PULLING STRINGS BY ELTON SEBASTIAN THIS IS UNDER OFFER.AND THE COIN VIDEO.
2004
Created by colin 16 years ago
PULLING STRINGS
by
Elton Sebastian
1807 N 17th Ave Apt 2
Hollywood, FL 33020
Email: eltonsebastian@yahoo.com
FADE IN:
BLACK
Snoring, loud, annoying rhythmical puffs.
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
CHARLIE COLE’S eyes flutter open, see a blow-up doll’s face.
It’s lips puckered up around a burned out cigarette. Snores
continue. Charlie’s brow frowns.
CHARLIE (O.C.)
(pushes the face away)
Shut up you rubber whore.
Snores continue. Charlie (Late 20’s) turns in his bed, condom
stuck to the side of his head. Feeling a pulsating head ache,
he groans then sees the STRIPPER’S face. Bleach blonde hair,
smudged mascara. She drools, snores...
INT. HALLWAY (OUTSIDE APARTMENT) - INTERCUT
Small feet in Nike sneakers squeak across the tiled floor to
a door. Keys rattle.
BEDROOM - INTERCUT
Charlie peels the condom off his ear, disgusted.
His hand comes down on a forearm sized dildo that reads “the
ass hammer” He flinches.
Perplexed, he takes in the rest of the room sees the
aftermath of kinky sex - torn clothes, sex toys, twisted
sheets.
A red leather bra twirls around on the ceiling fan above him.
HALLWAY - INTERCUT
Keys clatter on tiled floor next to Nike sneaker. A hand with
tiny-diamond engagement ring reaches down, picks them up.
BEDROOM - INTERCUT
Charlie nudges Stripper. Snores turn into puffs. He pushes
her, slaps her cheeks. Nothing. Puts a pillow over her face.
2.
Off-screen the front door creaks open. He whips his head to
the night stand.
A digital clock displays 09:30 AM, next to a framed photo of
KAYLA (mid 30’s), frozen in mid stride. Hair flowing past her
slender shoulders, snow skin radiating against a blackened
skyline.
KAYLA (O.S.)
Charlie.
S
neakers squeak towards the bedroom door...
Charlie tosses the bed covers over Stripper, sex toys, condom
wrappers, rams her against the headboard with his feet until
it just looks like a heap of sheets.
HALLWAY (OUTSIDE BEDROOM)
The sneakers stop at the door. The engagement ring hand
grasps the handle.
BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS
Enter Kayla, a bright white smile that turns sour. She mouths
an O of horrid surprise.
KAYLA
How could you?
Charlie slumps guiltily, besides the heap of sheets.
Kayla treads towards the blowup doll, picks it up.
KAYLA
I hope she was worth it, buster.
(Squeezes doll’s cheeks)
Was she as good as me?
CHARLIE
Oh, er - yeah - I mean no. I...
KAYLA
I’m just busting your balls, silly.
(Charlie relaxes)
So how was the stripper?
CHARLIE
Stripper? What stripper?
3.
KAYLA
The one from your stag party,
silly. I know what crazy things you
and your friends get up to on these
occasions.
CHARLIE
Oh, er- she was alright. I guess.
You know, I don’t remember much
from last night.
(grasps his aching head)
KAYLA
Poor baby.
(strokes his hair)
She kicks aside empty beer cans, a broken tequila bottle.
KAYLA
I’ll send over a maid to pick this
pigsty up. Do you have to work
today?
(Picks up a string of anal
beads from floor)
What’s this?
CHARLIE
Yeah, just a couple of hours.
Those? I dunno’. Mardi Gras
necklace?
KAYLA
(Smiles at bra spinning on
ceiling fan)
You guys had way too much fun last
night.
(stoops to pick up pair of
stilettoes)
Snores from under the sheets. Charlie thumps the sheets with
his elbow. Stripper groans.
KAYLA
What was that?
Charlie shrugs. The snores return. Louder. Kayla stomps to
t
he bed, lifts the sheets to see the Stripper out cold.
KAYLA
(to charlie)
You prick.
4.
CHARLIE
Huh, where’d she come from?
KAYLA
(Takes off engagement
ring)
Here, why don’t you have this.
She thrusts the ring on passed out Stripper’s finger.
CHARLIE
Now come on, that wasn’t called
for. Really, you’re acting like a
little girl. Hear me out at least.
Kayla storms out the bedroom.
KAYLA (O.S.)
Go back to England. Die on fish and
chips you piece of shit!
CHARLIE
Come back here for Christ sake!
Charlie tramples over empty beer cans, knocks his shin on the
bed post, yowls. Then shrieks as he steps onto broken tequila
bottle. A shard of glass sticks in his toe.
EXT/INT. MINI COOPER - DAY
Sun rays pelt down on the murderous 405 freeway. A stale mate
of lined up buses, taxis. A melting pot of angry hooting
drivers. Even the wailing ambulance can’t get through this
disrespectful crowd.
Charlie honks his horn at an Arab taxi driver squeezing in on
him. Arab honks back.
CHARLIE
Oi! Fuck you!
ARAB
Jihad!
CHARLIE
Bloody 405. Even on a Saturday it
sucks.
On the passenger side sits MARCUS (mid 30’s) lanky African
American, his head crammed beneath the low roof. He has a
habit of spitting his words, spraying things with saliva
pellets. He strums on an acoustic guitar.
5.
MARCUS
Appreciate the lift Charlie. Say
bro, think you can loan me ten
bucks, just till I get my check.
You know how it is. Hey bro?
CHARLIE
(wipes his cheek)
You still owe twenty from last
week. And the ten before that -
MARCUS
I got my unemployment check coming
next week. It’s cool. You know how
it is. It’s just to get some beers.
I was gonna get Guinness for you,
b
ro.
CHARLIE
There’s a twenty in the ashtray.
MARCUS
Cool. Cool. Me and my brothers be
practicing tonight. Come over.
(strums guitar strings)
Charlie’s lane moves. The Arab shoots through followed by a
Tattooed-face-pierced Gang-Banger in a low rider. Charlie
pounds the horn, keeps it pressed.
Gang Banger aims a .38 at Marcus. Charlie withdraws his hand
from the horn, smiles, waves him through.
MARCUS
Bro, I ain’t wearing no underwear.
And I just crapped my pants.
EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - DAY
Charlie races alongside another Driver to get to the only
vacant parking meter. The Driver beats him. Up ahead a car
pulls out. Charlie reverses, guns the motor. A compact minivan
screeches into the spot.
Charlie wheels into a tight space, left by another driver who
parked his car crooked.
He exits through the passenger side, sidesteps a road
blockade guarding an empty man hole cover. Slips quarters
into the parking meter. Checks his watch - 11:00 PM.
6.
INT. OFFICE - DAY
Movie posters litter the walls. Horror titles like RAZOR
FISH, JESTER, PEEPHOLE. Half nude women, creepy creatures on
each. Charlie sits behind a large desk. Phone to his ear. A
printer stamps out a script report.
Shaking his head, Charlie staples the report to the front of
a thick screenplay labeled MENOPAUSE BLUES. He Stamps PASS
across the front in bold red ink. Tosses the screenplay onto
a staggering pile of other rejected scripts.
He picks up his cell phone, dials. Behind him WINDOW CLEANER
lowers into frame. He Squirts fluid up the glass pane.
INT. WHITE ROOM - DAY
MOM (50’s) a time fighter with tucks, nips, estrogen enhanced
l
ips. Wraparound sun blocker shades on her eyes.
Her knees pinned up almost to her ears. Some fancy yoga
position? INTERMITTENT FLASHES of blue light cast upon her
olive tanned skin.
Seated on a leather couch, Kayla also wears dark sun
blockers. Blue flashes reflect off her glasses as well as Mom
with her legs in the air. With each blue flash, MOM yips,
squirms.
MOM (O.C.)
It’s all for the best. What did
you ever see in that cockney? He’s
not even Jewish. I don’t know why
you don’t marry Sydney. His movie
screens tonight. We’re invited.
It’s a dark Jewish drama.
(She flinches)
DOCTOR (O.C.)
(Chuckles)
Now then Mom, don’t be such a
coward. Keep still.
Jewish DOCTOR also wearing sun blockers, operating mask,
yarmulke, stands between Mom’s legs with a laser gun, burning
hairs. A young female Assistant in sun blockers sweeps the
floor in the background.
MOM
Keep still? Have you had the hairs
zapped off your behind before?
7.
DOCTOR
You kidding? Hurts like hell. Just
thinking about it scares me.
More blue flashes, yips, yells. Doctor pushes back Mom’s
legs.
MOM
Doctor, you’ll make a porn star out
of me.
Doctor chuckles. Cell phone rings. Kayla reaches into
handbag, looks at caller I.D
KAYLA
It’s Charlie’s number.
MOM
Let me talk to him.
Assistant sweeps curly gray hairs into dustpan.
OFFICE - INTERCUT
Window Cleaner squeegees the glass pane in background.
Charlie cups phone to his ear.
CHARLIE (ON PHONE)
Hi Mom. Is Kayla there? I keep
getting her voice mail.
MOM (FILTERED)
Don’t Mom me. My daughter is
through with you. She’s met a nice
Jewish man. Not a dirty catholic
c
ockney like you.
CHARLIE
Already, in just a few hours? I see
she takes after your loose side
then... No, come on I didn’t mean
it -
(dead tone)
Window Cleaner taps at the window. Charlie cuts his eyes at
his merry face. Window cleaner slaps a screenplay against the
window, titled MICROWAVE MASSACRE 2.
Charlie marches to the window, opens it. Traffic blares, wind
howls. Charlie grabs the script, flicks through the first two
pages which consist of one big Character monologue.
8.
WINDOW CLEANER
I’ve washed this window ten times
today waiting for you. This is the
sequel to my last one. Good stuff,
man. Microwaves come to life, start
cooking people. Maximum Overdrive
meets Chopper Chicks in Zombietown -
Charlie shakes his head, stamps PASS on it, hands it back.
Shuts the window.
Window Cleaner spurts fluid up window, writes “ASSHOLE” with
his finger. Punctuates it with a “!.” Charlie lowers the
blinds.
INT. HALLWAY (ELEVATOR) - DAY
Charlie taps his foot on the floor. Checks his watch - 12:57
PM. Elevator doors open. As he enters, MINI SKIRT Woman rolls
her hips onto elevator, chews a wad of gum.
CHARLIE
Going down?
(Leans in to press button)
MINI SKIRT
No.
(Swats his hand aside)
Doors close. Charlie silently curses.
EXT. PARKING SPOT - DAY
METER MAID stands before Charlie’s Mini Cooper, taps
Charlie’s license info into a hand held computer. Charlie
grovels behind her.
CHARLIE
Come on, have some heart, lady. I
was just one minute late.
(She writes out ticket)
I’d be here earlier if that bird
didn’t press the last floor.
(Meter Maid casts a cold
stare at the word bird)
Surely we can come to some sort of
an arrangement here, eh?
(He slips her a ten dollar
bill. She takes it)
9.
Dirty water splashes Charlie from above, sops his clothes to
the skin. A large yellow sponge bounces off his head. Water
trickling down his forehead, he looks up as if to blame God.
WINDOW CLEANER (O.S.)
(bellows)
Ooops!
Meter maid sun-burned, stone faced, rips the ten dollar bill
i
n half. Hands it back to Charlie with a parking fine.
Her serious round red face transforms with a courteous smile.
METER MAID
Have a nice day.
MATCH CUT TO:
INT. GYM - DAY
A red round double end punching bag gets pounded. It bounces
back and forth on its elastic line.
A tired, sweaty Charlie knocks it with a few sharp left
hooks. Followed by quick jabs.
In the background approach two guys in polyester lavender
sweat suits, wearing yarmulkes. The small one, SYDNEY
TEITELBAUM (late 30s) knock kneed diminutive man with an
inflated ego.
TEITELBAUM
Stole your boss’s gym pass, putz?
What else did you steal while he’s
in Brazil?
IRVING (30s) thick necked, bulbous nosed bodyguard grabs the
punching bag with one meaty hand, halts it.
TEITELBAUM
Mom tells me you’ve been bothering
Kayla. Mom tells me to get
involved. Stop you from being a
pest.
(fingers Charlie’s
forehead)
Get it through your thick skull
English man, it’s over. I was her
first and always will be.
(wipes sweaty finger)
10.
Charlie backs away, grabs a towel off a work bench.
Teitelbaum circles him, while Irving remains with punching
bag.
TEITELBAUM
Do you really think Mom would allow
her only daughter to marry a non
Jew?
CHARLIE
I always wondered, Mr. Teteilbaum.
How do you tan your bald head? Do
they make clear yarmulkes?
Behind Charlie, Irving stretches back punching bag as far as
the elastic line permits it.
CHARLIE
Or do you wear a glass ashtray?
TEITELBAUM
(Points behind Charlie)
Don’t look now, it’s opportunity.
Charlie turns just in time to receive a full whack in the
chin from the punch bag, dropping him to the canvas mat.
MATCH CUT TO:
EXT. PARKING LOT - NIGHT
Disco music blares in background. Charlie face down on a
lawn, flutters his eyes open. DUNCAN DONATH, aged comic book
hippy geek stoops to help Charlie to his feet.
CHARLIE
What was I doing on the ground?
DUNCAN
Out cold.
(re Charlie’s eye)
You might wanna get some ice on
that. I know it’s the wrong time to
ask, but did you get a chance to
read my script?
CHARLIE
What script?
(touches his eye, winces)
11.
DUNCAN
Charlie, I’ve only E-mailed it you
umpteen times today.
CHARLIE
Hey, I remember now.
DUNCAN
The script?
CHARLIE
No, what I was doing on the ground.
EXT. BACK YARD (PARTY) - EARLIER
Rich important film industry people gather around a sparkling
pool, make wide exaggerated gestures, toss their heads back
in laughter. A D.J spins disco music.
Charlie nods his head to a babbling Executive. The words
muted to Charlie’s ears. He looks past the executive sees at
the far end Teitelbaum enter with Kayla wearing a fantastic
evening dress, glitter on her skin.
Kayla locks eyes with Charlie amidst the moving crowd.
Charlie disappears behind a small group. She scans the crowd
for him.
He appears behind her with a hug. She giggles, then stiffens,
pushes him away.
KAYLA
You blew it buster. There’s no way
I’m forgiving you for this one.
CHARLIE
For Christ sakes, I was drunk out
my skull. I don’t even remember
anything.
KAYLA
Not good enough. If that’s your
apology.
CHARLIE
It’s not. You’re just blowing this
whole thing way out of proportion.
KAYLA
There was a stripper in your bed.
12.
CHARLIE
So? Doesn’t mean I had sex with
her.
KAYLA
Bull shit.
CHARLIE
I did not have sexual relations
with that woman.
KAYLA
I don’t find it funny.
CHARLIE
Come on, lighten up. Give me one of
those precious smiles I adore so
much, or I’m leaving you for the
blow-up doll.
She cracks a grin.
CHARLIE
There you are. Welcome back.
(He fishes in his pocket)
Look what I found. Try it on.
He pulls out the engagement ring she discarded earlier. He
takes her arm. She yanks her hand behind her back.
KAYLA
No. Don’t.
Teitelbaum butts-in.
TEITELBAUM
Stop bothering her.
CHARLIE
(To Teitelbaum)
Piss off. This is a private
conversation.
Teitelbaum probes a finger at Charlie’s chest.
TEITELBAUM
This is a private party. No
riffraff allowed.
Teitelbaum takes Kayla’s hand, leads her away.
CHARLIE
Kayla - ? Kay?
13.
He tugs Teitelbaum’s jacket. Teitelbaum turns, snarls.
TEITELBAUM
I would be very careful where you
put your grubby fingers, putz.
He shoves Charlie. Charlie shoves back. Teitelbaum grasps
Charlie’s lapels. The two men tug at each other’s jackets,
yank at each other, collapse onto a snack table. It gives
way.
Watchers SHRIEK, GASP.
Tangled on the ground they tear at their clothes. Grunts,
Groans.
KAYLA
Stop it! Stop!
TEITELBAUM
(as they roll on ground)
Your work visa expires in two days.
No Kayla, no green card. No money.
Your boss’s company is on its way
out. You’re just a script reader.
The lowest common denominator.
You’re under a P.A.
They roll into the pool. Splash around. Teitelbaum does a
back stroke, kicks his feet at Charlie. Charlie breast
strokes after him. The better swimmer, Teitelbaum hauls
himself out, stands dripping at the edge.
TEITELBAUM
(Shouts over disco music)
If you’re still in the country past
Wednesday, I’ll set immigration on
you.
Seeing the commotion, plus a small crowd gathering around the
pool, D.J
Stops the music.
CHARLIE
(treading water)
You fucking stinking Jew!
Many heads turn at the party. Particularly yarmulke covered
heads. All eyes, glares at Charlie.
Kayla shakes her head.
14.
EXT. PARKING LOT - NIGHT
Squeaking in his wet shoes, Charlie reaches his Mini Cooper
parked on a front lawn next to expensive Beamers, Chryslers,
limousines. He watches Teitelbaum’s Ferrari pull out of a
space up ahead, then screech by with Kayla in the passenger
side.
Feet scrape behind Charlie. He turns.
IRVING
It’s opportunity.
Irving delivers a sledgehammer blow that lifts Charlie off
his feet. FREEZE FRAME this splendid moment.
EXT. PARKING LOT - LATER
Charlie opens his car door. Duncan pesters him through the
open door.
DUNCAN
What about my screenplay? Will you
read it. Just glance at page one.
It’s all I ask. From there you’ll
be hooked. It’ll change your life.
CHARLIE
(cranks over the engine)
What’s it called? Pitch it to me.
DUNCAN
It’s called This is your life. It’s
not quite finished yet. But I was
hoping you could help me with that.
The script kinda writes itself.
It’s about the discovery of love
over selfishness. Fate. Time -
Charlie shuts the door in Duncan’s face who continues
talking. Reverses out the lot.
Duncan stops talking, drops the act. He beams, watches
Duncan’s car zoom up to the front gates.
15.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Charlie drops his wallet, empties his pockets onto the table.
The engagement ring clatters across the surface, lands on top
of a PARKING FINE. His eye swollen, he flips open a laptop
computer. CHIME RINGS.
COMPUTER
You have new mail, you bastard.
Charlie clicks on the screen. Peels off his sopping clothes.
Strips to his underpants.
CHARLIE
(re screen)
Jesus.
He sits.
SCREEN
100 messages flash, all from Duncan. Charlie clicks on the
download tab. Opens the file labeled “THIS IS YOUR LIFE”
CHARLIE
What the Hell?
SCREEN
The screenplay’s first slugline, sentence reads:
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
CHARLIE COLE’S eyes flutter open, see a blow-up
doll’s face.
Charlie scrolls down the pages, stops. It reads:
Meter maid rips ten dollar bill in half. Hands it back
to Charlie with parking fine.
METER MAID
Have a nice day.
He skips ahead to another page:
SYDNEY TEITELBAUM
Don’t look now. It’s opportunity.
16.
BACK TO SCENE
Charlie warily looks around the room.
CHARLIE
Okay, very funny. Where’s the
cameras? You can come out now guys.
SCREEN
He scrolls to the last page. Sees the last block of action:
Charlie sits in front of the laptop, scratching
his head. He surveys the room looking for a hidden
camera, or someone watching. There is a KNOCK at the
door. (Cursor Flashes at end of sentence)
BACK TO SCENE
Charlie scratches his head, desperately looking for cameras
or someone in the room ready to jump out laughing. A KNOCK on
the door jolts him.
He stands, treads towards the door, peers through the
peephole. A wrinkled OLD WOMAN’s distorted face stares back.
Charlie opens the door. Old Woman’s eyes bulge at Charlie in
his underpants.
OLD WOMAN
(blushes)
He-hello Charlie, have you seen
Tony Curtis today? He’s escaped
again.
(Avoids looking down)
CHARLIE
No, sorry Mrs. Kippler. I just got
in.
Tony Curtis (a black cat) creeps past Charlie’s bruised shin,
bandaged foot, pads into the apartment. Then scoots beneath
the couch. It pops its furry face out, listens to Old Woman
t
alking to Charlie at door.
17.
Charlie closes the door. Returns to the laptop screen. To his
horror, the script has written his exchange with the old
woman. It further types every movement he makes. He waves his
arm.
SCREEN
The following words type themselves:
Charlie foolishly waves his arm.
BACK TO SCENE
CHARLIE
What the fuck is going on?
Wind blows through an open window, a white-tailed pigeon
caught in a light fixture frees itself, flaps around the
apartment. It Kamikazes straight at Charlie who swats the
thing before it circles again then lands on the table.
Tony Curtis exposes his fangs, shoots from under the couch.
He springs onto the table, swipes at the pigeon. It takes off
again. The cat cuts across the laptop’s keyboard TRIGGERS OFF
A FEW LETTERED KEYS with its paws. Then springs into the air,
lands in the kitchen, braking plates. The pigeon, cat
continue to wreak havoc throughout the kitchen.
Plaster crumbles onto Charlie’s head from above. He looks up,
sees the letters “Q T I” burned into ceiling, smoldering hot.
Charlie looks to the screen, sees the cursor blinking at the
end of the letters “Q T I.”
Incredulous, he types on the keyboard. Then looks up at the
ceiling. Nothing.
Until the word he just typed “WANKER” appears scorched two
inches deep into the table’s surface. Smoke lingers over THE
PARKING FINE.
Charlie thinks. Gets an idea. Pigeon, Cat go at it in the
background. Pouncing, flapping.
Charlie scrolls through the screenplay. Cracks his knuckles.
Then types...
18.
INT. OFFICE - DAY
Charlie sits at the desk. Cell phone to his ear.
CHARLIE
...I see she takes after your loose
side then...No, come on I didn’t
mean it -
(dead tone)
Window Cleaner taps at the window in the background. Then as
if pushed, Window Cleaner topples over the edge. Charlie cuts
his eyes to the empty window.
EXT. OFFICE BUILDING - INTERCUT
Rope trails off the edge of scaffold high above Wilshire
Blvd.
Rope attached to his waist, Window Cleaner plummets. The rope
w
raps around his foot, twists him upside down.
Like bungee jumping without the spring action, the rope yanks
his body fifteen feet from the ground. He then swings like a
pendulum closer to the ground, collides into Meter Maid’s
back.
Meter Maid propels forward, smashes through road blockade,
stumbles into open manhole. Her shriek echoes. Then THUD!
Window Cleaner swings back and forth helplessly on his rope.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie stares at PARKING FINE. It FADES AWAY, leaving the
engagement ring that lies on top.
CHARLIE
Holy shit. It’s payback time.
(He taps away)
EXT/INT. MINI COOPER - DAY
Sun rays pelt down on the murderous 405 freeway. A stale mate
of lined up buses, taxis. A melting pot of angry hooting
drivers. Even the wailing ambulance can’t get through this
disrespectful crowd.
19.
Charlie honks his horn at an Arab taxi driver squeezing in on
him. Arab honks back.
CHARLIE
Oi! Fuck you!
ARAB
Jihad!
CHARLIE
Bloody 405. Even on a Saturday it
sucks.
On the passenger side sits MARCUS crammed beneath the low
roof.
MARCUS
Appreciate the lift Charlie. Oh hey
man, here’s those forty dollars I
owe you.
(Takes money out of his
wallet)
I’ll put in the ashtray, huh? With
that twenty I seen in there.
CHARLIE
(wipes his cheek)
Are you ill?
MARCUS
I got my unemployment check coming
next week. It’s cool. I’m just
feeling mighty generous today.
Charlie’s lane moves. The Arab smiles at Charlie, waves him
through. Then CRUNCH! Arab reverses into low rider’s fender
behind him.
The low rider’s driver side opens. A combat boot treads onto
the asphalt. Gang-Banger inspects the dent in his fender.
Caresses it. With a roar like King Kong, he blows the windows
out of the Arab’s cab with blasts from his .38, continues to
P
EPPER the cab’s body.
Gang-banger continues clicking .38 after it’s empty. Arab
pokes his head through glassless window.
ARAB
Why you do this? Bullet holes hurt
resale values. I show you fucker.
Jihad on you, fucker.
20.
Arab emerges with baseball bat, whacks the pop-up lights off
low rider. Cracks the .38 out of Gang-Banger’s hands...
INT. MINI COOPER - INTERCUT
Through the back window, Marcus watches the Gang-Banger, Arab
strangle each other.
MARCUS
Get out of here. People going
crazy, bro.
Before Charlie, the flood of traffic parts to one side, as it
often does for Ambulances. Charlie, Marcus stare at each
other. Charlie shrugs, navigates through the opening.
MARCUS
Must be an ambulance behind us bro,
pull over.
CHARLIE
Fuck that. I don’t see any
ambulance.
(Checks his rear view)
I don’t hear any sirens.
As he rolls past other motorists. Bus Drivers. Cabbies.
Businessmen. All of them wave him through with pleasant
smiles.
MARCUS
Pinch me. I must be dreaming.
CHARLIE
Then I don’t wanna wake up.
EXT. 405 FREEWAY - INTERCUT
Never again will such a site be seen. The mini cooper peals
down the middle lane as vehicles pull over on each side.
EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - DAY
Charlie races alongside another Driver to get to the only
vacant parking meter. The Driver beats him, although fails to
stop. His Ford Sedan jumps the curb, rails down the parking
meter, knocks over a Chasidim Jew pedestrian, then crashes
through front store window.
Incredulous, Charlie pulls into the now empty spot.
21.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie laughs his ass off. His hands come off the keyboard.
Startled, he watches text type itself on the page he is on:
Charlie steps over broken parking meter.
An Injured Jew groans. His hair curls
caught under the Ford’s back wheel.
INT. ELEVATOR - DAY
Charlie enters, MINI SKIRT Woman rolls her hips onto
e
levator, chews a wad of gum.
CHARLIE
Going down?
MINI SKIRT
Why not?
She jerks his pants down, spits her gum out, then sucks him
off. Dumbfounded, Charlie squirms against the back wall.
CHARLIE
Whoa! Easy on me backwheels,
Darling.
Elevator doors CHIME closed. Floor numbers count down.
MATCH CUT TO:
INT. LOBBY - DAY
Elevator doors CHIME open.
A stunned ELDERLY COUPLE reel back.
Charlie spasms. Mini Skirt on her knees, turns around chewing
a wad of...no, not gum.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Words type themselves across the screenplay beyond Charlie’s
control, as a consequence to his meddling.
Charlie regards the engagement ring on the table. Light
glints off its solitary 1.0 carat diamond.
22.
He picks it up, closes it in his palm, lost in thought,
oblivious to Tony Curtis chasing the pigeon up a curtain.
Rubbing his hands together, he blows on them for luck then
scrolls to page one of the screenplay:
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
SUPERIMPOSE the following SLUGLINE - ACTION as it happens on
screen.
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
Charlie sits in bed. The mass pile of
sheets behind him move. Kayla turns.
KAYLA
What was that?
DELETE KAYLA’S DIALOGUE ON SUPERIMPOSITION.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie stabs repeatedly at the delete button.
CHARLIE
Now darling, let’s see. What do I
want you to do...
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
Kayla turns.
SUPERIMPOSE following action - dialogue over scene:
Kayla turns.
KAYLA
I want you to spank me, Charlie.
Right now, in the kitchen.
However, she does not say this. The superimposition does not
match what happens on screen.
KAYLA
What was that?
She stomps over to the bed, strips the sheets off, finds the
Stripper out cold beneath.
23.
KAYLA
You prick.
I
NT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
CHARLIE
(Scowls)
What the Hell?
SCREEN
Charlie deletes Kayla’s dialogue in screenplay. It reappears.
He deletes it again, types the following:
KAYLA
I don’t care if you cheated on me
Charlie. Spank me. Spank me!
The dialogue deletes itself. The following types itself in
it’s place:
KAYLA (O.S.)
Go back to England. Die on fish and
chips you piece of shit!
BACK TO SCENE
CHARLIE
Fuck. I can’t control her.
He scrolls to the beginning of the screenplay. Taps away.
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
Charlie flutters his eyes open. He turns to the snoring
Stripper. Massages his aching head.
CHARLIE
Hey, wake up.
(slaps her face)
Stripper continues to snore. He shakes her. Tugs her hair.
Nothing. Charlie hears sneakers squeaking down the hall
outside his bedroom. The door handle turns. He rushes for the
door, steps on empty beer cans. Shoves his back against the
door.
KAYLA (O.S.)
Charlie?
24.
The handle jiggles. Charlie reaches for a chair as Kayla
pushes forcefully against the door.
KAYLA (O.S.)
Charlie, what’s wrong with the
door?
Charlie drags the chair over, wedges it under the handle.
He cuts his eyes to the window.
OTHER SIDE OF DOOR - INTERCUT
Kayla bangs on the door. She hears a thump.
KAYLA
Open the door. What are you doing
in there?
BEDROOM - INTERCUT
Charlie hauls Stripper wrapped in bed sheets, by her legs
over to open window. He heaves her up, shoves her out. She
thuds onto the fire escape outside, fast asleep.
Quickly, he collects scattered sex toys, Stripper’s clothing,
tosses it out too. He shuts the window. Then moseys on to the
door, removes the chair. Kayla enters, surveys the messy
r
oom.
KAYLA
Spring cleaning, were you?
The red bra still twirls attached to the ceiling fan behind
Charlie.
CHARLIE
You know. I have the oddest sense
of Deja vu right now.
A continuous RAP at the window. Kayla, Charlie turn. On the
fire escape outside, the Stripper huddles in bed sheets
rapping at the glass. Kayla glares at Charlie.
KAYLA
You -
JUMP CUT TO:
25.
MOMENTS EARLIER
Charlie opens the door. Kayla enters.
KAYLA
What was wrong with the door?
CHARLIE
Dunno. Stuck I guess.
Muffled Snores.
KAYLA
What was that?
Charlie shrugs. Kayla treads over to the bed. Peels back the
sheets. Empty.
CHARLIE
What was you looking for?
KAYLA
I must be hearing things.
She trips. Looks down, sees a foot sticking out. She stoops,
yanks the foot from under the bed, hauls out the comatose
Stripper with duct tape stuck across her mouth.
JUMP CUT TO:
MOMENTS EARLIER
Kayla enters, surveys the room. Clean. Nothing there that
shouldn’t be. Charlie lays on the bed without sheets.
KAYLA
So how was the stag party?
The closet door creaks open behind her. The Comatose Stripper
wrapped in sheets with duct tape on her mouth thuds onto the
floor. Out piles sex toys, blow-up doll, rubber dildo.
CHARLIE
Shit.
(Jedi mind trick gesture)
There is no Stripper that just fell
out of the closet.
JUMP CUT TO:
26.
EXT. FIRE ESCAPE (WINDOW) - DAY
Charlie tosses out Stripper’s clothes, sex toys. A giant
dildo whizzes through the air...
DUMPSTER (BENEATH APARTMENT)
The dildo lands in front of pale feet laced in Classic Greek
Sandals.
PERCY ARSOLE (40s) A curious pale fellow with a rotund belly,
dressed in a whiter-than-white toga candida.
He looks up at Charlie’s window, sees him dumping the
Stripper bound in duct tape onto the fire escape. Percy
shakes his head. Casts his head low in disappointment.
He treks the sidewalk toting a Travelpro carry-on case.
EXT. BEVERY BLVD - DAY
The sidewalks bustle with pedestrians. Except in this new
world guys wearing togas follow closely behind every living
person - the world of INVISIBLE GUARDIAN ANGELS. Percy
trudges sadly, toting the Travelpro past...
HOT DOG STAND
Business Man takes a whopping bite on his sausage. Mustard,
mayonnaise drips down his chin. Three hungry guys in togas
(
Angels) stand around him, drooling.
SYNAGOGUE
Percy journeys past as yarmulke-wearing Angels emerge from
entrance. An extremely orthodox Chasidim Jew enters the
synagogue followed by two Bearded Angels in broad-rimmed hats
lugging a large suitcase.
MOSQUE
Turban-wearing Angels hubbub out the entrance. A morose Percy
intersects the crowd.
27.
ST. VICTOR’S CATHOLIC CHURCH
Angels stream through the doors. Black. Asian. Gay.
Percy stops at the glass doors etched with Gabriel, Michael
archangel images. Percy makes sign of the cross, vanishes
through...
VESTIBULE (ST. VICTOR’S)
Percy moseys up the Church’s nave to...
STATUE OF CHRIST
Percy pokes Christ in the eyes. This opens a secret
passageway in the wall - a tunnel of bright light. He enters.
The tunnel swallows him.
WHITE
FADE IN: WOMAN in white types on a MAC behind a white oak
desk. Percy toting the Travelpro, storms past Angel,
enters...
WHITE OFFICE
Woman bursts in behind Percy. Angel Paintings adorn each side
of the white walls. Sunshine streams through a large window
behind GOD (2020s) hunched over a putter in mid swing. The
sudden intrusion jolts his concentration.
He clips the golf ball. It rolls towards the putting cup way
off target. God scowls, waves his hand. Golf ball jerks back
on correct course, enters the cup.
God smiles. Not an average looking god, looks more like a
tourist. Sunblocked nose, Hawaiian shirt. A long trademark
beard, however.
FEMALE
Sorry for the intrusion. This
gentile barged in without an
appointment.
GOD
Leave us, Woman.
She obeys, closes door.
28.
PERCY
H
ow was your vacation?
GOD
I had to cancel my plans. The
Klingons were rioting. Someone
stole the sword of Kahless again.
PERCY
I must apologize, but it appears
Duncan has escaped the Pit and
humanized himself on earth. He has
given my client Charlie the power
to tamper with his fate.
God slits his eyes, scrutinizes Percy.
GOD
Percy, where the Devil is your
soul?
PERCY
Again forgive me, but as a last
resort I embodied a pigeon to try
and prevent my client from using
the fate altering powers.
GOD
A pigeon? And did you succeed?
PERCY
No. Duncan was one step ahead of
me, possessing the body of a cat.
At this moment our souls clash.
God waves his hand. An image of Tony Curtis swiping at the
cornered pigeon appears in the center of the room then fades.
PERCY
My powers are limited on earth. If
only you could lend me a helping
hand with my client.
GOD
You will make do with your
Angelical powers. Your purpose is
guidance. To whisper to his
conscience. Make him see the light.
29.
PERCY
I cannot get through to the man.
His low vibration diet and
lifestyle clouds his conscience.
Prevents my divine guidance.
Percy opens his Travelpro. Note book papers scatter over the
floor.
PERCY
(re papers)
These are all his sins...the past
two days. I have ten more suitcases
in storage. I can’t handle it.
GOD
I do not have time for this. I must
return to Qo'noS and present a new
set of commandments to end the
Klingons’ rebellion.
PERCY
But surely you will not allow
Duncan to get away with this.
Punish him with lightning.
GOD
Duncan is your problem. He’s only
doing this to get back at you for
snitching on him last millennium.
Besides I cannot touch your client.
He’s an atheist. And you have
failed to turn him into a believer.
PERCY
Forgive me. I will try harder.
Through the window a cattle truck idles. God faces it.
GOD
The eating of food is the cardinal
sin for Angels. Yet every day we
send truckloads to the Pit. Duncan
was a good angel. If only he had
stayed away from that hotdog.
Outside, a Red Horned Monster whips a line of Angels into
formation, prods them into the cattle truck.
An angel with tattoos. An angel with mustard stains on toga.
The last angel with Punk hairstyle.
30.
GOD
I believe fate has it that your
client’s former fiance Kayla beds
Sydney Teitelbaum at midnight. That
gives you precisely two hours earth
time to make sure these two souls
unite in Holy matrimony.
PERCY
This I will do.
God waves his hand. The door opens. Percy moves towards it.
GOD
If you should fail or break the
rules, cause any harm to your
client. It is the Pit for you I’m
afraid. Just detour Charlie from
winning Kayla’s heart. They must
not end up together.
Percy steps into hallway.
GOD
One second, Percy.
(strokes his beard)
I’ve had this beard for over 2000
years. Do you think I should shave?
EXT. PARKING LOT - NIGHT
Disco music blares in background. Charlie face down on a
lawn, flutters his eyes open. Duncan stoops, helps Charlie to
his feet.
CHARLIE
(Speaks like a stroke
victim)
What the hell is going on? You sent
me that script. Why?
(Speech returns to normal)
What the hell. What’s happening?
Who’s doing the talking?
(Stroke victim)
It’s me I’m at my computer with the
script you sent me.
(Normal speech)
Help me. Who’s words just come out
of my mouth? Help!
(clenches his head)
31.
DUNCAN
Relax. Let me talk to Charlie. Stay
calm. I want to talk to Charlie.
Charlie, are you there?
CHARLIE
(stroke victim)
Yeah, I’m here typing away. I’m all
ears. You got some s’plaining to
do.
(normal)
I
’m off my rocker. Insane.
DUNCAN
Okay, not much time to enlighten
you here. So I’ll get to the point.
Charlie, I know your future.
CHARLIE
You’re a palm reader? Oh shit I
must be having acid flashbacks.
(stroke victim)
Shut up Charlie. Let me listen.
DUNCAN
When the clock strikes twelve,
everything will end. You’ll wake up
with no memory of any of this. Me,
the script. Nothing.
CHARLIE
Oh God, you’re a hypnotist.
(stroke victim)
Will you please shut up.
Veins bulge on Charlie’s temples.
DUNCAN
Dang, You’re starting to brain
fart. I must advise you not to put
words in your own mouth that forces
your present self to recognize your
existence. It damages the brain
cells and can result in permanent
schizophrenia.
CHARLIE
Brain farts? No shit.
DUNCAN
Relax. Let Charlie do the talking.
This will all be over soon.
32.
DUNCAN(cont'd)
Once you skip to an earlier scene
you won’t remember this. You won’t
remember this conversation. You
still have about 150 billion brain
cells left.
(Checks a stainless steel
pocket watch)
Okay you’re presently losing brain
cells at the rate of 70 million
neurons per second.
CHARLIE
70 million! Oh God!
(Vein pops)
DUNCAN
Blast. 90 million now.
(watches the big hand tick
on his pocket watch)
We have 45 seconds of conversation
left before you risk too much of a
neuron loss for such a young age,
or worse...death by brain fart.
CHARLIE
What the fuck you talking about?
Who am I? Where am I?
DUNCAN
This is the opportunity of a
lifetime. Your self, the person
before me right now has no
awareness of your other self
presently sitting in your
underpants in front of your laptop.
CHARLIE
(stroke victim)
T
ell me about the screenplay.
DUNCAN
You can jump from scene to scene,
manipulate characters, put words in
their mouths, make them squeal like
a pig, jump through hoops. The
world is at your fingertips. I
advise you, however, not to abuse
the power or it will weaken when
you most need it.
CHARLIE
(Stroke Victim)
What about Kayla? Why can’t I get
her to do what I want?
33.
DUNCAN
Love, hate my friend. Are values.
You can’t control any person at
either end of this value. Only
those in the midpoint. Those you
feel indifference to.
CHARLIE
(stroke victim)
Love? I don’t believe in love.
She’s just a nice piece of ass and
a Green Card to me. Plus she’s
rich.
(normal)
Who said that?
(stroke victim)
Silence!
DUNCAN
You’re in denial friend. You don’t
allow yourself to fall in love. But
true love is indomitable. You’ll
come round.
(grabs Charlie’s palm)
I chose this day. Because it’s the
turning point in your life.
(thumbs a split on
Charlie’s life line)
See this splice? Sadly at midnight
you lose Kayla to Sydney
Teitelbaum. Tonight they are
destined to fornicate - I mean
consummate their romance. Your boss
applies for bankruptcy. You
overstay your welcome in America
until they deport you back to
England doomed to live a bleak
existence as a butcher in your
father’s business. You can change
all that. You have exactly two
hours earth time to win Kayla back.
You must marry her to change your
destiny.
Charlie froths at the mouth. An epileptic fit seizes his
body. Duncan takes off his belt, forces it in Charlie’s mouth
to stop him biting his tongue.
DUNCAN
Dang it! You’re going into shock.
Ten seconds left. You need to get
out of this scene quick. Go back to
earlier. 3,2...
34.
INT. GYM - DAY
A tired, sweaty Charlie knocks a double end red punching bag
with a few sharp left hooks. Followed by quick jabs.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Slumped in the chair, Charlie wipes epileptic froth from his
slobbering mouth.
CHARLIE
Jesus.
(envelops his head)
Ow.
Charlie gazes at wall clock. The time: 10:01. He returns to
laptop.
INT. GYM - DAY
Behind Charlie, Irvin pulls back the punching bag as far as
the elastic allows.
TEITELBAUM
(Points behind Charlie)
Don’t look now, it’s opportunity.
Pushed by invisible forces, Charlie drops to the floor. The
punching bag pops Teitelbaum in the face, knocks off his
Yarmulke, exposing a pale bald spot. He drops to his knees,
clutches his face.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
No opportunity knocks twice, slap
head.
(Keyboard Typing noises)
Bewildered Charlie taps his legs, wondering what’s wrong with
them. Irving consoles Teitelbaum who swats him away.
TEITELBAUM
Schlemiel! Vantz! Putznasher!
Irving cuts his eyes to Charlie. Stomps towards him. Off-
Screen TYPING. SUPERIMPOSE:
Irving trips, falls flat on his face.
Yet Irving does not. He hauls Charlie up in the air slams him
down on weight bench. Off-Screen TYPING. SUPERIMPOSE:
35.
Irving and Teitelbaum passionately make out.
Teitelbaum dusts off his yarmulke, clips it back on. Irving
pins Charlie with a 300 .lb barbell.
TEITELBAUM
(to Irving)
He should get the L.A hernia.
Charlie writhes beneath the weights as Teitelbaum, Irving
stroll out.
Charlie grunts, heaves. The breath knocked out of him.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
As if the weights were on him right now, Charlie, asthmatic,
struggles to get his finger onto the keyboard, manages to
t
ype a few words with one hand.
INT. GYM - DAY
Three Decrepit Old Men strain, wheeze, unable to lift the 300
.lb barbell. A steroid muscled BODYBUILDER moseys on over,
lifts the barbell with one hand. Charlie rubs his chest.
CHARLIE
Thanks man.
BODYBUILDER
Man? Name’s Rita, asshole.
She replaces barbell on Charlie’s chest. His eyes bulge.
INT. PAID PARKING GARAGE - DAY
Teitelbaum, Irving march past the lines of cars at each side
towards a parked BMW in the foreground. They halt at
Charlie’s parked Mini Cooper. Irving flicks a blade from his
pocket knife, stabs the tire.
Percy squats alongside the BMW towards the rear tire. He
unzips a white bumbag strapped to his waist. Takes out a
white photodiode micro chip, sticks it onto the back tire. A
red light blinks. Percy sets a stainless steel pocket watch
to two o clock.
36.
INT. BMW - DAY
Teitelbaum opens the door, slides his hands across the slick
leather upholstery, sits. SANZEN CRAPINON (40s) a yarmulke
wearing angel enters STRAIGHT THROUGH Teitelbaum, takes the
seat besides him. Then Percy enters doing the ghost trick.
PERCY
(to Sanzen)
Budge up. Budge up.
(sits in the middle)
SANZEN
You putz. This isn’t your client.
You’re not Jewish either. Get out!
PERCY
I just need a ride up the road. Is
that okay? I promise to be quiet.
SANZEN
Switch seats with me then. You’re
too close to my client.
Sanzen crosses over Percy’s lap, trades places. Quite
awkward.
INT. PAID PARKING GARAGE - MOMENTS LATER
Charlie arrives at his car, sees the tire slit, punctured. He
cuts his eyes to The BMW pulling up at the valet booth. He
shakes his head, opens the trunk, reaches for a spare.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
Oh no you don’t. You get your ass
after them!
Off-screen TYPING.
Charlie’s arms move uncontrollably, slam the trunk shut. He
spins around against his will. His legs carry him into a
sprint through the garage.
CHARLIE
What the fuck? What’s happening to
me?
37.
EXT. SANTA MONICA BLVD - CONTINUOUS
Charlie sprints out of the parking structure, sees the BMW
stop at the light. A cab approaches. His hand forcefully
shoots up in the air. He looks at it suspiciously. The cab
driver halts. Charlie gets in.
CHARLIE
(mumbles)
I must be going crazy.
CABBIE
Where to bud?
CHARLIE
(to himself)
G
od, what a cliche.
(to cabbie)
Er, follow that car.
(points to BMW)
INT. BMW - DAY
Teitelbaum, Sanzen, Percy sit quietly in the back seat.
Through the back window Charlie’s cab follows. Percy checks
his pocket watch.
SANZEN
Enough with the watch, already.
That’s the fourth time in the last
minute you-you Chiam Yankel.
Percy ignores his Yiddish insults. Focuses tightly on the
dial ticking, ticking...BANG!
The car brakes, swerves. All three hurl forward into the
front seats.
TEITELBAUM
What was that?
IRVING (O.C.)
Blown a tire. I’ll pull over. It’s
a quick fix.
Teitelbaum opens the door. Sanzen boils with anger.
SANZEN
(to Percy)
Get out! Shmendrek.
38.
EXT. LOVER’S PARK - INTERCUT
Against a back drop of green grass, tress, Kayla with Mom
speed-walk in their sweat suits past...Eighty Year Old Man
tonguing a College Girl on a bench...A Biker Chick hugging a
Business Executive...A Wino fondling a Delighted Secretary.
MOM
What will you wear for the premiere
tonight?
KAYLA
I don’t feel like going, Mom.
MOM
You will go. End of discussion.
Sydney would be so disappointed. He
has a surprise for you.
ROADSIDE - INTERCUT
Irving cranks the lug nuts off wheel. Teitelbaum paces back
and forth OUTSIDE LOVER’S PARK. He doesn’t see Kayla with Mom
speed-walking between a clearing in the tree line.
Percy unzips a different compartment on his bumbag. Takes out
a snow ball, rolls it in his hands. He performs a major
league pitcher stance. Spits to one side. Slings the snow
ball...
LOVER’S PARK
Snow ball travels so fast that it ignites, heads straight for
Kayla’s head. POOF! The snow ball disintegrates into sparking
f
lakes.
Kayla stops dead in her tracks, overcome by divine guidance.
She turns her head, recognizes Sydney standing next to the
BMW.
ROADSIDE
In the background beyond Sydney, Kayla waves.
KAYLA
(whistles, then)
Sydney!
39.
Hearing his name, Sydney turns to see Kayla. His eyes
lighten. Figuratively, his brain turns to smoosh. His Heart
melts.
LOVER’S PARK - TIME CUT
At a fountain spurting water, a 6 foot 8’ African American
holds hands with a Caucasian Transvestite Midget. Kayla,
Teitelbaum stroll past.
TEITELBAUM
So, are you coming? I reserved a
seat for you right next to me. It’s
a very important night. I want
everyone to see how beautiful you
are. To envy me...
Behind them, Charlie pokes his head through a bush.
LOVER’S PARK (GATE ENTRANCE) - INTERCUT
Percy stands at the threshold, looking up at the gate’s
emblem engraved at the arched top - a golden Cupid pointing a
gold tipped arrow.
Percy nervously looks up at the trees, peers around the
column. He looks down at a MAGICAL GLOWING BLUE LINE that
intersects the pavement. As if stepping into a cold river,
Percy hesitates, then treads one foot over the blue line.
Birds sing. Percy hunches, freezes. Closes his eyes tight.
Opening one eye at a time, he nervously looks around.
Everything okay, he brings in his other foot, crosses under
the arch.
PFFFT! An arrow shoots through Percy’s stomach. He screams,
painfully tugs at it. PFFFFT! Another stabs his kidney.
PFFFT! PFFFT! Two more penetrate heart, lungs.
Percy howls, collapses to the ground, driving the arrows up
deeper, sticking out his back. He crawls helplessly, reaches
a
fat hairy-toed GOLD FOOT in Roman Sandals.
Percy whimpers, looks up, sees CUPID (40s) An obese man with
GOLD SKIN, wearing only white Speedo briefs. He towers
menacingly over Percy with a gold tipped cedar arrow loaded
into a Recurve Bow.
CUPID
(talks like New York
Cabbie)
40.
CUPID(cont'd)
You crossed the line, pal. Parks
are off limits to Angels. Whacha
doin’ in here?
PERCY
Please. I’ve come for your help.
For the love of God, remove these
arrows...
PARK BENCH
A Lesbian Couple mooch past, holding hands. Kayla lifts her
Nike sneaker onto bench, ties her shoelace. Teitelbaum sits.
BAG LADY (30s). Her fat ass pokes in the air as she rummages
through trash can, tossing beer, Pepsi cans into her busted
up K-mart cart. Leaves rustle. Charlie thrusts his head
through barberry shrubs. He eagle eyes Teitelbaum who has his
hand on Kayla’s thigh.
OAK TREE
Cupid sits on a high branch that bends under his weight. He
scratches his balls. Percy stands at the tree’s base,
swabbing his wounds through the ripped toga with a damp
cotton ball. Note: From here on toga will look like moths
chomped on it.
PERCY
(points at Kayla)
Do you have a clear shot? Do you
see her? Do you?
CUPID
Yeah, I see the dame.
PERCY
Quickly, quickly before you lose
your chance.
Cupid withdraws a cedar arrow from his shoulder pouch. He
loads it into the bow. Patient. Calm.
PERCY
Hurry up. Just do it already.
CUPID
I’ve been doin’ this for over 2000
years. I don’t need your help. I
must first study the target.
(sights Kayla)
Hear her pulse.
41.
CUPID(cont'd)
(Kayla’s HEART BEATS)
Become one with her. Penetrate her.
(inhales deeply, exhales)
Release the mechanism.
Silence.
Not even a bird chirps. No Ambient noise. Nothing. Percy
yaps, jumps up and down, but no sound can be heard - Cupid is
in the zone.
He draws back the arrow, hearing ONLY THE SQUEAK OF WAXED BOW
STRING pulling back. His disarranged armpit hairs dangle.
The peacock feather delicately BRUSHES against his gold skin.
The pupil in his deep blue eye amplifies.
TWANG! PFFFT! The gold tip arrow sails through the air,
heading for its mark...
PARK BENCH
It GLIDES chest level between Kayla, Teitelbaum, loses height
then impales Bag lady’s ass. Jars her body.
Her eyes spring in their sockets.
Charlie emerges from barberry shrubs swiping off leaves. Bag
Lady fixes her eyes on him. Little red hearts form in her
pupils. She smiles. In dire need of toothpaste perhaps a
little flossing too. A root canal definitely.
OAK TREE
CUPID
(squints)
Oh, oh. I hit the ass. That’s not
good.
PERCY
You hit the wrong ass. You missed.
You idiot!
Cupid sees Teitelbaum, Kayla leave the bench. He loses his
cool, calm demeanor, slings another arrow into his bow. Aims.
Now he has a moving target. Kayla, Teitelbaum stroll behind
the Mismatched Couples from earlier. Protected.
Cupid sweats, looking for a clear shot. He loses them as they
cross behind a tree into safe area.
42.
Cupid swings down from tree like a giant ape. Masses of
armpit hairs needing a serious trimming. He tumbles on
ground.
PERCY
You blew it!
Cupid hustles his weight down hill. Percy scuttles behind
him...
PATH
Their sandaled feet scurry in unison. Percy can’t help but
notice all of the Mismatched Couples have Cupid’s arrows
embedded in odd places of their bodies. Kneecap. Forehead.
Ear. A little out of shape, Cupid remains a few feet behind
P
ercy.
PERCY
(As they run)
You’re blind aren’t you? You can’t
see a thing. Just look at all the
chaos in this park.
(passes more Mismatched
Couples)
You’ve mixed it all up. Old with
young. Blacks with whites. Same
sexes. You’re as blind as a bat!
CUPID
If I’m blind. Then why is there an
arrow sticking out of your ass.
PERCY
What arrow?
CUPID
This arrow.
Cupid shoots arrow into Percy’s ass. Percy shrieks. Continues
to run. Cupid stops. Loads another arrow...
TRASH CAN
Bag lady clings to Charlie’s pants leg. He shakes his leg all
over the place. She grapples on.
BAG LADY
Take me with you!
43.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie, perplexed, taps away at the keyboard.
CHARLIE
What the Hell? Fucking Bag lady.
Get off me. Do as I write you.
EXT. TRASH CAN - DAY
A group of JOGGERS approach in background. Bag lady crawls up
Charlie’s pants, wraps around him, kisses him all over.
CHARLIE
Oi! Cut it out. Control yourself.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
I’ll fix you, you smelly bum!
Off-screen TYPING. SUPERIMPOSE:
Joggers stumble, collide on top of Bag Lady.
Joggers uncontrollably trip over their big feet. Find
themselves stumbling over to Charlie. They collide on top of
them. A heap of bodies. Charlie squirms from beneath the
rubble. Escapes.
GATED PARK ENTRANCE - INTERCUT
Swiss-cheesed with arrows, Percy dashes towards the park’s
arched exit. Cupid trails behind, slings another arrow into
his bow.
CUPID
I don’t tell you how to do your
job. Get out of my park, shit head!
PFFFT! Another arrow in Percy’s ass. Another howl, as he
c
rosses the threshold, exits under the archway...
Kayla, Teitelbaum oblivious to Percy’s screams or existence,
as he dashes past...
TEITELBAUM
(holds both her hands)
I’ll pick you up then for a late
lunch. I’ll bring the limo,
say...3:30?
44.
TEITELBAUM(cont'd)
(off Kayla’s nod)
Wear the red dress I bought you.
He goes in for the kiss. She gives him the cheek. Teitelbaum
strides to his BMW idling at the curb. He gets in. Irving
guns the motor down the road...
TRASH CAN - INTERCUT
Joggers pick themselves off ground, dust themselves off.
JOGGER #1
(to other joggers)
Awfully sorry. I don’t know what
happened. I got giddy.
JOGGER #2
My mind became clouded. I felt
dizzy.
JOGGER #3
Oh no, it’s happening.
(looks in air, where a
plane crosses)
It must be Anthrax. They’ve dumped
Anthrax over L.A. We’re all
infected. Doomed...
Spread-eagled, sunken into grass, Bag Lady lifts her face to
spit out dust. She reaches for a wallet. Glee spreads across
her face as she flips it open, sees Charlie’s California
Driver’s license.
GATED PARK ENTRANCE - INTERCUT
Charlie emerges from under the archway. Kayla turns, feigns
indifference.
KAYLA
Stalker.
CHARLIE
I’ll say. Have you been following
me all morning?
KAYLA
I’m not in the mood, Charlie. Go
away.
CHARLIE
It’s been a crazy day, Kayla. Just
give me one moment of your time.
45.
CHARLIE(cont'd)
Then I’ll go. Strange things are
happening all over today. I get
urges. I do things beyond my
control. Like this...
(He tickles her)
KAYLA
Stop it. Stop. You’re crazy.
(she giggles)
CHARLIE
I can’t help it if women jump in my
bed. I’m irresistible. Women are
drawn to me like fish on chips.
KAYLA
I’m not forgiving you.
CHARLIE
I swear nothing happened with the
stripper. You know how I know why?
I woke up in my underpants. Think
about it? Why would I be wearing
u
nderpants if I had sex all night?
KAYLA
How do I know you didn’t put them
on before I walked in on you.
CHARLIE
Trust?
KAYLA
Fat chance, buster.
CHARLIE
Look what I’ve had carried in my
pocket all day.
(produces engagement ring)
Try it on. Give me until the end of
the day. If you’re not satisfied
with me, give it back.
KAYLA
How do you intend to make me
satisfied?
CHARLIE
Let’s start with a bite to eat.
I’ll pick you up. What’s a good
time for you?
46.
KAYLA
I need time to get ready. Shower.
Shave. My legs that is.
CHARLIE
Disgusting. Okay. I wouldn’t take
you anywhere with hairy legs. Half
past three good?
KAYLA
No. Come later. 3:50
Charlie nods, turns to see Mom emerge from park, huffing,
puffing in her shiny nylon tracksuit.
MOM
Kayla. Come here, get away from
him.
CHARLIE
Nice to see you too, Mom. Like the
training outfit. Did you buy it
new?
(to Kayla)
See you at 3:50 then. Later.
He strolls off.
MOM
You are not seeing him later.
KAYLA
It’s okay, Mom. I won’t be around
when he shows up.
ALLEY - INTERCUT
Percy tugs at the last arrow, removing it from his spine.
Drops it on pile of others. He dabs his tattered toga holes
with a wet cotton swab, winces with each touch.
He staggers out of Alley onto...
SUNSET BLVD
A Wino sits on the pavement, snores. His back against the
wall. A puddle of urine trickles out around him. Next to Wino
sits BUM ANGEL wearing a toga sordita, a dirty and worn toga
reserved for the lower class Angels. Percy compares his own
state with the scruffy haired Angel before him.
47.
BUM ANGEL
Spare me some magic, brother?
Percy unzips his bumbag, gives Bum Angel a few magic snow
balls, a handful of white photodiode micro chips.
BUM ANGEL
God bless.
MOTORCYCLE RENTAL STORE (SUNSET BLVD) - INTERCUT
Charlie strolls past the display window. Light flashes glint
off the showcase V-rod 700cc+ Harley. As if entranced,
following the pied piper, Charlie enters...
EAGLE RIDER RENTAL
Behind the register, rolling a joint, HELLS ANGEL DUDE (60’s)
gray pony tail, tats from hand to shoulder. 666 stamped on
his t-shirt.
DUDE
(without looking up)
What can I do you for?
CHARLIE
How much to rent the Harley in the
window?
DUDE
Not for rent, dude. That’s my
puppy. Built with my own hands.
(Shows shovel sized
callused hands)
Brake calipers and rotors worth
eight grand alone. I got’s a 1450
cc Model you can have for $130 a
day.
Off-screen TYPING. SUPERIMPOSE:
DUDE
Hell, you know what? Take it for a
spin.
Dude’s face twitches. As if he had Parkinson’s, He SAYS the
dialogue superimposed above.
CHARLIE
No shit?
48.
DUDE
(movements return to
normal)
Fuck you. I wouldn’t let you smell
it. Get the fuck out.
(OFF-SCREEN TYPING. Ticks,
twitches return)
Just kidding. All I need’s a Visa.
CHARLIE
Shit. I can’t find my wallet.
Off-screen TYPING. SUPERIMPOSE:
DUDE
(involuntary muscle spasm)
That’s cool, dude. Just give me
your address. Pay later.
Dude SAYS above dialogue. Off-screen TYPING continues over...
EAGLE RIDER - TIME CUT
Resisting. Twitching. Dude wheels the V-rod to Garage exit. A
magnificent chrome plated sparkling beast. Charlie wears DOT
h
alf shell helmet.
DUDE
She’s never been tipped over, laid
down or even breathed upon wrong.
He hands it to Charlie. Too heavy, the bulky beast tips over,
crashes on cement ground. Silence.
DUDE
Son of a bitch.
Dude’s grips Charlie’s throat...
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Seated at the laptop, Charlie chokes, grasps at imaginary
hands crushing his neck. His face reddens. Eyes bulge, near
to popping from sockets.
INT. EAGLERIDER GARAGE - INTERCUT
Dude’s callused hands choke Charlie’s neck.
49.
DUDE
Cocksucker!
He picks Charlie up, hurls him against back wall...
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie hits his living room wall, slides down. Coughing,
heaving, he crawls towards laptop. An imaginary blow rolls
him across floor...
INT. EAGLERIDER GARAGE - INTERCUT
Dude boots Charlie across floor.
DUDE
I’ll teach you, motherfucker!
Dude whips out of his waistband a 9mm Glock, aims it at
Charlie, cocks it...
INT. LIVING ROOM - INTERCUT
Charlie pulls himself up the table’s leg. On computer screen,
words type themselves automatically. Charlie grabs the mouse,
scrolls up screenplay’s page. Left clicks. Rapidly types...
INT. EAGLERIDER GARAGE - INTERCUT
TYPING...Dude hands V-rod to Charlie. Too heavy, the bulky
beast tips over, crashes on cement ground. Silence.
DUDE
(Myoclonic hand jerks)
It’s okay dude. It happens. Let me
get that for you.
Dude heaves V-rod up. Digs in his pockets. Tosses a sterling
silver human skull keyring to Charlie. Mid flight, Charlie
catches the keys.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Dude’s skull keyring with the V-rod’s key attached
materializes on Charlie’s table. Charlie picks the keys up.
H
e cuts his eyes to window.
50.
Opening the window, a strange vibrating hum sounds from
below, coming from a cardboard box. Parked at the curb,
Charlie sees the not so amazing V-rod charred, scratched. A
wheel missing.
Perplexed, Charlie turns, watches the annoying pigeon land on
the table. It hops towards laptop, coos. Tony Curtis leaps
onto table, hisses. Pigeon flaps away, circles the room. Cat
and Pigeon chase continues.
EXT. CURB BY DUMPSTER - DAY
Outside Charlie’s apartment, Bag Lady rolls her cart, stops
next to V-rod Harley Davidson parked curbside.
She matches address on Charlie’s driver’s license to address
on building.
INT. LUXURY BATHROOM - INTERCUT
Teitelbaum, Irving bathe together in giant bubbling steamy
jacuzzi, drinking champagne. They still wear their yarmulkes.
IRVING
Which car do you want to use this
afternoon? BMW. Porsche. Limo. Or
will you be taking the Ferrari?
TEITELBAUM
Limousine. And stock it with a few
bottles of Dom Perignon.
A rubber duckie floats across the water. It wears a yarmulke.
INT. SHOWER - INTERCUT
Charlie scrubs his soap-sudded back. Sings U2’s “BEAUTIFUL
DAY.” Or at least tries too. Sounds more like chickens at
feed time. DOORBELL RINGS.
FRONT DOOR (HALLWAY) - TIME CUT
Charlie in tattered bathrobe, opens door. Nobody there. He
peers into hallway to his left then jumps as he comes face to
face with Bag Lady to his right. She has applied lipstick,
dressed herself up in Salvation Army’s best.
51.
BAG LADY
Hello...Charlie.
CHARLIE
Behave now. What do you want?
BAG LADY
I was too forward before. I fear it
m
ay have put you off.
CHARLIE
Are you bonkers? I mean, crazy?
BAG LADY
Let’s do lunch. My treat. I have
food stamps.
Charlie slams the door in her face.
BAG LADY
(opens Charlie’s wallet)
It was love at first sight, Charlie
Rupert Cole. Driver’s license
D5437...
The door opens.
CHARLIE
Gimme that. Swamp donkey.
(swipes his wallet out of
her hands)
He slams door back in her face. Dejected, she mulls down the
hallway.
EXT. DUMPSTER (BELOW CHARLIE’S APT) - DAY
Charlie throws trash bag, blow-up doll into dumpster, hops on
to Harley. Fires it up, revs down the alley.
From under the fire escape, Bag Lady emerges from cardboard
box.
At the dumpster, she rummages through Charlie’s trash, takes
out fish net stocking, playful pony-braided anal beads, the
“ass hammer.”
52.
EXT. BEVERLY BLVD - DAY
Charlie guns the V-rod’s motor up to a red light
intersection, checks his watch: 3:20 PM.
A limousine rolls up next to Charlie. The tinted back
passenger window winds down. Charlie turns, sees Teitelbaum’s
happy mug staring at him.
A Dom Perignon bottle comes into view. Its cork POPS off,
stabs Charlie’s eye. Teitelbaum busts his gut, torments
Charlie with irritating laughter, sprays him with champagne.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie covers his eye, winces. The hand comes down. The eye
black, bruised.
CHARLIE
Right. You son of a bitch. Here’s
mud in your eye.
(FAST TYPING)
EXT. BEVERY BLVD - DAY
Charlie waits at the red light on his V-rod. His head
twitches, twisted by invisible hand. He sees the Limo
approach in the side mirror. It’s custom made license plate
reads: 100% JEWISH.
Charlie scowls. His body further spins unnaturally, hands dig
i
nto side saddle bag.
INT. LIMO - INTERCUT
Teitelbaum sips Champagne. The glimmering chrome plated
Harley commands his attention. He turns, his eyes narrow...
TEITELBAUM
Irving! It’s the English fellow.
He opens the mini fridge, takes out Dom Perignon bottle.
Shakes it.
EXT. BEVERY BLVD - INTERCUT
The limo’s window slowly whirs down, revealing Teitelbaum’s
thrilled eyes...
53.
Charlie remains still as rock.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
Hold.
Window reaches past Teitelbaum’s fat nose.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
Hold.
Window passes Teitelbaum’s shit-eating grin
CHARLIE (V.O.)
Now!
Charlie whips around, blasts Teitelbaum’s face with whipped
cream. Teitelbaum gags. Covers up. Charlie sprays his
yarmulke. The window whirs up as Charlie continues to empty
can’s contents through opening.
The light changes. Charlie guns the Harley, sprays a streak
of whipped cream down the entire limo’s length.
THE CHASE
Charlie floors it...at 10 miles per hour. Bloody L.A traffic!
The limo catches up swiftly, bumps into Harley. Harley’s
chrome chips limo’s finish. Charlie careens to the side
inexperienced at handling the beast.
Traffic lightens up. Limo races ahead a few cars. Charlie
speeds along side Teitelbaum, gives him the finger.
Covered in whipped cream, looking like a dessert, Teitelbaum
hangs through the divisor over Irving’s shoulder.
TEITELBAUM
Kuck ind faall! Hit him now!
(yanks steering wheel)
Limo swerves into opening ahead of Charlie, strikes curbside
fire hydrant. It cracks. Gushes water over outdoor seated
diners at Cafe. The limo blocks the road. Charlie skews off,
j
umps the curb...Penetrates water cloud.
MATCH CUT TO:
54.
EAGLERIDER RENTAL (GARAGE) - 2 DAYS AGO
Smoke cloud. Dude breaks through, joint in his lips. Strokes
the chrome fittings on his precious V-rod. Straightens, rubs
his sore back. PHONE RINGS. Dude saunters to phone.
Greased up Mexican Mechanic jams a screwdriver in V-rod’s
rear wheel.
DUDE
(While walking away)
Dude, tighten real good those rear
brake caliper screws to the swing
arm, or else they’ll come lose when
I ride her. If the caliper comes
off its mount. Deep shit. No rear
brakes.
Marimba music blares through Mechanic’s headphones.
THE CHASE - BACK TO SCENE
The limo blocks the road. Charlie skews off, jumps the curb,
lands hard onto sidewalk.
ZOOM INTO rear tire. Screw pops off.
Charlie penetrates water cloud, blasts sopping wet out other
side.
He rides over several squealing pedestrian’s feet.
He triggers the rear brake handle. Nothing. Presses it
repeatedly. No use. He looks up terrified at the rows of
diners seated at tables before him.
He swerves between two cafe tables. Knocks tray out of
waiter’s hands. Gets splattered with spaghetti. Slams against
bar supporting awning. The awning smothers him and patrons.
He rips through other side...
Sees the back of a 400 .lb Obese Woman up ahead. He drags his
boots on pavement...the rubber soles burn. He’ll collide into
Obese Woman any second. He squeezes the front brake
hard...Sails over handlebars. Obese woman brakes his fall. Vrod
drives up her giant butt crack. Parks itself.
CHARLIE
(rolls off her)
Thank god for fat women.
55.
He mounts Harley, triggers reverse gear. The tire tears at
pavement. Smoke riffs. The 700+cc engine finally wrenches
H
arley from between Obese women’s ass cheeks.
The fire hydrant shoots its geyser of water over radiator
busted Limo. Teitelbaum emerges out limo’s back door, stomps
towards cafe.
Water floods the sidewalk. Waitress emerges with Strawberry
Nut ice cream, slips in puddle. Ice creams sails through air.
A single maraschino cherry lands on Teitelbaums’ whipped
cream-covered yarmulke.
EXT. KAYLA’S HOME - DAY
Charlie roars the V-rod up a private cul de sac leading to a
fancy home. He yanks the front brake handle, skids the V-rod
to a full stop dragging his feet. Kayla emerges in a red
house dress, tramps down walkway lined with shrub roses.
Charlie turns, taking off his helmet.
KAYLA
What are you doing here so early? I
told you four.
CHARLIE
Three fifty, actually. Anyway I see
you were anxious. Ready and waiting
by the door for my arrival.
Kayla checks her watch, looks down the cul de sac then back
at Charlie.
KAYLA
Is that spaghetti?
She dusts off his shoulder.
KAYLA
You’re wet.
CHARLIE
Pipe burst on the street. Come on,
get on. I got matching helmets.
(hands her a helmet)
KAYLA
Since when do you own a motorcycle?
56.
CHARLIE
Not a motorcycle, Darling. It’s a
chopper.
(he saddles the chopper)
She checks her watch again. He cranks the engine over.
CHARLIE
Getting on or what? You got five
seconds.
KAYLA
Wait, I -
CHARLIE
Three seconds...
(cranks the engine)
Her short skirt hoists as she lifts her leg over the V-rod.
CHARLIE
Hold on tight. Back brakes are a
little dodgey. Like nonexistent.
KAYLA
(putting on helmet)
What - ?
(Bike roars down road)
E
XT. BEVERLY BLVD - INTERCUT
Fire hydrant still gushes water in background. Teitelbaum
sits at outside cafe table, drinking coffee. Irving emerges
from cafe, sits.
IRVING
Mom said Kayla left with the
English man.
TEITELBAUM
(spills coffee)
Vantz.
At the next table, cell phone RINGS...Diner answers.
Teitelbaum shifts uncomfortably. Behind him another cell
phone RING. Then another. RINGS fill Teitelbaum’s ears.
Everywhere he faces, he sees a cell phone.
TEITELBAUM
(Sweats, shakes)
Take me home. Take me home.
57.
EXT. LAKE PARK - DAY
A sparkling lake surrounded by California oak trees, wild
sage, manzanita.
Lugging V-rod’s saddlebags, Charlie leads a blindfolded Kayla
to a spot beneath an oak tree. In the background, lake
enthusiasts row numbered boats.
MALE VOICE (MEGAPHONE)
(Off-screen. Distant)
Number 13 your time is up.
Charlie lays out a picnic blanket, digs into saddlebags for
more items. Spreads out an assortment of cheeses, cutting
board, grapes, wine. Takes Kayla’s blind fold off.
KAYLA
(gazes at lake, trees)
Wow. This is nice.
EXT. HIGHWAY - INTERCUT
Mounted on roof of freightliner truck, Percy in tattered
toga, unkempt hair, sees the LAKE PARK SIGN turn-off.
Percy sprints across cargo trailer roof. Leaps. Drops to
ground, runs, stumbles head over heels down hillside onto
road below. A Sedan heads straight at him. He picks himself
up, slight despair shows as the car heads...THROUGH HIM.
A second later, as if karate punched in the stomach by car’s
energy trail, Percy gets yanked back. OOMPH!
EXT. LAKE PARK (ENTRANCE) - DAY
At open gates, Percy looks down to glowing blue light marking
threshold. He peers down paved entrance, at trees, sees a
distant Golden Cupid dashing from tree to tree. This one has
long hair. A Tarzan quality. Too distant to see him clearly.
FURTHER DOWN
Percy emerges through foliage, climbs up iron gate, down to
other side. Creeps past sage brush, scampers from tree to
tree. Takes refuge behind a large oak.
58.
PFFFT! A golden tipped arrow tears the wood beside his head.
Percy ducks. He jogs deep into woods, dodges branches, vaults
t
ree trunks...
HIKING TRAIL
Squirrels scurry across the lonely dirt path, followed by
Percy who dives into a bush.
Hidden, Percy clamps his mouth on piece of his toga. He hears
FOOTSTEPS TRAMPLE gravel very nearby. His eyes cut through
twigs, make out a pair of pedicured golden feet in Roman
sandals. Percy gulps.
The feet near his hiding spot. Percy chews on toga.
Further down the trail a bird FLAPS its wings out of a nearby
nest.
The feet leave. Percy relaxes.
OAK TREE - INTERCUT
Kayla, Charlie lay sprawled out on blanket. Facing away, head
to head, they feed each other grapes. Other couples make out
at different spots nearby. One couple has a boombox playing
love ballads.
KAYLA
How many women have you slept with?
CHARLIE
Including this morning? About 7000.
KAYLA
You never give me straight answers.
How can I marry you if you’re never
serious.
CHARLIE
Why do you have to ask something
like that anyway?
KAYLA
Why do you want to marry me?
CHARLIE
Because you’re beautiful,
sensitive, and stinking rich. You
know I only want you for your
money, right?
59.
KAYLA
There you go again. Never serious.
CHARLIE
(laughs)
I’m glad you like it.
KAYLA
I can never figure you out.
Boombox nearby plays U2’s “BEAUTIFUL DAY.”
KAYLA
I love this song. Sing it with me.
CHARLIE
You know I don’t sing. It terrifies
me.
KAYLA
Why?
CHARLIE
The truth? Okay, when I first moved
out here. I rented a room in Silver
lake. Big house. Five guys lived
there. I just didn’t know until the
first night they were five gay
Filipino choir singers.
KAYLA
You’re kidding.
CHARLIE
No, I didn’t do the math. Five
guys. Four rooms. I thought the
owner of the house - a big fat 50
year old chef was maybe sharing the
room with his 18 year old son.
Later I heard this spanking through
the vents...It wasn’t his son.
KAYLA
Ugh.
CHARLIE
Anyway, first night they threw me a
humiliating welcoming karaoke
party, made me sing Boy George’s Do
you really want to hurt me. I vowed
never to sing in public again.
60.
KAYLA
Get over it. Sing this with me.
(cups hands into make
believe mike)
Charlie won’t sing.
KAYLA
You’re no fun.
Behind boombox Percy squats, peeks around tree. Frantically
searches tree line for Tarzan Cupid.
Percy sees Kayla, Charlie on blanket. Charlie says something
funny. Kayla laughs. Percy seethes.
A wasp lands on flower. Prances. Takes off. Percy follows the
wasp’s flight to a nearby nest hanging on tree branch. He
turns, sees Kayla playfully punching Charlie’s arm. A smile
on her face.
Percy digs his sandaled feet into sides of tree, scales.
Slips across tree branch to nest. Wasps circle his head, as
he unzips compartment on bumbag, takes out his last
photodiode chip, clips it onto wasp nest. Red light blinks...
OAK TREE - INTERCUT
Charlie pours Kayla another glass of wine. An ominous rushing
sound in background. A Synchronous rhythm. Commands both
their attention. Couples dash through the trees, head to the
lake. A giant swarm of wasps heads in their direction. They
don’t think twice about it. Run!
Kayla, Charlie hand in hand scamper for the lake, passing
other frantic lovers.
The swarm rears behind them, gets closer. Charlie looks
behind him, horrified. They won’t make it. An Out of shape
c
ouple lagging behind get stung.
The swarm hovers behind them as Charlie, Kayla make a diving
leap into lake. Wasps skim water surface, dance a while
before departure.
Below water, Charlie, Kayla, adrenaline pumping. Hormones
racing. Kiss.
They break the surface, sucking each other’s lips.
61.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie in his underpants, eyes narrowed at screen. Coffee to
his lips.
CHARLIE
Good on ya Charlie me boy! I
couldn’t have done better myself.
EXT. LAKE PARK - INTERCUT
Percy cusses, stamps the ground. PFFFT! An arrow penetrates
his Adam's apple. He gurgles, tugs at it. Across the lake he
can just make out Cupid’s golden athletic figure seated on
head of row boat #15. Cupid readies another arrow.
Wasps swarm around row boat. The Rower panics, flips boat
upside down. Cupid misfires into air as he flops in water.
Capsized row boat floats.
MALE VOICE (MEGAPHONE)
(distant, off-screen)
Time’s up. Come on in number
51...er number 15 are you having
difficulties?
Percy scrams. Misfired arrow sticks in ground before him. He
swerves it, continues towards tree line.
EXT. LAKE PARK (ENTRANCE)
Percy snaps the arrow head. Dabs his wound with cotton ball.
He takes out his ticking pocket watch, checks the time...
PERCY
(looks up)
Forgive me, for I’m about to sin.
PFFFT! Another arrow sails through bars, pierces his back.
EXT. INGLEWOOD GHETTO - SUNSET
Orange light cracks through smog blanket in sky. Percy
traverses bad neighborhood. Crushed cars on blocks. Burned
out mattresses on sidewalks.
Percy drifts up cluttered walkway to dilapidated crack house.
62.
CRACK HOUSE
A Solo HARP rendition of “ANGEL OF MUSIC” adds a touch of
irony to the panelled empty interior. Amber light slants
t
hrough cracks in wooden boards, penetrates the gloom.
Percy enters, creeks up the stair case to...
CRACK ROOM
Asbestos shingle siding lines the walls. A melting pot of
diverse ethnic crack heads, heroine addicts, extremely cheap
whores also line the walls.
In the center an Angel “Harp” (50’s) plucks the strings of a
tall triangular 45 stringed harp. He wears dark sunglasses,
waves his head side to side in harmony with the melody.
HARP
What brings ye’ here, my brother?
PERCY
I need to become human.
HARP
Aye, ye’ seek human dust. I have
it.
PERCY
I just want to be human for an
evening. How much do I need?
HARP
How much can ye’ afford?
Percy hands him his bumbag. Harp unzips it, peers in.
HARP
Wha’ dye wa do somethin’ like this?
It’s those Krispy Kremes on Century
an’ Crenshaw isn’t it? God forsaken
place. Responsible fur aw mah
customers.
Harp takes out of his frock a dime bag of white powder, along
with a handheld silver cased mirror.
Percy looks around the room, watches Junkie slap his vein.
Base Head lights a pipe.
63.
Fight breaks out among two crack heads in background, as Harp
sprinkles human dust on mirror, cuts it in two lines.
HARP
(re crack heads)
Drugs an’ alcohol cloud clarity.
Their angels huv’ abandoned them.
They huv’ no hope. Jist tha melody.
(plucks harp strings)
Percy stoops, snorts one line of Human dust, then the
other...He stands, feels a rush of blood to the head. Wipes
his nose. His body tingles. He falls flat on his ass.
Just the junkies, crack heads fill the room. Some observe
their new dirty, ripped toga wearing intruder. Percy strokes
the decayed wood floors. Feels his hands.
HARP (V.O.)
(echoes)
Welcome tae the real world.
That’s touch. Different from our
sense of touch. Creates many
pleasure sensations. Wait til ye
use the taste sense. It’s out of
this world. I won’t e'en get into
masturbation.
Percy doubles up. Severe stomach pains.
PERCY
What’s happening? I feel pain. Why?
HARP (V.O.)
You’re hungry. Got tae eat.
PERCY
That would be two rules broken in
one day. I’ll be sent to the pit. I
won’t eat.
(stomach rumbles)
I refuse to eat.
Percy clutches his pain, stands. A crack head wonders who
he’s talking too. Harp music plays again.
HARP (V.O.)
Go on, give ye’rself a treat, lad.
PERCY
(totters to exit)
You’re a cruel angel. I hope you
rot in the pit.
64.
HARP (V.O.)
Guid day, lad. Mine’s a grottie
job. But some angel’s got tae do
it.
(plucks harp tune)
STAIRCASE
The sweet melody continues as Percy dizzily descends
staircase, falls through broken step, collides down the rest
of the steps.
He lays in a heap at bottom, groans. A used hypodermic needle
sticks out of his forearm. He yanks it out, winces.
EXT. CUL DE SAC - NIGHT
Kayla hugs Charlie’s waist as they roar up the road wearing
matching Harley Davidson rain suits. Charlie applies front
brake, skids, drags his boots to a full stop. The rubber
soles all worn down. Kayla gets off V-rod.
INT. BMW - NIGHT
Irving drives Teitelbaum up the Cul de Sac as they glare at
Charlie roaring past. He gives Teitelbaum a grin. Teitelbaum
cuffs the back of Irving’s head.
TEITELBAUM
Your fault.
IRVING
How can it be mine? If you’d have
had a cell phone. You could have
called the lady sooner.
TEITELBAUM
No cell phones. I’m genetically
predisposed for Cancer.
IRVING
What makes you say that?
TEITELBAUM
Cousin Yonah. Dead. Cancer.
Granddad Schlomo. Dead. Cancer.
Aunt Esther. Dead. Cancer. Isaac,
Aaron, Jaco. The list goes on.
E
veryone in my family gets cancer.
65.
IRVING
You’re not going to get cancer.
TEITELBAUM
I know I won’t. No carcinogens in
my diet. I don’t smoke, don’t eat
high fat foods. No nitrates,
especially bacon. Cancer is out to
get me. I’m not going to let it.
Stup ir!
(looks in air)
You hear? You won’t have me.
Irving shakes his head.
INT. PARLOR (KAYLA’S HOME) - NIGHT
Teitelbaum prays on a divan in a room of mahogany furniture.
Mom dressed up for a ball, joins him on Divan with a plate of
fried artichokes. Teitelbaum, munches on one of the golden
crisp leaves.
TEITELBAUM
Delicious, Mom. As always.
MOM
This Charlie is becoming quite the
pest. I don’t know what she sees in
this...shaygetz.
TEITELBAUM
Don’t worry, Mom. I have a plan in
operation to get him out of our
lives forever -
(He looks up, astonished)
Kayla walks into room in closely knitted evening dress.
KAYLA
Shall we leave?
TEITELBAUM
Artichoke?
(offers her his)
EXT. SIDEWALK - NIGHT
Percy wonders among humans, looking like a bum in dirty white
rags. Used to walking through humans, he bumps into them,
gets pushed around. He checks the time on his pocket
watch...shakes his head.
66.
PERCY
I’m late. I’m late.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie sips a cup of coffee, reads the computer screen.
He checks the wall clock, where the pigeon flies across. The
clock has stopped.
CHARLIE
Shit.
He checks his watch. Doesn’t work either. Water damage. He
rushes to the bedroom.
The Pigeon lands on sofa, bobs its head, eyeing the laptop.
Tony Curtis stalks Pigeon at sofa’s base.
Charlie returns with alarm clock, sets it for midnight. The
time ticks. He places it next to laptop. He hears a
mechanical buzz outside window.
OPEN WINDOW
Charlie pokes his head out.
CHARLIE
Who’s that down there?
He sees a vagrant figure emerge from cardboard box, beneath
fire escape, slings his cup of coffee at it. Bag Lady
shrieks, conceals her face.
CHARLIE
Piss off!
(shuts window)
EXT. BEVERY BLVD - INTERCUT
Percy clutches his rumbling stomach as he passes Hotdog
vendor. He stops at pizzeria window, drools on glass as a
little girl eats a pepperoni slice. The Owner emerges, shoos
him away.
Percy, dazed, stumbling. Cold. Lurches to...
67.
ART HOUSE MOVIE THEATER
He huddles at entrance as Jewish groups stream through.
Followed by Charlie. Percy trails. Usher blocks his entrance,
a
rms folded, looks him up and down with disgust.
CINEMA
Mom, Kayla, Teitelbaum sit in middle row. Among yarmulke
covered heads, Charlie sits in back row, munches on pork
rinds. Off- screen TYPING. Charlie rubbernecks his
surroundings.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
Let’s see what’s around you Charlie
boy? What...can we do?
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie watches screen. TYPES some more. A list of what
Charlie sees, types itself out on...
SCREEN
PROJECTIONIST (20s) SKINNY FEMALE(30s) BALD MALE (40s)
Lights off. Chattering dwindles in the seats.
CINEMA - INTERCUT
Hush hush. All quiet on the rows. Popcorn here and there.
Charlie crunches his pork rinds. Gets a glare form Jewish Guy
next to him. Charlie offers him pork rinds. He frowns, shakes
his head. Charlie offers a Slim Jim. Screen curtains open.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
Everyone get ready, the shows about
to start.
MOVIE SCREEN
Klezmer music plays on soundtrack. Credits roll on screen:
For my greatest love, Kayla. 100% Jewish Productions
Presents...
68.
BACK TO SCENE
Teitelbaum catches Kayla’s reaction. Mom smiles.
CHARLIE (V.O.)
That wanker. Alright, I’ll let you
slide with that. This will be one
shitty dedication, mind you.
Off-screen TYPING.
PROJECTION ROOM
Seen through the glass, the Projectionist stands up from his
chair as if pulled by marionette strings. His arms flap
unnaturally towards the spinning reels...
CINEMA SCREEN
“KOSHER CABANA starring Zalman Gelfite, Fanny Borach...”
The rest of the credits speed up. No time to read.
Actors show on screen in a cabana setting. They run around,
move faster, jerkier than a Charlie Chaplin movie. They speak
rapid Yiddish in chip monk voices.
Audience members laugh. Then the action slows to a deathly
pace. Actors trade Yiddish lines at super low frame rates.
Making them sound like monsters. More audience laughter.
Teitelbaum turns, scans the projection booth.
Rapid off-screen TYPING.
Bald Male behind Teitelbaum, sweats profusely, rocks back and
forth. He turns red. Finally can’t resist any longer. Stands,
s
plashes his coke on Teitelbaum’s head.
Teitelbaum springs up from his seat, faces the man. Bald male
shoots out vomit worse than the exorcist, splashes chunks on
Teitelbaum’s suit. Teitelbaum rushes down the row of seats,
trampling giggling movie watcher’s feet. Skinny Female trips
him. He thuds to the ground, crawls...
Charlie cracks up along with the rest of the crowd. Mom,
Kayla, try to keep their lips sealed, can’t help themselves.
They bust a gut at the movie screen.
69.
MOVIE SCREEN
Alternates between rapid motion, ultra slow motion during a
sex scene. Between rapid Yiddish sex talk, slow panting.
Projector bulbs explode. White out.
CINEMA LOBBY - INTERCUT
Usher in underwear struggles against his bonds - strips of
Percy’s toga around arms, legs, gagging his mouth. Percy in
Usher’s jeans, shirt, but still wearing his sandals takes
money from Usher’s wallet, snorts another line of human dust,
leaves Usher tied behind curtain.
BATHROOM - INTERCUT
Teitelbaum, his shirt sopping wet, dries the yarmulke under
hand drier. Percy enters. Dying for a pee. He unzips,
sprinkles the urinal.
PERCY
God that feels good.
(to Teitelbaum)
I know who caused your movie fiasco
in there...It was Charlie.
TEITELBAUM
(as if it were cuss word)
Charlie.
PERCY
He needs a lesson taught right now
before he steals your Kayla. I
recommend you form a Jewish posse.
Reform his anti-Semitic ways.
TEITELBAUM
Why are you helping me?
PERCY
(shakes, puts it away)
Let’s just say he owes me for a
considerable amount of pain caused.
Guilty of creating a hostile work
environment.
TEITELBAUM
You’re a script reader too?
70.
PERCY
Something like that.
(zips up fly)
Percy yowls as hairs get stuck in zipper.
EXT. MOVIE THEATER/ INT. CINEMA - INTERCUT
The crowd grows restless. Kayla’s cell RINGS. She answers.
Charlie stands at the corner of the movie theater. Behind him
two Orthodox Jews, VAAD (40s) PAVEL (20s) wide brimmed hats,
curls, the works, lug across their backs a large woven carpet
roll.
CHARLIE (ON PHONE)
Hey. I’m here. Snuck into the back
row. I’ll meet you out front to
rescue you from all this, my little
Disney princess.
Jews pause in front of Charlie, unroll the carpet in front of
h
im.
CHARLIE
(to Jews)
Oi, do you mind?
(to Kayla)
Cough if you read me...over.
Kayla coughs, hangs up. Mom stares suspiciously.
The two Jews punch Charlie in the face through carpet...
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie topples off the back of his seat. Out cold. Pigeon
descends on table, pursued by Tony Curtis.
EXT. MOVIE THEATER - NIGHT
Vaad, Pavel casually perambulate up the side walk, once again
lugging the carpet roll across their backs. Charlie’s feet
stick out one end...A boxy Astro van screeches up to the
curb. Back doors open. Another Orthodox Jew, Mikhail (30s)
receives the carpet. All climb in. Doors shut.
On the back of the van, reads: “Adler’s Operation Magic
Carpet - Cleaners.”
71.
The Van screeches off.
BLACK
Motor ticks, blended with speeding cars on a highway.
Charlie’s eyes flutter open, see Arabian carpet fibers. He
groans...
VAAD (O.S.)
(Muffled Yiddish)
Er zol kakn mit blit un mit ayter.
PERCY (O.S.)
Quick. He must be kept unconscious.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie props himself on his elbows, clasps his killer
headache. Invisible blows pound his body...
INT. ASTRO VAN - NIGHT
In the van’s rear, lies Charlie rolled-up in full length
carpet. Vaad punches the carpet roll. The younger Pavel
stoops beneath the low roof, kicks it.
Percy hesitates, then joins in with a few elbows at Charlie’s
carpet covered face.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Pigeon lands on an unconscious Charlie sprawled out on floor.
The pigeon coos, eyes Tony Curtis nearing the laptop. Pigeon
flies for cat’s back, digs its claws in neck, pecks away...
EXT. MOVIE THEATER - NIGHT
A
happy Teitelbaum joins Kayla waiting outside.
KAYLA
Sorry about your movie. Mom told me
you had a surprise for me tonight.
I didn’t expect that.
72.
TEITELBAUM
The real surprise comes later. If
you will join me tonight.
She searches the street.
TEITELBAUM
Waiting for someone?
KAYLA
Just Mom.
TEITELBAUM
She’s with Irving, bringing the
car.
INT. ASTRO VAN - NIGHT
Lightning. Rain strikes the glass. Percy leans through
opening at front seats, talks to unseen driver. Mikhail sits
in passenger seat.
PERCY
(to driver)
Trains leave the station every 20
minutes or so.
VAAD
How do you make it past security?
PERCY
That’s easy. I know a secret way in
a few miles down. On foot we will
cross the bridge of invisibility.
This is hidden from security.
MIKHAIL
We put him in boxcar?
PERCY
No. That’s just in the movies. Box
cars are rare on freight trains,
and when you do see one. It’s
locked.
PAVEL
We brake lock?
PERCY
No, what you look for is a twin
stack. A container that overhangs
another below.
73.
PERCY(cont'd)
There’s always an eight foot square
tub underneath. Some have welded
iron floors. We hide him there.
PAVEL
How you know this?
PERCY
I traveled this way many times. In
twenty four hours he will be in
Albuquerque...Now, he must not be
seen or heard.
Pavel unrolls the carpet. Vaad takes off his stinky sock,
shoves it into Charlie’s mouth, seals it in with duct-tape.
They roll Charlie back up. Duct-tape carpet all around.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Pigeon flaps its wings on top of display cabinet. The cat
laps Charlie’s cheeks, paws his chin, until he stirs awake.
CHARLIE
(bad taste in his mouth)
Cute little fella.
(pets the cat. It purrs)
Charlie crawls towards laptop, feeling bruised, banged up,
yet there’s not a mark on his body. He takes a seat again,
watches the screen automatically scroll. Words type
t
hemselves.
SCREEN
PERCY (O.S.)
He’ll be very thirsty if the train
stops in the desert.
BACK TO SCENE
CHARLIE
Who the Hell’s this guy?
(types. Waits.)
I can’t control him either. Must be
another Jew. Come on Charlie what
can you see or hear. Where are we?
Wake up. Wake up.
(More Typing)
74.
BLACK
SUPERIMPOSE following action on screen as it happens.
Charlie’s eyes open. He strains his head to see behind him.
Can’t move. REPETITIOUS BUMPS on the road. Cars overtaking,
register in his hears. Lightening CRACKS.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie watches the screen.
CHARLIE
Repetitious bumps?...seams in a
highway? Cars overtaking?
INT. ASTRO VAN - INTERCUT
Rain pelts against van. Percy gazes towards the carpet roll,
notices that it moves slightly. Suspicious, he elbows it.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie reels back, touches his face where Percy just hit
him.
CHARLIE
Ow. What bastard just hit me?
(another invisible elbow
to the face)
Stop it.
(another)
Bastard.
Charlie TYPES RAPIDLY OVER...
INT. ASTRO VAN - INTERCUT
...Charlie groans as Percy elbows him. SUPERIMPOSE TYPING as
the following action happens:
Driver in vehicle behind loses control of steering wheel,
crashes into them. Again and again.
75.
EXT. PASADENA FREEWAY BRIDGE - NIGHT - INTERCUT
Lightening flashes skies as Astro van crosses above the L.A
river adjoined to Midway train yard. A freight truck behind
plows into the side of the Astro. The van careens into safety
rail, flies off the bridge. Plummets to the river below...
The Astro whams into the water, floats down stream, slowly
s
inking. The back doors flap open...
INT. ASTRO VAN - INTERCUT
The van buckets side to side. Fills with water. Fallen tool
boxes jingle back and forth as Percy, Vaad, Mikhail, Pavel,
plus the Driver all grip to something. Charlie’s carpet
slides into river, trails behind. Thunder rumbles. Then
carpet sinks below the surface...
Percy freaks out. Moves to open doors. Lightening cracks.
Vaad holds him back.
VAAD
(re sinking carpet)
God has visited upon him the best
of the Ten Plagues.
PERCY
No! I can’t lose another client.
(dives into river)
UNDER WATER
Percy holds his breath, struggles against currents. Carpet
roll boots him in face. Percy straddles it, tears at the duct
tape...too much duct tape.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie stares back at the screen. Frightened. He scrolls to
an earlier scene. Types. Nothing appears on screen. He types
again. No letters appear on screen. Then Charlie coughs up
foul polluted water. He Gags. Grips at his throat. Falls to
his knees.
Pigeon, Cat stop their chase to observe Charlie drowning in
his living room.
Charlie hacks up more foul, brownish water from his lungs.
76.
UNDER WATER - INTERCUT
Lightening flashes illuminate dark pockets in the water.
Percy tugs at carpet edges. His sandaled feet dug in. He
strains. His last air bubbles stream from his mouth...
He swallows water. The carpet opens, Charlie whirls out,
flapping desperately towards the bottom. Percy grabs Charlie,
points him up.
As Charlie pulls for the surface, Percy’s eyes glaze over.
H
is body stiffens. Drifts. Dead. A last smile on his face.
LA RIVER - CONTINUOUS
Charlie brakes the water surface, rips off duct tape,
upchucks dirty sock with water, gasps for air. He swims for
the edge, coughing, disgorging water out his nose.
ARROYO SECO - INTERCUT
Astro Van washes up into a thinning stream, cracks into dry
basin cement base. All of the Orthodox Jews emerge from
inside. Adler the driver inspects his Van for scratches.
LA RIVER - INTERCUT
Sprawled on cement edge, Charlie peers out at flowing river.
Sees nothing. Not a sign of his savior, Percy. Then Percy
emerges from the water. Sits next to Charlie.
PERCY
You owe me big time.
Charlie does not see or hear him. Walks THROUGH HIM, climbs
up the basin.
EXT. HIGHWAY - NIGHT
Off-screen TYPING. Charlie dripping wet, stumbles out onto
rainy road. A Volvo screeches to a stop, reverses back. An
Old Lady winds down the window.
OLD LADY
You need a ride, honey?
Charlie amazed at such kindness, gets in. Shuts the door,
shivering. More Off-screen TYPING.
77.
OLD LADY
(face twitching)
Oh, honey. You’re freezing. Get out
of those wet clothes. Put this on.
She takes off her sweater, leaving herself with just a bra.
Charlie, shivering takes the sweater.
BACK SEAT
Percy takes out the last folded soggy square paper of human
dust. He opens it. The dust dissolved.
PERCY
Terrific.
The Old Ladies’ Guardian Angel, NEVILLE (60s) also in the
back seat leans in to Percy.
NEVILLE
You mind telling me what’s going
on? What are you and your client
doing in my client’s car?...He
better not be a serial killer.
INT. FERRARI - INTERCUT
Teitelbaum in his best suit, shiny yarmulke, maneuvers his
p
rized sports car through traffic. Kayla sits next to him.
KAYLA
So what’s the big surprise for me?
I’m dying of curiosity.
TEITELBAUM
Later. Patience, my child.
He brakes hard. Pokes his head through open window.
TEITELBAUM
Watch out you Schmuck! This is a
Ferrari!
SERIES OF SHOTS
- In L.A night traffic Percy crawls out of Volvo’s window.
Neville pokes his head out as Percy stands on roof.
78.
NEVILLE
Where are you going? You can’t
leave your client here. Fool.
Percy hops from Volvo roof to roof of Dodge vehicle.
NEVILLE
You’re mad. Come back. I’m putting
you in my report.
- Percy sits on top of Dodge vehicle’s roof in yoga position,
as it rides under freeway overpass.
- A Caravan up ahead indicates right to turnoff. Percy jumps
from Dodge roof to Caravan, clings onto side handrails. He
climbs up handrails to roof.
INT. CRACK ROOM - NIGHT
Harp plucks a sweet melody on his enormous harp instrument.
Crack heads in background OOOOOH, AHHHHH as they take turns
on a pipe.
HARP
(looks up)
Back so soon, Laddie? Need a hit?
Percy slumps before him. Spiritless.
EXT. BACK YARD (PARTY) - NIGHT
Dj music blends with the gossip, laughter of wealthy movie
crowd. Charlie pushes through ignoring an Executive who calls
his name.
He pushes on to Kayla standing by pool. Water fountain in
rear.
KAYLA
(tosses drink at him)
Don’t talk to me Charlie. I don’t
want to listen.
CHARLIE
Why? What’s wrong. Listen I was
kidnapped. That Bastard Teitelbaum -
Teiltelbaum butts-in. Grabs Charlie by the arm.
TEITELBAUM
Leave her alone.
79.
CHARLIE
Why don’t you tell her where I’ve
been for the last two hours. Eh?
Asswipe.
TEITELBAUM
Look she doesn’t have ears for any
of your lies. Englishman...She
knows.
CHARLIE
Knows? Knows what?
TEITELBAUM
Your dire need for an American
Green card. That’s why you who’s
never been in a relationship that
lasted more than a month needed her
to marry you. Part Green card. Part
for her money. You’re riff raff.
Father who owns butcher store.
Divorced Mother who sweeps office
floors...
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie types madly on keyboard.
CHARLIE
No. No. Come on people. Anyone! Hit
Teitelbaum. Kick him in the
bollocks.
He types. Nothing happens. Nothing he types appears on
screen.
CHARLIE
God damn it.
(thumps keyboard)
EXT. BACK YARD (PARTY) - NIGHT
Percy in a three piece suit appears behind Teitelbaum, Kayla.
CHARLIE
(to Percy)
You. Who are you? I thought you
died.
Percy whispers into Teitelbaum’s ear.
80.
TEITELBAUM
Oh, yes. Thank you. Er, where are
they?
Percy motions behind Charlie to Elderly Couple from earlier.
TEITELBAUM
Er, Mr and Mrs. Karkaus - ?
MR. KARKAUS
Kar-kouse. As in house.
TEITELBAUM
Mr... Kark-ouse. Is this the young
man you and your wife saw in the
elevator this morning with said
young hooker at the receiving end
of oral copulation?
MRS. KARKAUS
(points at Charlie)
That’s the man. That’s him.
Heartsick, Kayla shakes her head at Charlie.
TEITELBAUM
(to Charlie)
Well Mr. Hugh Grant. What have you
got to say for yourself? Hmmmm?
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie thumps his head on table.
CHARLIE
Shit. Tits. Bollocks.
The next scene’s action lines type across computer screen.
EXT. BACK YARD (PARTY) - NIGHT
Teitelbaum takes Kayla’s hand, leads her away.
CHARLIE
Kayla - ? Kay?
He tugs Teitelbaum’s jacket. Teitelbaum turns, snarls.
TEITELBAUM
I would be very careful where you
put your grubby fingers, putz.
81.
He shoves Charlie. Charlie shoves back. Teitelbaum grasps
Charlie’s lapels. The two men tug at each other’s jackets,
yank at each other, splash into pool.
W
atchers SHRIEK, GASP.
KAYLA
Stop it! Stop!
EXT. PARKING LOT - NIGHT
Squeaking in his wet shoes, Charlie reaches his Mini Cooper
parked on a front lawn next to expensive Beamers, Chryslers,
limousines. He watches Teitelbaum’s Ferrari pull out of a
space up ahead, then screech by with Kayla in the passenger
side.
Feet scrape behind Charlie. He turns.
IRVING
Talk to the hand.
Irving delivers a sledgehammer slap that lifts Charlie off
his feet. FREEZE FRAME this splendid moment.
MOMENTS LATER
Charlie’s eyes flutter open, see a pair of Classic Greek
sandals. Duncan in shirt, jeans, stoops to help Charlie to
his feet.
DUNCAN
Looks like you need a helping hand,
my friend.
CHARLIE
What happened?
DUNCAN
We won’t go through this again. I
warned you not to abuse the power.
That this would happen.
CHARLIE
What are you talking about? Where
am I?
DUNCAN
If you can read me. It’ll pass. The
magic will return. But you won’t be
able to turn back time.
82.
CHARLIE
What the hell are you yapping
about? Get away from me.
DUNCAN
Farewell, friend. Don’t let her get
away. One hour left.
Duncan treads away.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
On the screen reads:
One hour left.
Charlie looks at his ticking alarm clock. He stands, paces.
The pigeon flaps around the apartment. Tony Curtis sits,
watching. The pigeon craps on laptop.
CHARLIE
Fucking pigeon.
Charlie swats at it. Jumps on sofa. Jumps on table. Chases it
around living room until he collapses on floor. Worn down.
Pigeon swoops above, craps on his head. Charlie wipes pigeon
shit off his forehead. He looks up at Pigeon perched on
curtain rod. It coos. Charlie seethes. He looks at the
computer still automatically typing away action from the
f
ollowing scene...
INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT
Borne down, Charlie plods to his front door, where Bag Lady
sleeps on floor. She wears stocking over her shirt. Anal
beads hang around her neck as a necklace.
Charlie nudges the Bag Lady with his foot. She stirs awake.
CHARLIE
I told you to piss off.
BAG LADY
Don’t be like that, Charlie. How
about a hot cup of Coffee?
He keys open the door. Steps over her.
CHARLIE
No. No coffee. Get lost.
83.
Bag lady peers into his apartment. The aftermath of a party.
BAG LADY
What a dump. I can clean the place
for you. How about it? Clean. Cook?
He shuts the door in her gloating face at bottom of frame.
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie nears the laptop, takes a seat. TYPES a few words.
They appear on screen.
CHARLIE
Okay. Back in business. Charlie,
get up. You’re not giving in this
easy, mate.
More typing over...
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Charlie sprawled out on his couch in underwear. Wet clothes
on floor.
Then suddenly, as if a string pulled him up off the couch. He
sits.
CHARLIE
I’m not giving up this easy.
His nostrils flare. Eyes fire up with energy.
INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT
Charlie in a black outfit raps continuously on apartment
door. It opens. Through a cloud of smoke, keyboard piano
music, base guitar strumming in background, Marcus emerges.
CHARLIE
I need your help.
Marcus nods.
SERIES OF SHOTS
- Four FIGURES sneak over a wall at night.
- Hands trail an extension cord across gravel.
84.
- A Yamaha keyboard slips onto its stand.
- Dark Figures haul floor toms, a 22" kick drum over wall.
- A 30 watt "Bulldog" speaker gets passed over wall.
-
Dark hand flicks on mini gas powered generator.
INT. TV ROOM - NIGHT
Kayla, Mom sit on sofas, watching TV. A generator hums
outside their window. Then a KEYBOARD, SYNTHS broadcast on
speakers in background, followed by Charlie’s voice...
CHARLIE (O.S.)
(singing)
The heart is a bloom
Shoots up through the stony ground
There's no room
Kayla, Mom slide glass doors open.
EXT. BALCONY - CONTINUOUS
Kayla, Mom emerge out onto the balcony. Stupefied look on
Mom’s face. Kayla peers down curiously at...
BACK YARD
Charlie wears “fly” shades, dressed in black, singing with a
black dressed Caribbean backup band on piano, guitar, synths,
the works.
CHARLIE
(sings)
No space to rent in this town
You're out of luck
And the reason that you had to care
The traffic is stuck
Marcus strums an electric guitar. The sound gets slightly out
of tune. Marcus glares at Mixer. He shrugs, fixes it.
CHARLIE
And you're not moving anywhere
You thought you'd found a friend
To take you out of this place
Kayla shakes her head at Charlie, slight smile curbs at her
lips.
85.
CHARLIE
Someone you could lend a hand
In return for grace
Mom fumes.
MOM
American Idol, he’s not.
KAYLA
Quiet, Mom.
Then the Drummer beats his drum sets for the spectacular
chorus. FLOOD LIGHTS light up behind the band, blinding Mom,
Kayla.
CHARLIE
It's a beautiful day
Sky falls, you feel like
It's a beautiful day
Don't let it get away
A Chevy van screeches into back yard, high beam lights on. It
swerves onto manicured back lawn. Charlie turns, watches van.
CHARLIE
(voice cracks)
On the road...
Chevy van revs up, rolls down drum sets, keyboard. Band
M
embers dive for cover. Music dies.
Van doors slide open, out pour...JEWISH KLEZMER BAND.
Accordion. Tuba. Trombonist. Fluggelhorn. Folk Dancer.
No time to waste they form a half circle around balcony,
start right in with a revivalist Israeli folk song.
High up on balcony, Mom applauds. Kayla does nothing. Just
glares.
Folk Dancer frolics into Klezmer circle center, busts some
mean Yiddish Zhok dance moves.
Irving, Teitelbaum emerge driver side, sling their arms into
each others, prance into the circle, brake down with some
Russian Sher.
MARCUS
Hell, no. What’s this shit?
Drummer picks up his busted equipment.
86.
Keyboard player cradles his broken Yamaha.
CHARLIE
Get ‘em boys!
MARCUS
Hell yeah.
The Caribbean band lead by Charlie charge into Klezmer band.
The Klezmers swing, wield their dangerous equipment over
their heads.
Trombone clashes with Marcus’s guitar.
Irving bangs Keyboard player into Accordion.
Drummer kicks Fluggelhorn’s instrument from his hands.
Charlie wrestles Teitelbaum to ground. Teitelbaum grabs the
fluggelhorn brings it high above his head ready to crack
Charlie on the head...
INT. HALLWAY - INTERCUT
Under wall lamp, Percy opens a square folded paper, snorts
its white contents. He creeps down corridor, arrives at
Charlie’s front door. Kneels. Picks the lock.
In shadows, Bag Lady retreats. Scared. Trembling.
Percy frets at the door, until finally he unlocks it.
LIVING ROOM
Opening the door, Percy steps in, flicks light switch at
wall.
There in front of him...lies Charlie’s laptop.
PERCY
Aha! The stone in my left sandal.
Why didn’t I think of this earlier.
I
’m such an idiot!
(treads towards laptop)
I’m so stupid. Stupid. No, no.
You’re not stupid Percy. You’re
aware. Pat yourself on the back for
being aware. Don’t victimize
yourself.
(pats himself on the back)
You are aware.
87.
Percy grabs the laptop. Bag Lady enters with a war cry, fists
in the air. Percy turns as she football tackles him onto the
table. It gives way...
INT. LIVING ROOM - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie taps away at the keyboard, when the table collapses
under it. The laptop crashes on top. Screen flickers.
CHARLIE
What the - ?
A table lamp shatters across the floor...
INT. LIVING ROOM (THE PAST) - INTERCUT
Percy tosses Bag Lady against wall. It shatters across floor.
Bag Lady madly dashes towards him. Percy Ole’s her like a
bull fighter. She crashes into kitchen...
LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - BACK TO SCENE
Charlie turns to the crashing plate noises from his kitchen.
He turns to see Cat, Pigeon quietly staring too.
LIVING ROOM (THE PAST) - INTERCUT
Bag Lady emerges with a butcher knife. Swipes it at Percy.
Percy dodges, ducks. Kicks up table leg. Rams it into her
face.
She counteracts with a slice across Percy’s arm. Thrusts the
knife towards Percy’s head. It sticks in Table leg.
Percy ducks her next move, tosses her onto sofa. It topples
over..
LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Charlie spins on his chair to see the sofa topple over,
trapping Tony Curtis underneath. He squiggles his fat body,
can’t get through. Pigeon pecks at defenseless Cat’s nose...
Then an invisible whack sends Charlie across the floor...
88.
BACK YARD (SCREENPLAY) - INTERCUT
Teitelbaum whacks fluggelhorn over Charlie’s head, boots him
across the yard...
Marcus jams Folk dancer into Tuba.
Irving collides heads of Piano player with Keyboard player.
Trombonist, Accordion gang up on Irving’s victims, deliver
s
tomach blows.
Folk Dancer meanders across yard with his head stuck in Tuba.
Marcus kicks his rear.
Charlie’s cell phone skitters across the ground. It RINGS.
Teitelbaum reels back. Charlie picks the cell phone up.
Teitelbaum shrills. Charlie notices. He prods Teitelbaum with
cell phone...
Mom tosses flower pots over balcony.
A flower pot smashes between Charlie’s legs. Another to his
side...the last one cracks his head.
MOM
A hit! I sunk their aircraft
carrier!
KAYLA
This isn’t battleships, Mom.
Irving kicks away the ringing cell phone. Teitelbaum picks up
the fluggelhorn, stomps towards Charlie...
INT. LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Charlie lays sprawled on the floor, touches his swollen head.
Invisible slaps thrash his head from side to side.
Pigeon flaps across room, perches on laptop’s keyboard. Then
turns, coos at Charlie, before returning to keyboard. It
rapidly pecks away AT LETTERS ON KEYBOARD to form words,
which form sentences. The Pigeon types! With its beak!
SUPERIMPOSE over scene following action as it happens:
Charlie drags himself by hair into bathroom.
89.
BATHROOM
Charlie shrieks as he pulls his own hair like some weird
schizophrenic into bath tub. His hands get yanked by
invisible strings to taps, turning on the hot water...
LAPTOP
Pigeon pecks away with its beak at keyboard. SUPERIMPOSE:
Charlie pushes his face into water.
BATHROOM
Charlie’s face plunges into hot steaming water. Bubble
screams float to surface...
LIVING ROOM (THE PAST) - INTERCUT
Bag Lady emerges from behind Sofa. A new determination. She
treads towards Percy. The look on her face startles him. He
backs away...
She charges...
The air from his lungs escapes as she impales him with her
bony shoulders. The two collide into movie posters hung on
back wall. The glass cracks digging into Percy’s neck.
He gurgles, reaches for glass shards stuck deep. Bag Lady
t
osses books, screenplays, anything within her reach...
An Oscar replica sails across room, smashes living room
window...
LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Pigeon pecks madly at keyboard.
Charlie drags himself against living room floor. As he does,
Movie posters hung on wall magically collide onto floor. The
glass shatters... Books, screenplays fly across the room.
The Oscar replica sails over Charlie’s head, smashes living
room window.
Pigeon turns, coos. Sees open living room window. TYPES.
90.
SUPERIMPOSE:
Charlie throws himself out open window.
Charlie does exactly this. Picks himself up by the neck.
Choking. He lugs himself to open window. Throws himself
out...
EXT. BACK YARD (SCREENPLAY) - INTERCUT
Spent, the Klezmer band lie in a heap against their Caribbean
adversaries.
Charlie, Teitelbaum trade weak punches till they don’t have
an ounce of energy left. They collapse onto one another,
gasping.
Marcus swings trombone in air, ready to bring it full force
onto Irving’s yarmulke protected head.
Then suddenly the night sky lights up...with FIREWORKS,
commanding everyone’s attention: Kayla. Mom. Charlie. Marcus
pauses with the trombone. All watch with awe as multicolored
lights flash over their reddened faces. BIG EXPLOSIONS.
INT. LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Outside his window, Charlie grapples onto ledge with one
hand...He looks below, sees the hard concrete ground beneath.
A book sails across the room, knocks Pigeon on its back. A
few feathers sail.
It pops back up on its three toes, teeters, its back toe
balances it. Pigeon hears Charlie straining at the window.
Hops across room. Flaps onto ledge...Charlie seethes at the
Pigeon. It coos. Looks so cute. Even harmless. Then it pecks
C
harlie’s index finger. Draws blood...
LIVING ROOM (PAST) - INTERCUT
Percy swipes away the tossed objects, moving towards Bag
lady...He picks up a broken shard of glass...
LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Charlie hangs by his two strongest fingers. The Pigeon coos,
eyes his juicy succulent middle finger... Charlie gapes at
Pigeon. Dread spreads across his face...
91.
LIVING ROOM (PAST)
Percy. A new determination. Stalks Bag Lady with menacing
glass shard in hand. Fearful she backs away. Nothing left to
throw. No where to hide. Horror spreads across her face...
LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Pigeon pecks at Charlie’s middle finger. Charlie shrieks,
yells. Dangles. Blood spurts out of the gash on his finger,
sprinkles mad evil Pigeon...
LIVING ROOM (PAST) - INTERCUT
Bag Lady reaches a dead end. Back up against the wall. Percy
treads...Light glints off glass shard...
Bag Lady looks up, sees rotating ceiling fan. She charges.
Jumps. Higher than Magic Johnson. Cuts through rotating
blades. Yanks onto fan. It detaches. Sparks.
Percy cowers. Covers his face, as fan contraption swings down
full force. A jutting blade shoves his chest as he stumbles
to open window, keels over ledge...
LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
The fan fixture sparks in background. Pigeon’s eyes widen as
blade spins down towards it, knocks it out of window...
EXT. ALLEY (PAST) - INTERCUT
Percy picks himself off pavement. Dusts himself off.
WINDOW
Bag lady tramples broken glass, steps over cracking fan.
Peers out of window into street. She sees nothing.
ALLEY
Percy stares up at Bag Lady. She’s looking elsewhere down
a
lley, looking for him.
PERCY
Not again.
92.
He digs into his pocket for square folded paper. He opens it.
Nothing inside.
PERCY
He stiffed me. Cheap Scottish
bastard! Oh my god, I cussed. I
said a bad word. Fuck. O shit, I
did it again. God forgive me.
(His head jerks)
Asswipe! What’s wrong with me?
(head jerks again)
Tits, Ass, fucker.
(he covers his mouth with
hand, shocked.)
WINDOW
Bag Lady peers up Alley. Seeing nothing, she goes back
inside.
INT. LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Charlie pulls himself up over ledge collapses next to
sparking fan motor. Pigeon flies back in, alights on floor.
Hops to laptop.
CHARLIE
Oh no you don’t.
Charlie stands, bustles towards Pigeon.
CHARLIE
Bend this, Beckham!
He boots the pigeon into the back wall in a mass of
fluttering feathers. It careens off wall, lands next to Tony
Curtis trapped under sofa. He paws at it. It’s giant anaconda
like mouth opens. He ain’t called Tony Curtis for nothing. It
scoffs the pigeon down whole.
EXT. BACK YARD (SCREENPLAY) - INTERCUT
In a thunderous explosion of fireworks reaching the grand
finale, the final lights spell out the words:
Marry me, Kayla.
Light, surprise flicker over the faces of Charlie, Kayla,
Mom.
93.
Charlie, leans against Teitelbaum.
CHARLIE
Wow. I didn’t know fireworks could
do that.
TEITELBAUM
Not until tonight. The best
Pyrotechnicians in the world. Cost
me more than the ring.
CHARLIE
What ring?
Teitelbaum kneels before Kayla, Mom in awe standing at the
balcony. Kayla looks down at Teitelbaum.
TEITELBAUM
Marry me, Kayla. You’ve always been
the love of my life. You were my
first and will be my last.
He tosses up a velvet case. Kayla catches it. Mom snoops in
as Kayla opens the case to reveal...a sparking whopping 5.0
Carat diamond ring.
TEITELBAUM
Will you be my wife?
Kayla stares at Charlie. Then to Mom. Finally at Teitelbaum.
KAYLA
Yes.
Charlie slumps. Klezmers, Caribbeans get soppy, wipe away
tears. Even Marcus smiles. Charlie shoots him a cold glare.
MARCUS
Sorry, bro. But you gotta admit.
Those fireworks were impressive.
Can’t top that. Shit, I’d marry
him.
INT. LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - INTERCUT
Charlie on floor, reads from laptop’s screen. He glances at
his alarm clock. Five minutes to midnight. He slams the
laptop shut. Pushes it away. Outshined, he collapses onto
floor.
94.
CHARLIE
God. I know I haven’t thought of
you in like ten years. I know I
renounced your existence an’ all.
But if you make her come to me.
Perform some miracle. I swear I’ll
change. Make confessions. Church on
Sundays an’ stuff. I mean Synagogue
on Sundays an’ shit...
INT. BATHROOM (PAST) - NIGHT
Teitelbaum naked wearing just the yarmulke, loads bubble bath
into Jacuzzi's running hot steamy water. Tests the
temperature with a finger.
TEITELBAUM
(shouts)
It’s just right, my little
artichoke.
BEDROOM
Duncan treads past Kayla slipping out of her clothes behind a
an open closet door. She doesn’t notice him.
He reaches the answering machine. Takes out a small folded
piece of paper. Opens it.
DUNCAN
Sometime’s all people need is a
helping finger.
(snorts white powder)
He prods the answering machine’s button. Then rolls under the
bed.
Kayla, now naked turns to the answering machine’s beep. A
m
essage plays:
STRIPPER (FILTERED)
(on answering machine)
Hey Sidney, baby. Deposited your
check today. It bounced. Where’s my
money? You cheap Jew.
Kayla approaches the answering machine. It beeps another
message.
95.
STRIPPER (FILTERED)
Sidney. I need that money. Pay my
rent. Where are you? Buy a cell
phone, you cheap Jew.
Beeps again.
STRIPPER (FILTERED)
Tight Jewish dickhead. I’m being
evicted. I don’t sleep with no one
for free. Not for you. Not for all
the tea in England.
Kayla stops at the word England.
Teitelbaum emerges from bathroom as another message beeps on.
STRIPPER (FILTERED)
Sydney. Sydney. Jew. Jew. Jew. Why
don’t I just tell the English
fellow that you drugged him?
KAYLA
You paid her to sleep with him,
didn’t you?
TEITELBAUM
I did it for you. I love you. How
can you spend your life with that
dreck?
KAYLA
Better than spending my life with a
Trichen ah furtz.
TEITELBAUM
Shtup Kurva!
KAYLA
Kish m'in toukhes!
TEITELBAUM
Pierick!
Beneath the bed, Duncan smiles.
INT. LIVING ROOM (PRESENT) - NIGHT
Charlie still sprawled on floor amidst the mess of furniture,
broken glass, sparking fan motor.
96.
CHARLIE
God, I’m waiting. Show me the
miracle...Okay, fuck you then.
Just then the door opens. Kayla enters. Charlie bolts
upright.
KAYLA
What happened here? Another party?
Who’s that sleeping in the hallway?
CHARLIE
Long stories. All of them. But I’ll
tell you. First though, why did you
come back?
KAYLA
It’s you I want to be with,
Charlie. You’re unpredictable.
Spontaneous. Sydney is just boring.
Thinks money can buy anything. Like
the fireworks. The ring. What you
did. That took real chutzpah. That
took commitment.
CHARLIE
(looks up)
God, I take every bad thing back I
said about you. I love you God.
(to Kayla)
And you... well, let me show ya’.
They move into each other, tongues propelling so fast. Can’t
tell which one belongs to who. Then a RUMBLE. Earthquake?
Charlie glances at alarm clock. 5 seconds til Midnight.
T
ICKING.
The ceiling cracks open. A gaping black hole spreads across
it.
The Sofa drags along floor. Tony Curtis claws at rug as
upside down gravity tugs him across floor.
As if Charlie’s home became a black hole for the center of
the universe, every element, particle, atom converges to the
center of the hole, whips up into it. Charlie, Kayla hold on
for dear life. Get whipped through hole...
Hole closes up into iris.
MATCH CUT TO:
97.
CHARLIE’S EYE
Opening. The iris registers light. He turns, sees Kayla’s
face. He stretches, smiles. She awakes. Blows him a kiss.
CHARLIE
What happened last night? We
kissed. It was Dynamite. I don’t
remember anything else.
KAYLA
Me neither. It’s just a big black
hole. Did we have sex?
She looks under covers, sees she’s naked. Her thong hangs on
the ceiling fan. Charlie squirms.
CHARLIE
I guess we did. I’m on the wet
spot, again. If we’re going to get
married Kayla. There’s some
conditions.
KAYLA
Yes, I know you need a Green card
like immediately.
CHARLIE
No, I don’t mean that...You have to
be willing to sleep on the wet spot
now and again. Its mostly yours
anyhow.
(smiles)
KAYLA
Yeah, but it’s all your fault.
(snuggles up to him)
I have a condition too...You need
to get circumcised...Don’t worry,
Rabbi Edelman is a certified Mohel.
He’s great with babies.
INT. HALLWAY - DAY
Charlie kisses Kayla, exits into hall. Walks down stairs. Bag
Lady emerges from shadows, follows.
98.
EXT. PARKING SPOT - DAY
Charlie keys open his mini-cooper. Bag Lady surprises him.
CHARLIE
Jesus. What do you want?
BAG LADY
I stopped a burglary in your
apartment last night. Should thank
me.
CHARLIE
That’s what all the mess is about.
BAG LADY
Years ago I was attacked in my
home. I’ve lived in the streets
ever since. Yesterday, I felt
powerful for the first time in my
w
eak existence.
CHARLIE
Well, thank you. Now will you
please stop bugging me.
BAG LADY
I fantasize about you day and
night, Charlie. I’ve never felt
like this before. I must know
what’s it like to be kissed.
CHARLIE
No way.
BAG LADY
Please. Just one kiss. And I will
leave you alone.
CHARLIE
Just one kiss and you’ll go?
BAG LADY
One kiss.
CHARLIE
Tongue?
BAG LADY
Please.
99.
CHARLIE
Okay, I’ll do it, but you better
not ask me for anything else.
Bag Lady closes her eyes, puckers up. Charlie leans in, like
he’s about to eat a cockroach. Bag Lady yanks both his
cheeks, sucks him like a vacuum cleaner...
CHARLIE
Okay, that’s enough.
(wipes his mouth)
I think you cut my tongue.
Bag Lady’s grimy fingers leave dirt smeared on his cheeks.
CHARLIE
Okay, I did my part of the bargain.
BAG LADY
Just one more thing. Could you
perhaps grope one of my breasts?
CHARLIE
No!
BAG LADY
Okay, okay. No harm in asking. I’ll
leave now. Pack my stuff. Move on.
She trudges to her kart. Charlie wipes his tongue.
Viewpoint whips from Charlie...up through wisps of
clouds...high above Hollywood...L.A...past a Boeing 777 slows
down...to peek over a cloud, where Duncan, Percy kneel before
God still dressed as tourist.
GOD
Take my word, I don’t enjoy
suspending my much needed vacation
for you two kids. So here is what
is going to happen.
Percy gulps. Duncan bows his head low.
GOD
Duncan. I think you have learned
your lesson in the pit. Since your
escape, you have been fasting on
earth. You have made a believer out
of a non believer. That’s good for
the polls. One extra believer makes
a difference come election day.
100.
Percy glares God in the eye.
GOD
(off Percy to Duncan)
I will make you...Charlie’s new
Guardian Angel.
Duncan kisses God’s sandaled feet.
GOD
Percy, I will spare you the pit for
fasting. But for your other acts
and failure, I will demote you.
PERCY
Demote me. Demote me to who?
EXT. SUNSET BLVD - DAY
The Bag Lady swigs a bottle of whisky. Percy in a dirty toga
sordida reserved for the lower class Angels sits next to her.
He scratches his scruffy hair. Angelic fleas?
INT. OFFICE - DAY
Charlie whistles down hallway to Elevator, where Mini Skirt
presses the button. They share an awkward moment.
CHARLIE
I er, about yester -
MINI SKIRT
You know, we should -
CHARLIE
I’m sorry, you first.
MINI SKIRT
I can control my actions. I did
what I did yesterday, because I
wanted to. But that’s it. We should
forget it happened.
CHARLIE
It’s okay, Darling. I’m getting
married.
MINI SKIRT
You are? That’s great news. Who’s
the lucky lady?
Elevator doors CHIME OPEN. Mrs. Karkaus sucks off Mr.
Karkaus. She turns, chews a wad of...again not gum.
101.
EXT. PARKING SPOT
Meter Maid in neck brace, leg cast jots down mini cooper’s
license into hand held computer. Charlie’s gaze comes down
from a News Jetranger helicopter hovering above.
CHARLIE
Come on, lady. Don’t be mean. I was
two seconds late. See, there was
this old geezer
(She casts a cold glare at
the word geezer)
on the elevator getting a -
She hands him the parking fine.
METER MAID
Have a nice day.
Charlie gets into mini-cooper, seethes. Reverses out.
Suddenly cars from all sides swerve into the car, crushing
it. Charlie bounces from side to side with each crash.
A Nissan careens off another vehicle, knocks over Meter Maid.
She smashes through road blockade, plummets down open
manhole. Her shrieks echo. Then THUD!
Charlie crawls out of mini cooper’s window onto hood of Ford
vehicle, drops to ground, crawls.
Drivers emerge from their cars, troop like zombie puppets
towards a startled, banged up Charlie...
CHARLIE
What the hell is going on?
INT. BEDROOM - INTERCUT
Teitelbaum’s Guardian Angel Sanzen. Now naked, muffles cries
into a toga gag. He wriggles in white rope bindings, kicks
the floor.
Teitelbaum, four days growth of beard, hunches over his
laptop in a tattered bath gown, laughs his ass off. TYPES
madly.
Percy wearing Sanzen’s bright white toga, leans in to
Teitelbaum’s ear, shouts excitedly.
102.
PERCY
(jumping)
The chopper. Get the Chopper!
EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - INTERCUT
Charlie backs away from Zombie Driver puppets. Cars crash all
around him in background. Chaos!
The Jetranger news chopper heads directly towards him out of
control.
JETRANGER
Pilot has lost control. Grips control sticks like a mad man.
His face, body twitches. COPILOT speaks through receiver.
COPILOT
We got a jetranger going down. We
got a jetranger going down. We got
a bird going down in the city.
WILSHIRE BLVD
Litter, dust scatters around Charlie as he throws an arm up
in feeble defense. As the chopper descends, its shadow grows
around Charlie...
BLACK.
FADE OUT.
THE END
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