
claws at him. Ann follows Laura’s line of sight -
LAURA
I left my job.
Ann turns to face Laura. In the window, the skunk swings its
tail at Woodford. He covers his eyes. The skunk hangs on his
arm. Woodford falls out of view. Ann follows Laura’s eye
line, sees nothing.
LAURA
I’m just taking a vacation.
Woodford jumps up into view again. He flings his arm. The
skunk won’t let go.
LAURA
Can I borrow some of your cleaning
products? Some food too?
ANN
Sure.
Ann turns to the window. Nothing.
EXT. WRIGHTWOOD VILLAGE - CABIN - NIGHT
Laura, holding the kitten in one hand, searches the cracks
beneath a window ledge. She finds a key. Woodford approaches,
carrying shopping bags. His shirt torn up in pieces.
LAURA
Don’t come any closer. You stink! We have
to scrub you down with peroxide and
baking soda.
Woodford smells himself. His eyes tear.
46.
INT. CABIN - NIGHT
Enter Laura carrying the kitten, and Woodford. She buries her
nose in her blouse. In the darkness, Laura searches blindly
along the wall for the light switch. Woodford takes one step
in. The floor decays under him. Wood snaps... He lands with a
thump below.
Laura finds the light switch. She flicks it on. Beetles fly
at the open door. She ducks. Below, she sees Woodford flat on
his back in the basement. Slanted light illuminates his
crumpled figure. Wood shafts, splinters, shopping bags
surround him. He looks up.
WOODFORD
Pain.
A wood beam hits him in the stomach, knocks the wind out of
him.
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
Incandescent candles bathe the room for a warm, romantic
setting. A gentle breeze blows through the window, levitates
the curtains. Laura sits in bed, a sheet draped over her
naked figure. She glances up as Woodford enters. His bare ass
covered in scratch marks. She pulls him towards her.
EXT. CABIN - NIGHT
Laura spreads flat against the bedroom window as Woodford
thrusts at an incredible speed from behind. Laura’s loud moan
echoes through the village.
INT - KITCHEN - DAY
Window shades open. Dusty amber light cuts through. Sounds of
cooking and popping on a stove.
Laura serves Woodford eggs and bacon. He wolfs it down. Laura
turns her back and he drinks an entire carton of milk.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford hammers wooden panels across the hole in the floor.
Laura feeds the kitten milk from a baby bottle.
47.
BEDROOM
Woodford scrubs a very grimy window. Laura indicates a soiled
area he missed. He smiles and cleans it.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford lifts a heavy sofa, carries it, places it down.
Laura shakes her head and points to the other side of the
room. Woodford joyfully obeys, picks the sofa back up.
Woodford wears an apron, vacuums the living room rug. Laura
reads a paper on the sofa. She looks up at Woodford. He
flashes a smile.
The vacuum roars.
LAURA (O.S.)
Oh my god, oh god.
The kitten runs past. Laura’s legs hang over Woodford’s
shoulders as he humps her. She holds the vacuum hose in her
hand. It sucks on the kitten.
INT. BATHROOM - DAY
Woodford pees into the toilet bowl. He shakes and flushes,
places the toilet seat down. Laura walks by. She rushes to
him. Jumps into his arms, gives him a big kiss.
LAURA
I’m going to see Ann for a few hours.
Will you be okay?
Woodford sulks.
LAURA
Why don’t you clean out the basement till
I get back?
She pats his cheek.
INT. BASEMENT - DAY
Woodford covered in cobwebs, uncovers an old 19 inch
television set. The kitten pounces on it. Next to the TV is a
dusty old manual. He flips through it, scans the pages.
48.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford eyes the TV set, jabs the power button. Nothing.
Woodford consults the manual. Tosses it away - whacks the TV
on the side - It flashes on. The signal is fuzzy. Woodford
backs off and it becomes clearer.
SCREEN
‘The Jerry Springer show’ Two trailer trash women fight.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford pulls a recliner towards him, settles in. The kitten
hops on his lap. He strokes it.
SCREEN
‘Pizza Commercial’ Pepperoni, melting cheese, meatballs.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford licks his lips. His mouth waters. He dribbles.
KITCHEN
The fridge and freezer doors are wide open. Woodford crams
inside, rummages. He sees something he likes, smiles.
MATCH CUT TO:
INT. LAB - DAY
A photograph of Woodford fills the frame.
JOHNSON (O.S.)
Now tell me, does this man look like
Prototype Woodford to you?
Johnson lowers the photograph. Behind, sits nervous
bespectacled Asian, bound and gagged, quivering.
Gozinia, face now rouge, sucks on a cigarette. Beside him,
Kerr’s face is purple.
KERR
You did mention that the prototype could
take on the identity of any ethnic group.
49.
JOHNSON
Before he was built, you numbskulls!
Gozinia and Kerr shrug.
WORK STATION
Wayne and Eric look through a huge magnifying glass on a
pivot arm. Eric holds up the neon marble tracking device
under the glass, inspects it.
ERIC
Taking this baby out must have been like
giving birth.
In b.g. Gagged Asian looks around nervously. Gozinia and
Johnson walk over.
GOZINIA
Our problem now, is how do we track them
down?
Harry enters shaking his head. Johnson turns.
HARRY
No, our problem is: That, General. Is the
antidote. See, the tracking device
injected the virus into the blood stream.
Under the magnifying glass, Eric probes the tracking device
with tweezers. Out pops a syringe.
HARRY
The antidote that reverses the gene
mutation is also inside.
Eric probes the tracking device again. Out pops yet another
syringe.
HARRY
You need to shove that back in his belly
button, so that upon his capture I can
remotely dispense the injection.
Otherwise, its just a matter of days
before he eats himself to death and
spontaneously combusts...
50.
INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
The TV BLARES. Lights flicker in the dim room. Woodford
sprawls on the La-z-boy. He stuffs a loaf of bread into his
mouth.
INT. YANKEE PEDDLER STORE - DAY
Among woven baskets, hand-knitted quilts, and ceramic dolls,
Laura stands on a ladder arranging ornaments on a shelf. Ann
dressed as if in mourning, passes Laura a ceramic Santa
Claus.
ANN
You know what Herman used to do on a
Sunday - his day off? He used to look
through classified adds to find another
job for me to do.
Ann passes Laura, three ceramic wise kings.
ANN
I took all the physical abuse I could
from that relationship.
Laura steps down from the ladder.
LAURA
Didn’t you ever worry about becoming an
old spinster? No man to comfort you?
(She winks, teases)
ANN
No, I have friends to take care of my
needs. Let me show you something.
Ann takes Laura to the back of the store, behind a velvet
curtain.
BACK ROOM
Laura enters through curtains. It’s a sex shop. Racks of
dildos, vibrators, playful pony braided anal plugs, stop
Laura in her tracks. Ann picks up one of the boxes.
ANN
This here is a personal favorite. Kept me
warm on many a cold night.
51.
Laura inspects the box - an adjustable, four piston enginepowered,
triple action head ass hammer. Laura shifts
uncomfortably.
BELL RINGS, footsteps, and three OLD WOMEN CHATTER. The
velvet curtains spread and enter three Old Women like they
were dressed for mass.
ANN
Hello ladies.
EXT. CABIN - DAY
SWEET OLD LADY walks past. She stops. Woodford’s laughter
echoes throughout the street.
INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
TV BLARES. Light flickers. Woodford, shirtless, appears to
have gained ten pounds. He holds a family size bag of chips.
He laughs, uncontrollably. Crumbs cover his bare belly.
TV SCREEN
‘South Park.’ Phillip FARTS on Terrance's head.
LIVING ROOM
Laughing, gurgling, Woodford spits half eaten potato chips,
sprinkling the kitten.
TV SCREEN
‘Simpsons.’ Homer downs an entire Duff beer and BURPS.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford chortles, licks a stick of butter.
TV SCREEN
A baseball player whacks the ball.
SPORTS COMENTATOR (O.S.)
It's a hit! A triple! It's a home run!
He's out! He's safe by a mile!
52.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford jumps up victoriously, yells! Empty bags of junk
food fly off his lap, so does the kitten. His belly has
grown, love handles increased. Hair has grown too.
TV SCREEN
Images flicker. Tv Shows flash. MARRIED WITH CHILDREN, THE
MAN SHOW, AMERICAN FOOTBALL. The images merge into a steady
flutter at 3/3000th of a second of subliminal perceived TV
shows and commercials.
INT. DINER - DAY
Customers pile in: mostly old people, SCRAWNY NUN and OBESE
NUN in habit eat sausages. DECREPIT SHERIFF butters a bagel.
Laura’s ex-fiance - Frank - sips a cup of coffee at the
counter. The waitress lays a paper next to him and a plate of
eggs and waffles. The early morning news shows on TV.
Customers pause what they're doing and watch.
Frank opens up the paper, sees the headline: ‘Fugitives On
the Run.
REPORTER (O.S.)
Wanted for the alleged murder of a
Filipino boy and acts of a non catholic
nature with a catholic nun. FBI are
offering a reward of $50,000 for
information leading to the whereabouts of
Laura Wilde and her unknown boyfriend...
Mug shots of Laura and Woodford flash on the screen. Frank
sees this. Then sees it again on the newspaper. Scrawny Nun
and Obese Nun at their booth, eye him.
Customers poke and nudge Sheriff. Frank pushes his plate
away, gets up. All eyes on him. Sheriff draws his gun.
SHERIFF
Take it easy, sonny. Don’t make it any
worse on yourself.
OBESE NUN
Kill him!
SCRAWNY NUN
Shoot the murderer!
53.
Scrawny Nun throws a bagel at him. Crowd pelts him with food,
and close in like a lynch mob. Frank sees no way out. He
throws his plate of waffles and eggs at Sheriff.
Sheriff fires his gun. Frank grabs Sheriff’s arm. Sheriff
fires again. Frank bites his hand, pries the gun from his
clasp. And fires two rounds in the air.
FRANK
Everyone get back!
Crowd backs up. Nun shrieks. Frank turns, sees on the floor
Obese Nun clutching her stomach. Her hand is bloody. Scrawny
Nun squirms beneath her.
Crowd helps Sheriff to his knees, covered in dripping eggs.
Frank points the gun at Crowd and moves slowly to the exit.
INT. JOHNSON’S OFFICE - DAY
Watching himself in a hand mirror, JOHNSON plucks his nose
hairs. Wayne Kerr bursts through the door. The General
stiffens. Kerr pretends he didn’t see anything.
KERR
We’re back in action. Prototype Woodford
was spotted a minute ago, eating eggs and
waffles. He shot a nun trying to escape.
JOHNSON
(Grunts)
A self-fulfilling prophecy? Catch them
before someone else does.
KERR
Yes sir.
Kerr does a twirl out the door.
EXT. CITY STREET - DAY
Frank crosses an intersection. A cop car flashes its light
behind him. Frank stiffens and continues crossing to...
PHONE BOOTH
He beats Small Man to the booth and enters. Cop car passes
behind him. Frank turns, gives his back. He jabs the buttons
1800 COLLECT, and listens. He jabs more buttons. SIRENS
nearby. Small Man, angry, taps on the glass.
54.
WOMAN (FILTERED)
Skin Techs. Is this an emergency?
FRANK
Yeah sweetheart, put me through to Laura
Wilde.
(Typing sounds)
Outside, Small Man taps on the glass.
WOMAN (FILTERED)
I’m sorry there is no one by that name.
FRANK
Wilde, with an ‘e’ on the end? She’s
worked there the past year.
Outside, Small Man taps on the glass.
WOMAN (FILTERED)
One moment please...
(ELEVATOR MUSIC)
Small Man taps on glass. Frank takes out Sheriff’s gun,
points it at him. Small Man runs away.
JOHNSON (FILTERED)
Who is this?
FRANK
I wanna speak to Laura.
JOHNSON (FILTERED)
Nobody by that name exists here. Who is
this?
Frank hangs up. He turns, wipes his sweat-drenched brow, sees
Small Man running towards flashing sirens nearby.
INT. CABIN - NIGHT
Enter Laura, now a bleached blond. She switches the light on
and gasps.
LAURA
God, Woodford. Put some clothes on.
Woodford lays naked in the La-z-boy. Empty food wrappers all
around him. The TV glows.
55.
INT. MOTEL ROOM - DAY
Shafts of light shoot through a window, where Frank, a band
aid on his nose, peers out of the blinds.
MAN (O.S.)
Freeze, asshole! Put your hands up!
Startled, Frank whips around, sees it’s just the TV. Other
than one shabby, open brown suitcase, the room is empty. He
looks like he hasn’t slept in a week. Frank rummages through
the suitcase, picks up a shoebox.
The name ‘Laura‘ marked on the side. He flips through
letters, postcards and photos.
PHOTO
Laura hugs an older lady. Behind them is a log cabin gift
shop. There’s a dirty shoe print covering the top.
MOTEL ROOM
Frank pockets this photo. He pulls a letter from an envelope.
Opens it.
LETTER
‘Love Betty.’ He flips it over, sees a return address, ‘ 502
N, Mariposa Ave #1 Los Angeles, CA.
MOTEL ROOM
Bullets fire. Frank turns to the TV.
TV
The criminal drops to the floor clutching his stomach.
MATCH CUT TO:
INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
The criminal sighs his last breath. Credits roll.
Woodford sits in his underwear in front of the TV. He picks
his belly button, removes a piece of multicolored lint. He
flicks it away. The fluff falls. The kitten claws at it.
He tucks a hand in his waist band. Behind, Laura emerges from
the kitchen with a pizza.
56.
LAURA
I just don’t understand why the fridge is
completely empty.
Woodford grabs the entire pizza.
WOODFORD
I was hungry.
He folds it like a taco and bites into it. Sausage drops on
his shirt. Laura grimaces.
LAURA
Is it me? Or have you gained weight?
WOODFORD
Yes, I think it’s you. You’ve gained
weight.
Laura glares at Woodford as he bites into his pizza.
LAURA
Is your hair longer?
She reaches over, touches his hair. The kitten eats the
cheese dangling on Woodford’s shirt.
LAURA
Let’s go for a walk. Maybe do some
shopping?
WOODFORD
Not now Laura, the Raiders are coming up
after this. I do not want to miss it.
Laura stares angrily, gets up.
KITCHEN
Laura flips open a panel of breakers, switches them off one
at a time.
WOODFORD (O.S.)
Go wide! Wide! Wi -
LIVING ROOM
Woodford stares at the blank TV. He leans over and smacks it.
Laura strides over.
57.
LAURA
Looks like a power failure. How about we
go for that walk, huh? Buy you some
clothes?
Woodford sulks.
INT. STORE - DAY
Dressing room curtains part. Woodford emerges,
Stetson hat on his head, in blue jeans and dress shirt. Laura
removes the hat. Woodford replaces it and grins.
Woodford enters the changing room, draws curtains shut...
They open. Woodford emerges in bathing suit and Stetson hat.
Sweet Old Lady observes. Laura shakes her head.
Woodford enters room, draws curtains shut...He springs back
out naked in just the Stetson hat. Laura jolts. Sweet Old
Lady gasps, then looks down and bites her lip.
COUNTER
A dozen bags pile on the counter. Sweet Old Lady rings the
total price, but can’t take her eyes off Woodford.
SWEET OLD LADY
$650. Check or Credit.
LAURA
Cash.
Sweet Old Lady bats her eyes. Woodford in his Stetson hat,
new jeans and t-shirt walks out of the store.
EXT. STORE - CONTINUOUS
Woodford stands in the entrance. He scans the village.
Mountains on either side, stores, cafes, a bar. His vision
zooms into RALPH, and BIMBERLY across the street hanging out
at the bar. Ralph is in his forties, wears a fur hat and a
bathrobe, and Bimberly is in her late thirties in short jeans
and tank top. They both drink beers and smoke.
Woodford crosses the street without looking. Enraged driver
honks her horn.
Laura emerges from the store, carrying all the bags. She
searches for Woodford.
58.
LAURA
Woodford?
EXT. THE YODELER BAR - INTERCUT
Woodford stands before Ralph and Bimberly at a long patio
table. Ralph watches a plastic ball on top of an aluminum
sheet. Sunlight streams through a pocket in the sky hitting
the bowl.
RALPH
What’s your name there, buddy?
WOODFORD
Woodford.
Ralph stands, extends his hand.
RALPH
Put it there, pal. Nice to meet you.
Woodford shakes his hand. Bimberly grins.
BIMBERLY
What’s th’ gitup? Yo some sort of
cowfella?
WOODFORD
I detect from the inflection in your
voice, you ask a question. Yet I have no
idea what you said.
Ralph laughs
RALPH
Yeah, she talks funny alright.
SIDEWALK - INTERCUT
Laura stops Passerby.
LAURA
Have you seen a man, tall, big hat?
Passerby shakes her head. Laura frowns.
THE YODELER BAR - INTERCUT
Bimberly passes Woodford a mug of draft beer. Ralph picks his
beer up, takes a hefty swig.
59.
Woodford observes his every move. And imitates. Ralph burps.
Woodford burps too. Ralph laughs. Bimberly swills half of her
beer. She burps. A long burp that echoes across the deck.
They laugh. Woodford observes the laughter. And imitates. He
drains his entire mug. And belches. A mean one. One that
vibrates the sides of his mouth... Silence.
They burst into laughter.
RALPH
Look like they beat you Bimberly.
Ralph opens the plastic bowl. On the lid reads ‘Solar Oven.’
He unwraps from aluminum a piece of flat meat with a tail.
RALPH
Nothing like the sun for cooking meat.
He rips a piece off, passes it to Bimberly who in turn passes
it to Woodford. Woodford eats half of it. He chews, spits out
a silver ball into his hand.
RALPH
That’s just the airgun pellet I used to
shoot it.
WOODFORD
What is this meat?
Woodford shoves the rest of it in his mouth.
RALPH
Squirrel.
The tail dangles from Woodford’s mouth. He sucks it in like
pasta. Bimberly lights two smokes. She offers one to
Woodford. He takes it, observes her closely as she puffs on
it. And imitates her. Ralph gives Woodford more squirrel and
beer.
LAURA (O.S.)
Woodford!
Woodford swings around, sees her hurry towards him, carrying
the bags.
WOODFORD
What?
LAURA
Come here!
60.
He ambles over to the edge of the porch, beer mug in hand,
cigarette burning in his lips. Laura below the porch, glares
up at him.
LAURA
(Whispers)
I don’t want you associating with anyone.
Tell them goodbye.
WOODFORD
But I’m interacting.
LAURA
(Restrained)
Tell them goodbye.
Woodford frowns, waves goodbye.
WOODFORD
Nice to meet you, have to depart now.
He tips his hat.
EXT. SUBURBAN NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY
Trees sway in the breeze along a line of uniformed houses. A
blue Toyota sits parked on the street. Another car approaches
in b.g.
TOYOTA
BOYD SCHIDT lays back, snores, mouth open. A full day’s
growth of beard on him. Black and white pencil sketches of
Laura and Woodford spill over his lap. In b.g. Frank pulls
into a driveway in his Pontiac Firebird.
DOORWAY - INTERCUT
Hanging flowers garnish each side. Frank, a bandage on his
nose, peeps at the mailbox beside the door. The name reads,
‘BETTY JENNINGS’ He pockets a letter, rings the bell.
The door creaks open. Betty Jennings, an old woman in her
sixties, frazzled, appears at the door. She gasps. And slams
the door into Frank’s face.
INT. BETTY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Frank cries, his fingers wedge into the door. They wiggle.
61.
Betty forces the door against them. Frank tears through the
door and Betty topples over. She convulses on the floor. Her
bony fingers reach out. Frank holds his bloody nose, not
looking at her.
FRANK
That wasn’t called for.
Betty clutches her chest, struggles to breathe. Frank
preoccupied with his nose, tilts his head upwards, prevents
the spill of blood. Betty, spread-eagled on the floor stops
breathing.
Frank pauses. He kneels down and prods her body...He picks
her wrist up, feels for a pulse...Nothing. His forehead
breaks in sweat. He wipes his mouth. He pries her mouth open,
tilts Betty’s head back, blows into her mouth.
Betty’s chest rises with each of Frank’s efforts like a
balloon filling with air. He squashes her chest, trying to
be George Clooney on E.R. He breathes into her mouth, thumps
her chest.
FRANK
Come on old girl, stay away from those
pastures.
Betty comes to life, takes a long drag of air.
INT. KITCHEN - INTERCUT
Behind the open fridge door, Woodford’s big bottom waggles in
boxers too small for him. He rummages, binges on cheese, ham,
guzzles a carton of eggnog.
LAURA JENNINGS (O.S.)
(Footsteps, yells)
Woodford?
Woodford emerges from the fridge, eggnog drips on his
undershirt. His hair has grown a couple of inches, a stubble
spreads on his chin. Woodford shuts the refrigerator. He’s
gained another ten pounds.
Enter Laura. She freezes, approaches Woodford. She examines
him. He walks past her into -
LIVING ROOM
Laura stands in the kitchen, observes his walk.
62.
LAURA
Have you been eating again?
WOODFORD
No, just a snack.
He sits down on the La-z-boy. The kitten leaps on his lap. TV
drones, Woodford switches channels.
TV SCREEN
Lustrous models dance on A 56 inch spiraling TV. A jolly
cowboy slaps the TV’s behind.
PAPPY JACK
Yahoo! It’s hot, hot, order now. Same day
delivery. I’ll even throw in 100 channels
free, HBO, Cinemax, Playboy...
LIVING ROOM
Laura heads for the door. At the door she pauses, turns. She
watches Woodford, shakes her head on the way out.
INT. BETTY’S HOUSE - INTERCUT
Betty on the floor breathes heavily. Frank stoops to look at
her. She whispers inaudible words. Her lips move rapidly.
FRANK
You okay, old girl?
She massages her chest, struggling to breath still. Her
cracked lips part, mouth inaudible words.
FRANK
Huh?
Frank kneels, leans in closer, listens. She feebly grasps his
shirt, pulls him towards her mouth. Her lips still move.
Frank narrows his brows as he listens. She bites his ear.
Frank screams. Betty’s box of teeth dangle from his ear.
In pain, he prances in circles, yells - pries the teeth off.
FRANK
You’re sick. You sick old woman!
Betty smiles at him - all gums. Then her head falls back and
she lies still.
63.
INT. MOTEL ROOM - INTERCUT
Tangled sheets strewn over a single bed. Brown suitcase lays
open, wrinkled clothes scattered over the sides. A forceful
blow rocks the room’s main door in its frame. In burst
Gozinia and Kerr in their black overcoats.
They point their weapons to opposite corners. Gozinia
approaches the suitcase. Kerr runs towards the bathroom.
Gozinia tosses through the clothes on the bed, finds a gun.
He opens it, sees two bullets left. He looks at the suitcase,
sees a cardboard shoebox. Behind him, Kerr takes a whiz in
the bathroom.
Gozinia flips through letters, postcards, sees snapshots of
Laura and Frank in Las Vegas, in Grand Canyon, in Niagara
Falls... Kerr flushes, strides over, relieved. He peers at
the photos.
GOZINIA
How’d they find time to go sightseeing?
KERR
They’re just digital backgrounds. You can
get ‘em at any mall.
Gozinia slides out a negative strip, peers at them under
light.
GOZINIA
With negatives?
EXT. BETTY’S HOUSE - INTERCUT
An ambulance wails into Betty’s driveway. Boyd jolts out of
his sleep, wipes his mouth, sees two medics in scrubs unload
a gurney. He also sees a second car in the driveway - Frank’s
car.
He flips the photos off his lap, digs for a cell phone, speed
dials...
INT. MOTEL ROOM - INTERCUT
Kerr and Gozinia ransack the room, toss tables, crack
paintings...Phone RINGS. Kerr pauses, a chair above his head.
He places the chair down, whips out his cell phone.
64.
KERR
Yeah?...When?...
Gozinia yanks dresser draws out onto the floor. Kerr places a
hand on his shoulder, calms him.
KERR
The Woodford has shown.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Woodford sprawls out on the couch, phone between his legs. He
thumbs some numbers. Lifts the receiver to his ear.
WOMAN
(FILTERED)
Pappy Jack’s TV store.
Woodford smiles.
EXT. HOSPITAL - INTERCUT
An ambulance screams towards a three story structure erect
against a backdrop of distant hills and blue skies. In f.g.
Boyd pulls up in his Toyota.
INT. YANKEE PEDDLER STORE - DAY
Outside, BURLY OLD MAN struggles with the door. Ann rushes
over, flips over the closed sign. Burly Man taps on the
glass.
BURLY OLD MAN
My wife in there? Ask her where’s my
dinner?
Ann draws the blinds shut. Tapping continues. Laura stands at
the counter. Ann walks behind the counter, kneels down. She
produces a leather bound folder, slides it to Laura. She
opens it. A series of newspaper clippings.
ALBUM
Laura, twelve years old, poses next to a small robot on
wheels made out of beer cans.
ANN (O.S)
That was when you won 1st place at the
Santa Catalina School science fair.
65.
COUNTER
Laura reminisces. Her lips curl into a smile. She flips to
the next newspaper clipping.
ALBUM
Laura, twenty years old, poses next to a sophisticated tin
robot - Project ROBOSCOPE.
COUNTER
A concerned look, Ann stares at Laura.
ANN
You never did talk about that one. Never
told me what happened...
Laura gazes at the photo. Her smile fades.
LAURA
We all have our secrets.
ANN
Look at the last chapter.
Laura flips the page.
ALBUM
Newspaper clipping. Laura and Woodford’s mug shot. Headline:
‘DEADLY SINNERS’
Laura, stiffens, stares at Ann.
INT. HOSPITAL - RECOVERY ROOM - NIGHT
Frank slides an empty metallic bedpan under a bed. Concerned,
he takes a seat next to Betty asleep on the bed, connected to
IV bags. BIG NURSE, white uniform, broad shoulders, huge
muscle jaw, grasps a clipboard hanging from the bed. He looks
at Frank.
BIG NURSE
(Deep Barry White Voice)
She’ll be alright.
66.
Nurse affectionately grips Frank’s shoulder. Frank looks at
his hand. It’s huge, could easily snap his neck.
BIG NURSE
You’re so tense. You got too many knots.
Nurse rubs his shoulder, crushes Frank’s muscles.
FRANK
It’s okay, really.
BIG NURSE
No, you listen to me. You need emergency
medical assistance. Just Relax, leave
everything to Charles.
Nurse takes Frank’s shoulders in both hands, gives him a firm
back rub.
Behind them, Boyd lurks in the hallway. Nurse jolts Frank’s
head to the left, bone cracks. Water trickles.
INT. BATHROOM - INTERCUT
Dazed, Woodford stands far from the bowl, urinates, with the
seat down, his precision off. LAUGHTER, VOICES, SPORTS
COMMENTATOR BLARES in the background.
EXT. CABIN - PICKUP TRUCK - INTERCUT
Laura pulls in. She peers up, sees a giant satellite dish on
the roof.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
A bar-like atmosphere. Thick smoke, CHATTING, Locals pass
around beer bottles, cigars, popcorn, big bags of chips. A
football game on a giant TV set commands everyone’s
attention.
Woodford gropes an empty mug, sits down on his recliner.
Bimberly pumps beer from a keg into his mug.
Ralph feeds Dorito chips to the kitten. Locals roar at the TV
set. Enter Laura. She shoves through hordes of Locals, trips
over a bar stool. Drunken Locals tread on her hand.
Woodford tears at a piece of squirrel jerky. Laura looms in
front of him. She turns the TV off. Locals BOO her. Woodford,
remote in hand, turns TV on. Locals CHEER.
67.
TV SCREEN
Quarterback throws a pass. Football spirals through air.
Wooden stool smashes TV glass. It SPARKS, BLOWS UP.
LIVING ROOM
Woodford, Bimberly, Ralph, and Locals cover themselves from
exploding shards of glass.
EXT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT
Contained within the stone wall, an extractor whirs, sucking
smoke out into the industrial streetlights. JANITOR appears
out a side door, lugs a large trash bag into a dumpster.
Gozinia screeches the Escalade into the lot, parks next to
the dumpster. Kerr flits out the door.
JANITOR
Hey, you can’t park here.
Gozinia, puffs his cigarette, flashes his badge. Janitor
inspects through extremely thick glasses.
HOSPITAL FLOOR - NIGHT
Number three flashes, dings. Elevator doors open. Kerr and
Gozinia step out in their dark suits, overcoats swaying, and
march down the hallway. Walking Patients part to let them
stride through the center. Boyd rushes up to them, points to
a room.
The agents storm into the room, guns out. Boyd guards the
door, looks around, whistles.
RECOVERY ROOM
Terrorized, Frank turns in his chair, as Gozinia and Kerr
bare down on him pointing their weapons. Kerr clicks open
his rifle case.
GOZINIA
Where is she?
Frank rubs his neck, stretches it.
68.
FRANK
Who?
GOZINIA
The girl, Laura.
FRANK
You’re looking for her too?
Frank stretches his neck again, like he has a nervous tick.
Gozinia steps forward, trains his gun. Kerr assembles his
Accuracy Magnum rifle.
GOZINIA
Who’s she? On the bed?
Gozinia nods towards the old woman.
FRANK
Laura’s Grandmother. She had a heart
attack.
(Frank looks at Kerr assembling
the rifle)
Listen, I didn’t kill anyone. The news
reports. The papers. They’re all lies.
GOZINIA
But you shot a nun didn’t you? And Agent
Kerr here happens to be Catholic.
Kerr clicks together the last piece of the rifle. And aims it
at Frank. He slips in the mag. Frank sinks to the ground
against the bed, wide-eyed.
The door opens, enter Big Nurse, a clipboard in his hands.
Boyd follows behind.
BOYD SCHIDT
Sorry boss, he was too big -
Gozinia turns, Big Nurse sees the gun, drops the clipboard
and SCREECHES.
BIG NURSE
Gun! Gun! Security!
Frank reaches under the bed, searches for the metal bedpan,
grasps the handle - Big Nurse makes an inside run at Gozinia.
GOZINIA
FBI!
69.
Nurse sweeps Gozinia off his feet, knocks the wind out of his
chest as he plows him to the ground, falls on top of him.
Frank leaps up and WHACKS Kerr with the bedpan, urine
splatters across his face, blinds Kerr. He drops his rifle,
covers his eyes and yells.
SHOT ricochets around the room. All cover their heads, as the
bullet seems to bounce around like on a pinball machine.
Gozinia’s gun slides across the floor, stops between Boyd and
Frank. They both make a grab for it, accidentally head-butt
each other. Boyd falls to the floor, rubs his sore head.
Frank grabs the gun, scampers out the room.
HALLWAY
Frank sprints through oncoming Crowd. Behind him, Boyd and
Gozinia stumble out. Big Nurse hangs to Gozinia’s leg. Boyd,
dizzy, falls into Gozinia.
GOZINIA
Stop that man. He’s a fugitive!
All eyes in the corridor turn to Frank, who’s reached a dead
end. His back against a window. He looks out, sees below - A
dumpster. He struggles with the window catch...sees Boyd pull
out a gun; Big Nurse lets go of Gozinia.
Frank lifts his gun. Alarmed people yell in the hallway.
Frank bangs the gun against the rusted catch on the window.
It gives. It opens. He jumps.
DUMPSTER - CONTINUOUS
Frank sails down towards the trash filled dumpster and misses
it landing on the parked Escalade. CRACK! He lands on the
roof. Metal bends. Screams of agony as Frank rolls off the
car roof, lands on his back.
An ancient, Lincoln Towncar screeches to a halt before Frank.
From the car emerges Janitor in painter’s overalls.
JANITOR
You okay, mister? That’s some fall.
Janitor looks up at the window. Gozinia shows through the
open window, aims his gun, shoots. The bullets skim across
the top of the car. Janitor cowers, ducks beneath the
dumpster where Frank crawls for protection.
70.
A bullet slices into a bag of trash above them. Frank waves
his gun at Janitor.
FRANK
When I fire, I want you to jump into the
driver’s seat. I’ll be right behind you.
Janitor nods his head. Frank fires aimlessly over the top of
the dumpster. Shots impale the wall around Gozinia.
WINDOW
Glass shatters above Gozinia as he ducks back in.
DUMPSTER
Frank squats against the dumpster. His gun fires over the
top. He turns, sees Janitor watching him.
FRANK
What’re you waiting for? Go!
Janitor sprints down the street. Frank, perplexed, lifts
himself up, painfully hobbles to the ticking Lincoln.
LINCOLN - CONTINUOUS
Frank cowers inside as bullets spike the roof of the car. He
floors it - The tailpipe chugs smoke and rockets away.
Directly in his path, Frank sees Janitor running in the
headlights.
Frank swerves to avoid him, but Janitor runs frantically in
the same direction then bounces off the windscreen.
Rubber burns as Frank stamps on the brake. Janitor lays
across the sunroof. Frank opens it, pulls Janitor in.
WINDOW
Gozinia watches Boyd’s chubby little figure dash after the
Lincoln. It speeds away with Janitor’s legs poking out the
top, disappears around the corner. Gozinia turns.
GOZINIA
I need a smoke.
71.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
TV BLARES. Styrofoam cups, cigarette butts, popcorn,
wrappers, surround Woodford, spread out on the La-z-boy
recliner. He appears to be another ten pounds heavier. Inside
the smashed big screen TV is the old nineteen inch TV. Laura
switches TV off.
Woodford glares at her. He munches on Dorito chips. Laura
swipes the bag from him.
LAURA
No more Tv. No more empty calories. Your
body is storing fat at an accelerated
rate. You’re turning into a fat pig.
Woodford wheezes out of the La-z-boy recliner.
WOODFORD
You’re turning into my mother.
LAURA
You don’t have a mother.
WOODFORD
Let’s keep it that way.
He swipes the chips from her, knocks the TV back on. Laura
stares at him. He ignores her, stretches on the recliner.
Incensed, she walks away. Woodford tucks his hand down his
pants, scratches his balls. He contemplates the feeling.
WOODFORD
Hmmm.
He scratches some more. The kitten at his feet cocks its head
at him.
INT. BEDROOM - INTERCUT
Laura sits on an unmade bed. She flips open a thick leather
bound book.
BOOK
‘Prototype Woodford. Operator’s Manual.’ Laura’s finger
traces the chapter titles and stops on, ‘Troubleshooting’ She
turns to the back of the book.
72.
BEDROOM
Laura hunches, reads.
LAURA
Visual information burned in the cortex
of the brain. Effects irreversible.
Stored data not re-writable.
Her eyes shift.
LAURA
Offer alternative routines, detach from
visual noise and clutter. Introduce new
concepts.
BOOK
Her fingertip stops on, ‘Sexual performance’ and scans,
LAURA (O.S.)
Foods low in calories facilitate penile
hardening.
LIVING ROOM
Enter Laura. TV blares, the La-z-boy empty. Trash and filth
surround it.
LAURA
Woodford?
She sees her purse on the table. Its contents spilled. Single
notes scattered.
EXT. CONVENIENCE STORE - NIGHT
Bimberly parks a bicycle against the wall. She puffs on a
cigar. Entrance bell rings as Woodford moseys out of the
store, dressed in a bathrobe, a six-pack under his arm; box
of donuts under the other, and an acorn colored Stetson hat
on his head.
BIMBERLY
Hi Cowfella, I see they let you out of
your cage.
WOODFORD
No. I escaped.
73.
BIMBERLY
Share my cigar, If you give me a sip of
yo’ beer.
They sit on a wooden bench, and share the beer and cigar. In
f.g. People fill their cars up at gas pumps.
The six pack lies empty on the ground. Woodford grips the
last two cans of beer. Bimberly touches his hand.
BIMBERLY
Keep it fo’ th’ road, come on. I knows a
place.
Woodford puts the beers in his bathrobe pocket. Bimberly gets
on her bicycle.
BIMBERLY
I’ll set up front. Yo' ride.
WOODFORD
I’ve never rode a bicycle.
BIMBERLY
It’s easy, set behind me.
He saddles up behind her. She grabs his hands, intentionally
grazes them over her breasts, as she places his hands on the
handlebars.
BIMBERLY
Now jest walk it out to th' road.
Woodford shuffles the bicycle off the pavement. Beverly lifts
her legs.
BIMBERLY
Place yo feet in th' pedals, an' jest let
th' bicycle glide down this hill.
Woodford puts his feet in the pedals; the bicycle tips over,
clangs. On the floor, Bimberly, wipes her hair back.
BIMBERLY
Let it glide, then put yo feet in th’
pedals.
EXT. HILL - NIGHT
Cars honk their horns and swerve as Woodford speeds
recklessly down the road. Bimberly sits on the handlebars
and screams. They approach the highway.
74.
A big truck honks its horn, flashes its lights. Woodford
turns, straightens. The truck rears behind them.
BIMBERLY
Turn, turn!
They swerve, head towards a row of bushes, strike the raised
pavement and topple off the bicycle into a hedge.
MEADOW
Bimberly lies flat in a pile of dead leaves. Hair covers her
face. Tangled in the bushes, Woodford worms free onto the
leaves. She looks at him. Leaves on his head, weeds tangled
in his bathrobe. He picks up his Stetson hand, puts it on.
Leaves fall out.
He fishes for his beer, opens it. Beer spurts over his face,
oozes down him. Bimberly laughs, maniacally. Woodford laughs
too. She climbs on top of him, throws a pile of leaves in the
air. She collapses in his arms...Heavy excited breathing.
She kisses him, kisses his neck, opens his bathrobe, and
slivers her face down to his crotch. Woodford’s mouth
twitches; a smile sets in.
WOODFORD
I’m very much enjoying this, thank you.
INT. JANITOR’S HOUSE - KITCHEN - NIGHT
In a small, unkept efficiency with yellowed walls and
bedsheets for curtains, Frank and Janitor sit across from
each other at the kitchen table. Janitor holds an ice bag
against the back of his head. Frank painfully rests his foot
on a chair, stretching and rubbing his neck.
JANITOR
I can take care of that foot there
mister, you let me look at it.
Frank nods, places the gun on the table, keeps his hand on
it. Janitor takes Frank’s boot off, feels around his foot and
ankle. Frank winces.
JANITOR
Yep, she busted o’ right. You got yo’self
a busted ankle.
FRANK
Can you do anything?
75.
Janitor blinks behind his cracked ashtray-thick glasses.
JANITOR
I can sets it straight, wrap a folded
blanket twice aroun' the ankle, one unner
the foot. Heal in a few weeks, you don’t
put weight on it.
Frank looks at Janitor’s hands.
FRANK
You know how to give massages? My neck’s
killing me.
LIVING ROOM
An old record player spins a golden oldie - in the dim light,
Frank lies face-down on an overstuffed sofa, grips his gun.
His foot wrapped in a fluffy brown blanket. Janitor bends
behind him, rubs a large battery operated massager into
Frank’s neck.
FRANK
(Voice Vibrates)
No funny stuff back there, okay. I’m
armed and dangerous.
INT. JACK IN THE BOX - NIGHT
Kerr, Gozinia, and Boyd sit at a booth. Kerr and Gozinia
hunch over the laptop. Gozinia sips coffee. Boyd shoves
greasy fries in his mouth.
LAPTOP SCREEN
Harry’s face, tired, unshaven, flickers in a square box on
the left side. To the right the letters ‘4 F X 6’ flicker.
HARRY (FILTERED)
(Stutters)
Cali, Cali, fornia passenger car license
plates ha, ha, ha have a nonzero digit,
followed by 3 letters, and 3 digits. You
gave me the first four, 4 f X 6. So we
need the last 3 digits, digits.
On the right side, a numbers formula flickers and spins. The
bad signal gives Harry a Max Headroom effect.
76.
HARRY (FILTERED)
We have then, a 1000, a 1000
possibilities. Of which, only 56 are
Lincoln cars, Lincoln cars. Here are 34
possibilities within a 40 mile radius
that match the criteria, criteria.
34 Photo I.D driver’s licenses flash on right side of screen.
All the drivers are black.
BOOTH
Kerr and Gozinia exchange confused looks.
LAPTOP SCREEN
Harry’s image flickers on and off.
HARRY (FILTERED)
I can do background checks on all 34
drivers, but as you no doubt see, I’m
having trouble with the system, so I need
some time, need some.
BOOTH
Boyd drops a french fry, nabs it, swipes Kerr’s Coffee over
the laptop. It crackles, sparks, shuts down. Kerr and Gozinia
glare at him. Embarrassed, Boyd looks down, at the fry.
Kerr dries laptop with napkins. MANAGER approaches Gozinia.
MANAGER
Sir? Please, respect the posted sign.
Above Gozinia is a huge sign, that reads, ‘No Smoking!’
Gozinia takes out his wallet, flashes his badge.
AGENT GOZINIA
Respect this.
EXT. MEADOW - INTERCUT
Woodford lays back on a bed of leaves, Bimberly’s head across
his chest. Bimberly puffs away at a fat cigar. Woodford eats
a donut.
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
Woodford and Bimberly ride past a lake bathed in silver light
- past trees haloed by a full moon.
77.
EXT. CABIN - NIGHT
Woodford and Bimberly cruise down the sidewalk on the
bicycle. She rides. He sits on the handlebars. His bathrobe
flutters open.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Laura paces, stops, looks out the back window, sees a quiet
street, no traffic. She hears laughter, turns, sees
Woodford’s head magically float by an open window. She
sprints to the window, looks out... Nothing.
Laughter. She turns, sees Woodford’s head float across the
window she came from...
EXT. CABIN - CONTINUOUS
Woodford and Bimberly ride in circles. Laura opens the front
door, dashes out.
LAURA
Woodford!
She catches the handlebars. Woodford jumps off, a box of
donuts under his arm. Laura faces him, points at the cabin.
LAURA
Go to my room!
BIMBERLY
You jest an uptight bitch. You can’t even
keep ur’own man.
Laura grabs her hair. Bimberly grabs Laura’s. They shriek and
roll on the ground, lashing at each other. Bimberly throws a
handful of dirt at Laura’s eyes, blinds her -
She forces Laura’s head in the mud. She eats it, screams,
whips her legs around, gets Bimberly in a leg choke.
Woodford sits on the porch, opens his box of donuts, fishes
for a can of beer in his bathrobe pocket.
Bimberly suffocates in the choke hold. Her arms become limp,
her eyes glaze over. Woodford eats a donut, fascinated -
Laura releases Bimberly, gets up. Bimberly rolls on her back,
gasps for breath, her face red.
78.
LAURA
Yeah, you better not come round here no
more...Slut.
Laura kicks her in the stomach, turns, gets eye contact with
Woodford. He’s covered in frosting, balancing an open beer in
one hand, donut in the other.
LAURA
And you, you’re on a balanced diet.
Do you see what this stuff is doing to
you? Look at yourself. You’re just a fat
drunk. You’re a bum.
He pulls out of his bathrobe a white flower, offers it to
her, his eyes asking for forgiveness. He blinks. Laura rips
the flower out of his hands, tears it to shreds.
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
Woodford gives Laura his back. They lie in bed. Laura, puts
down Woodford’s operator manual, reaches across him, turns
his table light on, strokes his hair.
LAURA
Are you awake?
(Woodford stirs)
Sorry I spoke to you that way tonight.
I’ve never hit anyone in my life - You
made me angry.
She nuzzles his shoulder, kisses his arm.
LAURA
We’ll be leaving soon to start our lives
together. You jeopardize our future by
mixing with the locals.
She draws back the bedsheet. Woodford rolls on his back,
stares at the ceiling.
LAURA
At least look at me.
She kisses his chest. His eyes widen; they stare at each
other. A smile spreads across his lips. He straddles a leg
over her; Laura gasps as he penetrates her.
He wheezes and grunts, then he’s all done in five seconds. He
rolls off her, gives his back and goes to sleep. Laura, wide
awake, fumes, but Woodford is out sound, and now snores; he
further lets one rip.
79.
INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT
Owls hoot, winds howl. Crackles and pops echo. The kitten
laps at an empty carton of eggs. Two more cartons and an
empty tub of butter lay next to it. In a pan, a whole packet
of bacon fries. Gas hisses.
Woodford hunches over a stove, puffs on a cigar. He lights
another stove-top. A giant whoosh, as the flame singes his
bathrobe sleeve. He fries a thirty six egg omelet, tosses in
an entire block of cheese.
INT. BEDROOM - MORNING
Tangled in bed sheets, Laura jerks, mutters in her sleep. Her
hand searches the empty space beside her. Fat feet, overgrown
toenails, tiptoe in the dim morning light. Sunlight enters
the window, casts Woodford’s enormous shadow over Laura.
INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
Sprawled on the La-z-boy in his briefs, Woodford wears a wifebeater
undershirt with mustard stains on it. His belly
swelled out at the sides. His stubble developed into a full
grown beard over a double chin. He’s fifty pounds heavier.
Laura vacuums the floor, covered with wrappers and cigarette
butts. The kitten emerges from a family size Doritos wrapper.
A beer in one hand, a cigarette in the other, Woodford lifts
his legs so Laura can vacuum under them.
He picks his belly button, pulls out a giant ball of lint and
tosses it - it rolls across the floor. The kitten pounces on
it like it was a ball of yarn.
Laura emerges from the kitchen, hands Woodford a bowl of
lettuce. He pokes at it, pushes it away. She forks a mouthful
of greens into his mouth. He seals his lips, shakes his head.
Laura squeezes his cheeks, force feeds him. He backhands the
bowl of salad on top of her. Blue cheese and lettuce drips
down her forehead.
INT. BATHROOM - DAY
Laura wipes Woodford’s misfired spray off the toilet rim. In
the door-frame, Woodford observes, scratches his balls. Laura
places the seat down, turns to get Woodford’s reaction.
80.
A vein could pop in her forehead any minute now, as Woodford
uninterested, picks his nose, flicks a booger, and leaves.
Laura shakes her head and pulls the toilet cord but it’s
stuck. She stretches on her toes, takes the lid off the water
tank, finds a six pack of beers, candy, and a Bologna
sandwich.
She empties beer into the sink.
INT. LIVING AREA - INTERCUT
Frank and Janitor eat pancakes at the kitchen table. Janitor
drenches his in syrup.
FRANK
I’m not a bad man. It’s all a
misunderstanding. A mistaken identity.
Frank puts the gun down, pulls out a photograph, slides it
towards Janitor. Janitor forks a mouthful of syrupy pancake,
looks at the photo.
PHOTO
A younger Laura hugs an old lady in front of a log-cabin gift
shop. A dirt stain covers the upper corner.
FRANK (O.S.)
That’s my ex-fiance, Laura.
Janitor eyes him, stops chewing.
FRANK
It’s an old photograph. She’s older now.
Janitor continues chewing.
FRANK
If I find the old woman she’s with. Then
I can find Laura and sort this mess out.
Janitor mops the plate with his last bite of pancake. He
feeds his mouth hole. Syrup drips onto the photo...
FRANK
Watch it, you silly oaf!
Frank takes the photo, smears the syrup onto his shirt, looks
at the photo. Janitor regards him behind his thick, cracked
glasses.
81.
JANITOR
Sorry.
Janitor shrinks as Frank stands up, snatches his glasses.
PHOTO
Under the dirt, a name has become visible on the log cabin
store, behind Laura. Frank magnifies the name with Janitor’s
glasses: ‘Yankee Peddler & Camp Store’
INT. ESCALADE - DAY
Boyd sits in the back hunched under the dented roof. He prods
it. Gozinia drives, smokes a cigarette. Kerr listens on the
phone. Boyd eats potato chips from a big bag, stuffs them in
his mouth
BOYD SCHIDT
Boss, is this the way’s it gonna be? You
gonna ignore me the rest of the job.
He shoves more chips in his mouth. Looks at the laptop beside
him. The chair’s covered with wrappers. Kerr’s rifle case,
and a black cushioned box.
BOYD SCHIDT
Look, I’ll buy a new one. Bill me.
Boyd opens the black box, sees the glowing red tracking
device. He removes it, stares at it. The car hits a bump, he
drops it, searches for it, can’t find it.
BOYD SCHIDT
It was an accident, happen to anyone.
He searches underneath him, under the chair.
BOYD SCHIDT
What’d you say?
EXT. ROAD - ESCALADE - DAY
Murky clouds loom over distant, snow covered peaks. The
Escalade halts on the road. Gozinia emerges, opens rear door,
drags Boyd out. Gozinia gets back in. The Escalade abandons
Boyd, whizzes up the road.
BOYD SCHIDT
Boss? Boss!
82.
ESCALADE
Kerr listens through an earpiece attached to his phone.
KERR
Harry, run that by me again. The owner
works where? ...At the hospital?...He’s a
janitor?
Gozinia and Kerr stare at each other, pondering...
DICK GOZINIA
The janitor!
WAYNE KERR
The janitor!
INT. BEDROOM AREA - INTERCUT
Frank and Janitor huddle behind a computer.
COMPUTER(O.S.)
Welcome, you’ve got mail!
FRANK
Use Yahoo. AOL sucks.
Janitor types on the computer with one finger.
FRANK
Type in, Yankee Peddler camp store.
Janitor types. Frank clicks the mouse button.
SCREEN
A photo of a log cabin store. Headline: The Yankee Peddler &
Camp Store, Wrightwood Village, California...’ Frank holds
the photo against the monitor - An exact match.
FRANK (O.S.)
That’s it. Print it.
EXT. WRIGHTWOOD VILLAGE- STORE - DAY
Woodford ambles up to the town’s only convenience store.
Strong winds sweep down into the valley, flutter Woodford’s
bathrobe open exposing his big, bloated belly. His beard
entwined with a combination of potato chips and salsa. In
f.g. Sexy WOMAN fills her car up at a gas pump.
83.
Leaves drift across the streets. He stops in front of Woman.
WOODFORD
Hey baby, where you goin’? My place is
that way.
WOMAN
Come any closer, I’ll mace you.
WOODFORD
What baby?
He steps forward. She sprays him with a can of mace attached
to her key-chain. He screams, keels over.
INT. CONVENIENCE STORE - DAY
Woodford enters, his eyes red. He staggers towards the cold
beers section. Teenagers laugh. Woodford grabs a six-pack.
More laughter.
CHECKOUT
Woodford stands in line, drinks a beer. He sees a row of
nudie magazines on a rack. His vision zooms in to one, scans
through pages. They are slightly out of focus. He squints,
his eyes widen.
COUNTER
A pile of nudie magazines slap onto the wooden surface.
Disgusted, female cashier looks up at Woodford, at his beard
soaked in bear foam. She sees the entire top rack of
magazines is empty.
EXT. STREET - DAY
Carrying his porn and beer, Woodford wanders up the main part
of town. He passes Skinny Old Woman, wearing a large coat.
The strong winds push her towards him. She strains against
the winds and crosses the road.
Woodford ogles passing Ladies, uses his X-RAY vision. Ladies’
clothes disappear but their image blurs out of focus.
Woodford blinks, takes another swig of beer. The magazines
fall out of his arms. He stoops to pick them up, but the
strong winds scatter them down the street.
84.
Porn magazines and loose pages tear off with the winds, down
the street. A magazine knocks Skinny Old Woman in the back of
the head. She falls.
EXT. HIGHWAY 2 - CAR - INTERCUT
A lovely family in their car. DAD, MOM up-front, and TWINS in
the back seat.
DAD
I spy with my little eye something
beginning with -
A nude centerfold SMACKS against the window. Startled, Mom
and Dad gape at the close-up picture of a big spread...
DAD
...V?
TWINS
(Happy scream)
Vagina!
EXT. APARTMENT COMPLEX - INTERCUT
A small unkept building, cars fill the entire street. Gozinia
and Kerr pull up in the dented Escalade and park in front of
a fire hydrant.
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Gozinia and Kerr walk down the dark and grimy hallway. Flies
hover over a pile of trash bags. Kerr knocks on a door.
Janitor opens.
JANITOR
Shit, what do you want?
Kerr peeks in, sniffs the air; his nose wrinkles.
KERR
Where is the prototype?
JANITOR
What? - I ain’t telling you spooks shit.
Gozinia shoves a gun under his nose, forces him inside.
85.
JANITOR
He’s in village, call Wrightwood. Dumb
dick left a photo.
EXT. WRIGHTWOOD VILLAGE - CABIN - DAY
Leaves scatter in the winds, and loose porn pages. Laura
steps outside, her purse in hand. She searches through the
purse. A couple of hundred dollar bills left.
LAURA
(Yells out)
Woodford?
She slams the door and stomps up the street. In b.g. Woodford
emerges over the hill wearing his bathrobe and Stetson hat.
He holds hands with Bimberly who wears a wedding dress.
CABIN DOOR
Woodford, a cigar in his mouth lifts Bimberly into his arms.
He strains and wheezes under her weight.
BIMBERLY
Carry me o’er the threshold Woody!
She holds bouquet of flowers, and sprinkles confetti. They
enter.
EXT. STREET - CABIN - INTERCUT
Laura walks up steps, halts at the door, sees confetti and a
flower bouquet on the floor...She opens the door.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
The door swings open to reveal Woodford watching TV, flipping
through channels, and Bimberly’s head between Woodford’s
legs. Laura slams the door shut.
Bimberly pops her head up, spits out some hairs. Laura’s eyes
bulge.
LAURA
You have five seconds to get out, you
slut. Before I bury you in that dress.
Bimberly hurriedly exits, cowers as she passes Laura.
Bimberly has a milk mustache.
86.
BIMBERLY
See you at six Woody?
WOODFORD
You betcha.
LAURA
Out!
Bimberly exits. Laura shuts the door. With a cold piercing
stare, Laura walks over to Woodford.
WOODFORD
What?
He looks down, embarassed, closes his bathrobe.
INT. KITCHEN - DAY
Laura stares at an open fridge, empty. The freezer full of
beer and a couple of uncooked pizzas. She looks at the pile
of dirty dishes on the counter, at a row of empty beer
bottles and pizza boxes. The kitten bites on a pizza crust.
She knocks the pile of plates on the floor, the kitten
scampers, and Laura screams over...
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Woodford in his chair, turns his head.
WOODFORD
Oral sex isn’t cheating.
INT. KITCHEN - INTERCUT
Laura stares at the broken pieces of ceramic on the floor.
Her gaze goes to the back of Woodford’s head in the living
room.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Woodford lounges on the La-z-boy, puffs a cigar. ‘Jerry
Springer’ plays on TV. Behind Woodford, Laura approaches.
LAURA
Can I borrow your lighter?
87.
Woodford digs in his bathrobe pocket, pulls out his Zippo,
hands it over without missing a beat on TV. Laura raises a
red gas canister into view. She stares at the top of his
head. He’s all giggles and guffaws, roots along with the rest
of the crowd on TV.
WOODFORD
Jerry! Jerry! -
She douses him in gasoline. He chugs, gasps. She expertly
flicks the Zippo on with two fingers, tosses it at him. He
lights up like a Tibetan monk.
WOODFORD
Ahhhhh! Pain!
He dances around the room on fire. Woodford’s burning image
reflects in Laura’s eyes. The image fades and she looks down
at the top of Woodford’s head. Snap back to reality, as he
still roots at the TV set.
WOODFORD
...Jerry, Jerry!
Laura sighs, sets the Zippo and gas can on the table.
EXT. YANKEE PEDDLER STORE - INTERCUT
Frank pulls up, parks the Lincoln. He gets out with a stick,
and hobbles to the entrance, his foot wrapped in the blanket.
As he opens the door, Ann flips the closed sign on him and
mouths the word, ‘closed.’ Frank turns the handle, swings the
door open.
INT. STORE - CONTINUOUS
Ann looks at him carefully, gasps, and backs away.
FRANK
I haven’t got time for any shit. Now
where’s Laura?
ANN
I don’t know any Laura! Get out of here
before I call the police.
Frank turns to the door, closes the blinds. He walks towards
her. She shrieks out of control, throws ceramic dolls at him,
cushions, straw hats. She panics, runs for the back room.
88.
Frank, painfully hobbles after her. She heads for the velvet
curtains.
BACK ROOM
Frank parts the curtains. Ann pelts him with sex toys,
anything she can grab. She grabs a leather whip. Frank,
amazed, gazes around the room. She catches him off guard,
flogs his face.
FRANK
(Rubs his cut cheek)
Ow! That was totally uncalled for!
She lashes again. Frank holds up his arm; the whip wraps
around it. He yanks her towards him. She screams.
FRANK
Shut up woman.
She screams even louder. Frank backhands her across the face.
She shuts up.
FRANK
Where’s Laura?
Frank raises his hand...
FRANK
I won’t ask you again.
Ann cowers on fallen boxes of blow-up dolls.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Woodford sits on his La-z-boy, strokes the kitten. TV blares.
In b.g. Laura busies herself in the kitchen.
WOODFORD
What’s for dinner?
LAURA
I’m fixing your favorite. Meat ball pizza
with cheddar cheese.
(Woodford’s mouth waters)
This is the last one before you go on
that diet.
89.
EXT. YANKEE PEDDLER’S STORE - INTERCUT
Frank hobbles into the Lincoln, starts engine. He heads up
the road, over the hill. In f.g. Gozinia and Kerr arrive in
the dented Escalade.
INT. KITCHEN - INTERCUT
Laura opens the oven, as Woodford enters the kitchen holding
the kitten. Woodford looks at the trash, sees it’s full of
empty beer bottles.
WOODFORD
What did you do that for? What am I gonna
drink with my pizza.
Laura opens the oven. It hisses.
LAURA
I made iced tea.
WOODFORD
I don’t want iced tea. I want beer.
LAURA
You can’t have any beer. I washed it down
the sink.
(Woodford turns, walks out)
And yes, I found your stash in the
toilet. That’s gone too.
(Woodford stops, returns)
Laura lights a match. It flickers, dies.
WOODFORD
Give me some money.
LAURA
No.
WOODFORD
Give me my beer money.
Laura lights another match. Woodford reaches for Laura’s
purse. Laura jumps up, snatches the purse, clutches it tight.
The kitten jumps to the floor, watches them.
LAURA
You’re a waste Woodford. So much
potential in you, yet you piss it all
away. On what? Tell me?
90.
(MORE)
You’re nothing but a machine, a bum
machine - You’re not even a real man -
With a quick snap of his hand, he smacks her across the face
flings her into the back wall. Woodford’s face turns red.
Blood clots inside his veins, cause them to pump and bulge.
He snarls.
Laura slides down the wall. Woodford’s hand has left a red
imprint on her cheek. Woodford reaches for her purse, plucks
it from her grasp. He takes the cash, leaves her in the
kitchen alone. She hears the front door slam shut, touches
her face and winces.
INT. YANKEE PEDDLER’S STORE - INTERCUT
Ann lies across the boxes, caresses her bruised cheek.
GOZINIA (O.S.)
Hello! ... Anyone here?
Ann raises herself, slips on the boxes.
ANN
We’re closed. Didn’t you read the sign?
Enter Gozinia and Kerr through the velvet curtain. Gozinia
looks around, looks at Kerr. Dumbfounded expressions on their
faces. Kerr stoops, picks up a broken box, pulls out a big,
black rubber dildo, the size of his arm.
KERR
Is this legal?
Gozinia shudders, holds up the photograph with Laura and Ann.
GOZINIA
Where is Laura and the prototype?
Ann throws a box at them, gets up, confronts them.
ANN
Get out. Get out of here!
Gozinia and Kerr exchange a glance. Gozinia nods his head.
Kerr smacks her across the face with the dildo. She spirals
into the boxes.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Laura looks through the window with the phone to her ear.
91.
LAURA (CONT'D)
LAURA
You want the prototype. Huh? You want it.
JOHNSON (FILTERED)
Laura. Where are you? The prototype will
die. He needs special treatment.
LAURA
I don’t care anymore.
INT. MAIN LAB - INTERCUT
An assortment of dials and displays glow behind Johnson. He
switches the speaker phone button on. Wong and Eric lean over
the speaker phone.
JOHN WONG
A Trojan horse virus was
released in his system, that
mutates a protein producing
gene. He will eat himself to
death, which in turn triggers
a time bomb...
ERIC SHUN
Don’t be stupid, Laura. He’s
going to die. The only
antidote for the prototype is
in the tracking device. He’s
going to die. He’ll die then
he’ll explode...
Harry nearby taps a key on the computer center. A map of
California shows up on a large screen console.
HARRY
Keep her on the line. We almost have her
pinned.
The image on the monitor zooms in to tighter areas.
JOHNSON
Give him up now, and I will let you go.
The tracking device is the only thing
that will save him.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Laura peers up the road, through the window.
LAURA
I know you are tracing this call. You’ll
find him here.
She places the receiver upside down on the table.
GENERAL JOHNSON (FILTERED)
Hello? Hello? ...Get those
numbskulls on the phone.
HARRY BUSH (FILTERED)
10 more seconds General, and
we have her.
92.
Laura stares at the receiver, takes a deep breath. She picks
up a set of keys, her purse, and exits the front door, leaves
it ajar.
INT. KITCHEN - INTERCUT
Gas hisses from a wide open oven. Kitten meows, claws at the
kitchen door, squeezes its little body through the door
crack, wiggles through. The door now closes. Hissing
continues.
INT. YANKEE PEDDLER’S STORE - INTERCUT
Mascara runs on Ann’s cheeks. She trembles, holds the phone
against her ear.
ANN
Sheriff Outhouse?
(She wipes a tear)
It’s me... Ann at Yankee Peddlers...
INT. ROAD - ESCALADE - INTERCUT
Pulled over to the side of a road, Gozinia sticks his cell
phone through the open window, waves it.
DICK GOZINIA
Go’damn primitive town. Can’t
even get reception.
WAYNE KERR
This map makes no sense. I’m
pretty sure she put north
upside down. I mean north
should be up hill.
Gozinia snatches the map from Kerr.
GOZINIA
Give me that, idiot. And find me a light
that works.
He looks at the street sign, then at the map.
GOZINIA
I told you if we made that turn at Twin
Lakes -
EXT. CABIN - INTERCUT
A gust of wind blows leaves and magazines across the yard.
Frank approaches the cabin, hears a woman’s voice, finds the
door ajar and walks in.
93.
INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Enter Frank. He looks around, sees TV on and phone off the
hook.
PHONE (RECORDED MESSAGE)
If you’d like to make a call...Please
hang up and try again...If -
Frank hangs phone up, looks at the red gas can.
FRANK
Laura?
No answer. He walks towards the bedroom. The floor boards
creak with every step as if they could give way any second.
He enters the bedroom.
The front door re-opens and enter Bimberly in a big fluffy
coat. She closes the door behind her, checks her watch, sees
it’s 6 P.M.
BIMBERLY
Woody?
BEDROOM
The open door serves as a screen partition. Frank hides
behind the door and listens, as Bimberly approaches.
BIMBERLY (O.S.)
Are you playin’ hide and seek wit’ me?
Frank waits. Bimberly enters the bedroom. He surprises her,
covers her mouth with his hand.
EXT. ROAD - ESCALADE - INTERCUT
Kerr flips the map around again.
KERR
Do you follow me, I’m telling you the map
is this way up.
GOZINIA
No, I don’t follow you. I’m not a child.
94.
INT. CONVENIENCE STORE - INTERCUT
Enter Woodford in his tattered bathrobe and greasy hair. He
treads, sweating, to the beer section, grabbing bags of
nachos on the way. THIN TEEN, FRECKLY TEEN, and PIMPLY TEEN
LAUGH. Woodford opens the cooler, gets a six pack, pauses and
sees teenagers.
They giggle, whisper to each other, looking at him. Woodford
stops at another fridge, gets some eggnog too as an
afterthought. Whispers continue and intensify.
COUNTER
Woodford puts down the beers, nachos, and gallon of eggnog.
His ear tunes in to the whispers. They become clearer...
THIN TEEN
Look, it’s a manatee.
FRECKLY TEEN
His ass is so fat, he uses blankets to
wipe it.
PIMPLY TEEN
When he goes to the movies, he sits next
to everyone.
Woodford catches his reflection in the window. His body has
drastically altered in such a short time. His hair grown to
his shoulders. His beard all fluffy. He looks like he’s been
cast-away. Behind him he sees the Teenagers. Laughter echoes
in his ears.
He examines himself, prods his man boobs, touches his bloated
belly and double chin.
LAURA (V.O.)
You’re just a fat drunk - You’re a bum -
Stop eating - You’re not even a real man -
EXT. PIER - DAY - FLASHBACK
Laura and Woodford stand arm in arm. The glorious sun shines
behind them. Laura thrusts the glowing chip in Woodford’s
hand.
LAURA
This is your key to freedom Woodford. We
can begin a new life together -
95.
PIMPLY TEEN (O.S.)
(High pitched squeal of
laughter)
You could pinch an inch off his forehead.
CASHIER (O.S.)
$14.85. You want paper or plastic?
INT. CONVENIENCE STORE - BACK TO PRESENT
Woodford shudders.
WOODFORD
No. I don’t want anything. Maybe this...
He grabs the gallon of eggnog, tosses the cash at Cashier.
WOODFORD
Laura. I must talk to Laura. Laura!
He scuttles out the door. Teens continue their secretive
taunts.
INT. HIGHWAY 2 - ANN’S STATION WAGON - INTERCUT
Laura reaches an intersection. She looks left, right. She
signals right, pauses. Man behind her, honks his car horn.
Laura does a U-Turn, heads back.
LAURA
God, what have I done? What have I done?
She accelerates.
INT. CABIN - BEDROOM - INTERCUT
Frank and Bimberly sit on the unmade bed.
FRANK
So hold on. There’s this guy who looks
like me? Who you’re involved with, but
he’s fat now? But he wasn’t so fat two
days ago? But-
BIMBERLY
Do you smell that?
He sniffs the air.
96.
FRANK
Yeah, it smells like a fart.
They get up.
INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Frank and Bimberly enter. The sound of a car pulling into the
driveway startles Frank. He hobbles towards the door’s
peephole, sees Kerr and Gozinia and the Escalade. Its doors
open.
FRANK
Oh shit. It’s them. The men that wanna
kill me.
Frank pulls the gun out of his waistband. Bimberly’s eyes
widen. In b.g sirens wail.
EXT. CABIN - INTERCUT
Kerr and Gozinia pull their guns. The strong breeze flaps
their long black over coats. Three police cars scream up the
road, sirens flashing, and pull into the driveway.
Kerr and Gozinia turn. Gozinia pulls his wallet out, flashes
a smile at the approaching Sheriff’s car.
GOZINIA
Evening, Sheriff. Thanks for stopping by,
but we have this under control.
Sheriff Outhouse, pokes his head out the window, a rock hard
serious face, looks like he’s never laughed in his life.
OUTHOUSE
Who are you?
Outhouse gets out of his car. The deputies stake their
positions behind their cars.
GOZINIA
Agent Dick Gozinia. FBI. Those are our
fugitives in there.
The kitten trots by and strokes itself against Outhouse’s
leg.
97.
OUTHOUSE
This is our community. And it deserves
the highest level of excellence from the
uniquely qualified members of our
department.
Outhouse shoos the kitten away. Gozinia pulls out of his
inside pocket, a document. Outhouse grunts, looks at it,
hands it back.
GOZINIA
You’re pissing into the wind here. You
think this bust will get you a news
special?
Kerr grabs his rifle case from the back seat, walks away. The
kitten jumps in the Escalade, dives into the big bag of
chips.
OUTHOUSE
(To Gozinia)
In the field challenges require
experienced, rational decisions that have
to be made quickly without consultation.
I justify my actions.
Outhouse raises his megaphone, faces the cabin.
OUTHOUSE
You have ten seconds to come out, before
I give an order to open fire. Come out
now with heads on your hands. I mean...
You know the drill.
Gozinia shakes his head, pulls out a cigarette and pats
himself for a light. He can’t find one. He buttons his jacket
up against the cold winds, searches for Kerr who heads
towards a tree carrying his rifle case.
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Frank peers through the door’s peephole at all the cops.
FRANK
You know, I really don’t have to worry
anymore. We’ll just go out there and you
can explain to those cops. There might be
a reward.
BIMBERLY
I jest want to get out. It smells pretty
bad in here.
98.
Frank opens the front door. Bimberly stands behind him.
EXT. CABIN - CONTINUOUS
Cops crouch behind their open car doors. Frank appears in the
door frame, the gun raised above his head. Outhouse smiles,
gets eye contact with Gozinia.
OUTHOUSE
You see. People give me swift and
unquestioned compliance when given a
direct order.
(Talks through Megaphone)
Now, drop that weapon very slowly now.
EXT. BUSHES - INTERCUT
Kerr hides behind a bush, loads the mystical glowing orange
bullets into the mag, shoves the mag in, and pokes the Magnum
rifle through the bushes.
The winds pick up, scatter leaves across his path. He aims
the barrel at Frank, looks through the scope. Cross hairs
appear on Frank’s forehead...Kerr’s index finger grips the
trigger...
KERR
Say cheese -
A magazine slaps against the scope. Kerr jolts and fires the
single round. The ring of the shot fills the air.
It travels rocket speed, a fusion of orange splitting through
the night straight into...Frank’s left leg, through it and
into Bimberly’s leg.
DOORWAY
Frank wails, fires the gun, collapses. Bimberly shrieks,
pulls Frank in. He passes out.
YARD
A domino effect of cops open fire on the cabin into one
harmonious melody of gun fire. An assortment of revolvers and
12 gauge shotguns. They reload and continue. Splinters of
wood fly all over the place.
99.
EXT. BUSHES - INTERCUT
Kerr scorns the magazine that hit him. He grabs it, sees a
blond in various lewd positions on the front cover holding a
golden stake. Title: Muffy the Vampire Layer.
EXT. CABIN - INTERCUT
Glass smashes. The cabin door looks like swiss cheese.
LIVING ROOM
Bullets open new holes through the walls, where beams of
light shoot through. More glass shatters over Bimberly. She
cowers on the floor, protects Frank.
The top half of the door flops over, as Bimberly drags the
unconscious Frank across the floor, behind the La-z-boy. A
bullet hits the little TV which falls in front of Bimberly.
It sparks but stays on. CANNED LAUGHTER plays on TV.
The red gas canister topples and spills. The gas trickles
across the wooden floor.
EXT. STREET - STATION WAGON - INTERCUT
Laura stops at the end of the street, sees the flashing cop
lights, and muzzle flashes. She pounds the top of the
dashboard.
EXT. YARD - INTERCUT
Gozinia shakes his head. Outhouse raises the megaphone.
OUTHOUSE
Cease fire everyone. Cease fire. This
isn’t the friggin’ 4th of July.
Cops chuckle. Crowd of onlookers emerge in the street.
Sheriff lowers the megaphone, turns to Gozinia
OUTHOUSE
The public’s confidence in the Phelan
County Sheriff office has been restored.
You can now have your fugitives.
GOZINIA
You wouldn’t have a light would you?
100.
OUTHOUSE
I don’t smoke.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Gozinia appears in the door frame. An unlit cigarette dangles
from his lips. He swings open the remaining part of the door.
It collapses. He looks ahead at the couch, sees Frank’s legs
poking out from behind the La-z-boy. The blanket wrapped
around his foot. Bimberly next to him.
Gozinia trips on the gas cannister. More fuel trickles out,
spreads across the floor. Gozinia’s focus shifts to the Zippo
lighter on the table. He smiles, picks it up.
Kerr walks in, steps over the gas canister.
KERR
Christ! You smell that? - It’s gas.
GOZINIA
Yeah I tripped on the darn thing. On the
floor, look.
Kerr looks at the gas canister.
KERR
No, not that gas, the other -
Gozinia raises the Zippo to his cigarette.
KERR
Hey wait a minute. Noooo!
Everything slows down. The moment stretches out as Kerr leaps
towards Gozinia, his arms outstretched. Gozinia flicks the
Zippo. It ignites. A blue flame grows.
Kerr backhands the Zippo out of Gozinia’s hand. And collides
on top of Gozinia. The two tumble on top of Bimberly and
Frank.
The Zippo spirals in the air, its flame flickers - It lands
in a puddle of gasoline on the floor. The puddle ignites, a
single stream of fire bolts across the wooden floor boards
towards the kitchen...
101.
YARD
The cabin explodes. Pieces of it hurl towards the officers.
The impact sends them reeling against their cars, crashing
the glass, and denting the doors. The blast knocks the crowd
of onlookers off their feet. The fridge lands on top of the
Escalade. The kitten squeals, dashes out the Escalade door.
STATION WAGON
The blast reflects on Laura’s horrified reaction.
LAURA
Woodford!
She weeps.
EXT. YARD - INTERCUT
Among the startled onlookers recovering from the blast,
strides Woodford in a casual manner in his bathrobe, a gallon
of eggnog in his hand. He struts among the dazed officers
scrambling for their lives, as flames continue to spread.
Woodford passes a burning satellite dish, scans the fire,
looks through. His vision scans below the fire and below the
surface. He sees four figures still moving. He zooms in, sees
Gozinia, Kerr, Frank, and Bimberly covered in ashes.
He takes a swig of eggnog, walks over to Outhouse, talking on
the car radio.
WOODFORD
There’s four people alive in the
basement.
Outhouse shoos Woodford away.
OUTHOUSE
Get out of here, you drunk.
Woodford walks away sad, eggnog in his beard.
EXT. HILLS - ROAD - NIGHT
Woodford, shoulders slumped, mooches down a long and winding
road. He takes his Stetson hat off, throws it on the ground,
stamps on it. Cars pass him heading into the night.
102.
He pats his stomach. It rumbles. He sees a filleted piece of
road kill, contemplates it, licks his lips. Headlights flash
on his back. Then Laura’s pickup screeches to a halt behind
him. Woodford turns, his eyes light up, a smile appears.
WOODFORD
Laura!
He dashes towards her. She gets out of the pickup and they
embrace.
LAURA
I’m so sorry. I did a horrible thing. I
turned you in. I made the call and told
them where you were.
WOODFORD
I’m sorry too. I was searching for the
end of the rainbow, Laura, and I got
lost. I’m sorry I hit you. I’ll never
ever hit you again - You’re my pot of
gold - I-I’ll change. I’ll go to AA
meetings. I’ll lose weight, anything. I
want everything to be like it was the
first time.
LAURA
It can’t be. You’re ill. You’re dying and
I can’t save you. At least this way you
chose how you die.
WOODFORD
What? I’m... dying?
They hear a meow and look down. It’s the kitten, it coughs,
chokes.
WOODFORD
Mr. Tibbs! He must have followed me.
Woodford wheezes, stoops to pick it up. The kitten gags,
hurls up a hair ball into Woodford’s fat hand. It glows neon
red. Laura picks at it, sees that it’s the tracking device.
She holds it up, inspects it.
LAURA
Oh, Mr. Tibbs you sweet thing, you.
Mr. Tibbs meows.
The Station Wagon heads into a steep valley. The moon
glistens down on their trail.
103.
EXT. YARD - NIGHT
Firemen hose down the last flickers of flames. They clear
timber logs off of Frank and haul him out onto a gurney.
Frank moans. Two firemen place the gurney next to three
others containing Kerr, Gozinia, and Bimberly scorched,
clothes tattered, covered in ashes.
All of them moan, while Fireman opens up a first aid kit and
wraps gauze around Frank’s leg.
GOZINIA
Any one of you miserable bastards got a
light?
His cigarette limp, dangles from his lips. No one answers.
CHIEF FIREMAN approaches Outhouse.
CHIEF FIREMAN
Hey Roy, See this piece of wood?
He rips it apart in his hands.
CHIEF FIREMAN
It’s a piece of shit. This whole house
was infested with wood worm. If it didn’t
blow up, it would have fallen down.
OUTHOUSE
Lucky for them then. We’ll be in the news
for these joint efforts. Put Wrightwood
Village right on the map.
INT. HIGHWAY - STATION WAGON - NIGHT
Laura tunes the radio. Woodford kneels forward, the signal
fuzzes. He backs off, the signal becomes clearer.
RADIO (O.S FILTERED)
A shoot-out tonight with local officials
in the small town of Wrightwood Village
ended in the apprehension of fugitives
Laura and an unidentified Caucasian male.
Both were taken to the county hospital
where they are being treated. Later
tonight with more details.
Laura switches the radio off. She and Woodford exchange a
surprised look.
104.
EXT. RURAL TOWN - DAY
Sun shines down on a town square. Farmers in ponchos and
sombreros stroll across the cobbled streets with their
donkeys. The town is graced with subtropical trees, shrubs
and colorful flowers spilling over the sidewalks.
Bare foot BOY strolls to the base of a scrubbed brick two
story structure. A group of men sit outside sipping beers.
Boy holds a parcel under his arm.
BOY
Woody! Eh, Woody!
Woodford pokes his head out a window on the second floor. He
wears a sombrero and poncho too. He still looks the same, if
anything, fatter. He places a finger on his lips.
WOODFORD
Silencio.
Woodford throws down a rope. Boy hooks the parcel to the
rope. Woodford reels it up.
BATHROOM
Woodford unhooks the parcel, whiffs it. He opens it, scoffs
the fish tacos inside. He further takes out a big one foot
joint. He sits on the toilet and lights it.
LAURA (O.S.)
Woodford, what are you doing?
WOODFORD
(Stoned Voice)
Just taking a whiz, dear. Be right out.
He looks around, scratches his head.
BEDROOM
Laura listens at the door. She wears a hand woven, colorful
nightgown that clings to her figure. She hears water
trickling inside the bathroom but it falls hard and
consistent. She frowns, opens the door.
She catches Woodford standing at the toilet pouring a glass
of water into the basin. The joint in his mouth. He freezes.
She sees the packet of fish tacos on the sink. And the rope
hanging out the window.
105.
WOODFORD
I’ll change, I promise.
LAURA
You’re not ill any more. It’s purely
psychological. I just wish you’d be more
honest, don’t go sneaking around on me. I
promise to ease up as long as you promise
to be honest, deal?
WOODFORD
you’re still my pot of gold, Laura. I
love you more than ever.
He hugs her.
WOODFORD
How about I teach you some Spanish today?
I’m almost fluent now.
LAURA
Okay.
WOODFORD
Repeat after me. Dame una cerveza por
favor y dos kilos de tortillas.
She kisses him and they embrace. An obese cat jumps on top of
the sink with great difficulty. And gobbles the fish tacos.
On its collar, a gold medallion shines big silver words, ‘Mr.
Tibbs.’ Mr. Tibbs watches Woodford and Laura as they embrace,
and cocks its head. *
FADE OUT:
106.
Pictures
bar where it happened....163
hospital 6.15pm 28.06.2007 ...162
DOORWAY...146
IN SAND ....147
cem car ...149
gate of cem ..150
22 07 2007 NO WORDS....151
AWARD WINNING NERDWARS CAST...171